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Bang! The door slamms open and wake me up from my daydreaming in class. Oh my god! It's the soldiers from the Correction Department! They punish every student who breaks their law. Wonder who they......why are they looking at me? They approach me, grab my arms and pulls me out of the classroom. All the other students look terrified at me. I totally confused..."Why.....why are you ... I..... innocent..OUGHHH". They hit me hard in my belly. *Shut up bitch!". They tie my hands behind my back and lead me out in the school yard. "This is a mistake...... I'm....OOUUGBBBHHHHH". They hit me hard in my belly again. "Now liten you little bitch. Your sister has been caught working for the resistance, and according to the Family Act you will be punished too. Now just shut up!". "Sister?". I look at them in total confusion, "but I don't...". This time they kick me in my belly. I fall down on my knees in pain gurgling and coughing. "One more word,and we'll open your belly and slowly remove your intestines while punishing you! Want that?". Oh my god! They're reallygoing to punish me.....but what do they......We open the door and enters the school yard. All hope fails me. Two more soldiers holds a rope with a noose under the big tree in the middle of the yard, throws it over a branch and smiles at me. I dare not speak. Surely they must....

  
    
"By the law of the Family Act, Maria here will hang as a traitor since her sister betrayed the Government who protects you all from harm". The soldier shouts out to the crowd of students commanded out to witness. They always do that. Hang us in public, but I don't....Oh dear, they slip the noose around my neck and pulls it tight. The soldier approach me with a knife. I shake with fear....what's he gonna...."Now here's the deal". He looks straight into my eyes. His eyes are cold and merciless. I need to go to the bathroom."Now I show everyone what you are. If you scream or anything I'll continue writing "Bitch" on your belly, "Cunt" on your thigh and on and on until you stop screaming. Got it?!". I shaking with pain as he carved the word "TRAITOR" on my chest. I almost pass out, but I keep silent.My lips bleed, but I keep silent. "Good girl!". He smiles at me. "The last girl I had to go on and on, and she didn't stop screaming before i wrote "Do Me" on her ass and she passed out.....

      

Without any further ceremony the hoist me up in the air: The rope squeeze my neck but doesn't tighten up completely. As my feet leave the ground panic hits me. I kick and squirm and try to reach solid ground, but there's no relief to be found. I feel totally helpless and exposed to the crowd of students commanded out into the schoolyard to witness me. Oh my god! I'm being hanged! Strangled! Dangling by the rope! Suddenly he grabs my leg and lift me just the half an inch I need to draw a painful gasp of air, then he lets me down again, pulling my legs, strangling me so brutal.....he repeats the process over and over again. Oh lord....they're gonna make this last for a really long time....

    

Then something happens....my body start to shiver uncontrollably and I...oh my god.....I'm CUMMING.....oh sweet pleasure and pain...I'm shaking with nice orgasms as I hang helplessly......Never felt so weird and hot in my entire life....In my daze I hear voices far far away...."Hey! Its the wrong girl! Its Marie, not Maria, she jumped out the window and ran as she saw us comming. Caught her a few blocks down here. Take her down!" Stupid asses. I tried to tell you...I...."Never mind!". The soldier leader talks from a hundred miles away...."She's almost done. Look at her! She really enjoys this. We just let her hang. Don't worry Maria. We'll let you go through with this. Besides, releasing a girl when she's reached this level of her hanging is extremly painful to her as the blood rushes back into her brain. You just relax Maria, and we'll string Marie up next to you"

    

Marie cries and beg as they noose her, and then they hoist her up next to me. I hear her gurgle and strangle next to me, feel her kicking as our branch swings softly from her hard kicks trying to reach soild ground. Then she just start to shiver....Oh god Marie.....So happy you feel it too...Love to hang here next to you.....Let's just hang together, and maybe we both cum one more tiii......
This is a story that have been inside my head for..well...some time. Illustrated by the talent of etherealjelly:
www.deviantart.com/etherealjel…
All models are 18+ of course and participated vouluntary in this story, but learned that the next time they should read..oh, never mind..
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scyster Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2019
Love this, especially the "Never felt so weird and hot" part. Captures so well what some of us know to be a fact, which is that hanging, choking and suffocation can excite you in ways you never suspected before. :)
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utugirl Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2019
Thank you ❤️
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scyster Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2019
My pleasure!
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utugirl Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2019
Really hope it was..... ❤️
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scyster Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2019
* blush * ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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migoz2 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2019  Hobbyist Writer
Dark, twisted and so, so powerful! I love it
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utugirl Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2019
So happy ❤️
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migoz2 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2019  Hobbyist Writer
Me, too!
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anyone2016 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2019  Hobbyist Photographer
Love it! Great story, great artwork!
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utugirl Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2019
Thank you ❤️
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x--M--x Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2019  Professional General Artist
Ooooh... YESSS!!! Very hot and arousing... love the plot twist... and that they hang you both anyway... so extremely intense... both having the (last) orgasm of your life... And cool that you were hanged with my favorite character from Mass Effect... 😍❤
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samfellow79 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2019
Such a classy piece of writing 
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utugirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2019
Thank you ❤️
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Happy Birthday (Part 3.)�Well let�s get you up and swinging then.� He said sharply. He gestured towards his assistant. �I don�t won�t any mess with this one,� he said. The assistant nodded and Jenny could see that she was taking a tampon from the bag she carried. She was pretty, dressed only in a little skirt; her breasts exposed with sort of soft little buds for nipples.�I�m sorry,� was all the girl said as she pushed the tampon into its place. �It�ll help;� she paused once it was in and the guard fastened the final ropes around Jenny thighs, even as the executioner noosed her and pulled the rope a little tighter. �I hope those leg ropes are tight enough for you,� he asked. �We wouldn�t want you to hurt yourself.� He laughed and walked over towards the release lever which would operate the gallows.�It�s a pity that we couldn�t have enjoyed each others company a bit more,� he said but Jenny could see that he had released the lever and felt herself falling. He was right. The man may have been a sadist but the pain as the rope bit into her neck was agony and oddly she was suddenly glad of the tampon as she felt her bladder begin to leak a bit but oddly, even as she dropped, she realised that he could still breathe a little. She began to wheeze against the pressure of the rope, jerking her legs forward, then bending them at the knee to ease the pressure of the noose so that she could draw the oxygen into her lungs, even if, each time she danced, the noose closed a little tighter against her slender neck. Her breasts felt too heavy and she wished that she had worn a bra.She was sweating now, the pain within her chest almost unbearable; hr earlier sensation that she could still breath dissipating. Her vision seemed to be getting out of focus, as if everything at its edges were suddenly black; glimpses of vision. The Executioner smiling, grinning as he enjoyed her death, even as the warmth between her thighs seemed to become more intense. She began to tire, her legs, dangling now jerking spasmodically as she orgasmed.One of the guards suddenly pulling on her legs. She thought she could hear the executioner shouting at the man.�Pull on her until she passes out� he said. �She�s going to cum, if we�re not careful,� he added but Jenny could no longer really care. Only the warmth between her legs seemed to matter. She could feel her legs and arms twitching a bit; the fabric of her baby doll sticking to her.She was already dying.

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