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The constant bumps and jarring finally caused Denise to wake up.  She tried to reach for her eyes to rub them but she couldn't move her wrists, they were secured somehow.  She jerked her head up only to find that her neck was secured as well.  She attempted to twist and kick but her waist and legs were bound somehow.  She glanced around and discovered she was inside some sort of box and the ties holding her in place were plastic.

"You're awake," a male voice to her left spoke.

"What the hell? Where am I? Who are you?" Denise screamed.

"You're in the cab of my delivery truck.  You were sold a while ago.  I'm Anthony."

Denise struggled but the plastic ties were too strong.  She was completely naked except for the tag around her neck.  "Sold? What do you mean sold?"

"Do you not understand English? Someone came into our store and paid money for you.  That's what sold means."

"Where are my clothes? Who paid money for me? What kind of store are you talking about?"

"Your clothes were sold before you were.  I don't know their names, I just have an address.  And a shipping form.  It's a store that sells females.  You are a female, correct?"

Denise gasped.  "Yes of course I am can't you tell by looking at me?"

They stopped at a red light and he glanced over into the box.  "Yep. 100% female."  She got a good look at him too; he seemed nice looking, maybe in his 20's, dark hair, fairly normal.

"You said 'their names'?"

"It was a couple. A man and a woman.  The woman in particular seemed very excited with her purchase."

"Her purchase? You mean me! I have a name you know, it's D-"

"You had a name.  Now you have a number."  He picked up the clipboard with the shipping form on it.  "18 63 120 36 24 34 75."

Denise swallowed hard.  She'd heard that number before; it was the barcode on her tag.  "Is it just a bunch of random numbers?"

"Age, height, weight, bust, waist, hips, shoe size."

Denise shook her head, not able to decide if what she heard was good or bad.  "My name is D-"

He interrupted her again.  "18 63 120 36 24 34 75."

Denise gulped and was about to try again but decided against it.  "What about my friends? Where are they?"

"The others that came in with you? They've all been sold as well.  It's been a very busy - and profitable - couple of days."

"To the same people?"

"Oh heavens no.  The other two brunettes were sold as a pair to a rich Chinaman.  We've done a lot of business with him.  I overheard him saying they would make an excellent set of lamps in his bedroom."

"Lamps?" The shock in her voice was clear.

"Yeah, lamps.  You know I don't usually talk this much to the stuff I'm delivering.  Yeah, floor lamps, one on each side.  We don't ask the buyers what their intentions are but this Chinaman likes to talk. A lot.  And the blonde, she was the first one to go.  Another of our regular clients.  He collects 'bondage toys' so I am sure this is just another one of those for him."

"We are all just merchandise to these people, objects..."

"Yeah, sounds like it just figured it out." Anthony chuckled as they pulled up to another red light.  Denise could feel them stopping and decided this would be her best opportunity; she started screaming at the top of her lungs.  "And it is getting a bit too loud.  Let's take care of that."  He reached over into the box with a cloth and pressed it over her nose and mouth.

"Help! Help! He-mmmm!!! MMMMMMM!!" Denise's eyes widened as she struggled; in seconds her eyes relaxed and rolled back.

"There. Much better."

Just a few minutes later the truck pulled into its destination.  Anthony retrieved a hand truck from the back of the truck and carefully unloaded the box with its sleeping cargo, keeping it upright as he carefully wheeled it to the door and rang the bell.  An excited Melissa answered it.

"There it is!" she beamed, holding the door open as Anthony rolled the box in and set it up against a nearby wall.  Then he removed a small scanner from his belt and scanned the barcode on the shipping form.  Once heard a 'beep', he then scanned the barcode around Denise's neck, again getting the same 'beep'.  Denise's head was rolled forward but the rest of her was still secured to the back of the box with the plastic ties.

"All set.  It was just the one package, right?" he asked.

"Yeah, we took the other stuff with us when we left the showroom.  Do we get to keep the box?"

"Absolutely."  He slid the box away from the wall to show Melissa where the ties came through the back.  "Just take a pair of pliers and you can untwist these.  It's a two person job though, someone needs to be holding it on the other side.  I've heard some stories about people who tried to do it themselves...and once damaged there's no refunds."

"It's just like a Barbie doll box!" Melissa gushed.

"Indeed.  Our packaging manager used to work at Mattel.  Ok I just need you to sign here," and he pointed to the bottom of the form and handed her a pen.

"Okay," Melissa nodded as she signed.  "My husband should be home any minute so I'll wait before I take it out of the package."

"That would be wise. Have a good day."  And he turned around with the empty hand truck and walked out the door.



Denise woke up and rubbed her head.  As she looked around, she shook her head - what a nightmare!  She was in a bedroom, a really nice bedroom, like in a really nice hotel.  She was dressed in her full cheerleading costume, including her shoes, and completely free to move around.  She slowly got up off of the bed.

"Hello?" she called out.  "Is anyone there?" The nightmare felt so real.  She was with her three cheerleader friends, they had been knocked out, abducted, and sold like ordinary objects.  It wasn't real, obviously, she told herself.  She was in a nice place, she was in her cheer costume, she just couldn't remember how she got there.  Had they gone to a party, had she gotten wasted and passed out? Did some hunky guy carry her in here and let her sleep it off? It seemed like the most likely event.  She stretched her arms over her head and then walked to the door.

"Guys? Where are you? I had the strangest dream, oh my god you guys!" She opened the door, and walked out into the hallway.  "Hello?" she called out again as she walked by a full-length mirror.  "Ooooh," she giggled as she posed in front of it, doing a little dance.  "Mmm mmm mmm-MMMMMM!!!"

The flighty head cheerleader never saw the smaller woman coming behind her, she was too preoccupied with admiring her own reflection in the mirror.  She caught a quick glance at the short haired blonde woman as she was pulled back against the wall.  "MMMMM MMMMMM!!!" Denise gasped as a cloth was shoved over her face.  She bucked her body relentlessly trying to break free as the woman reached around with her other hand and grabbed Denise around the chest for leverage.  "MMMMM MMMMMM!!"

"Shhhh..." the woman whispered as she kept the cloth firmly over the busty cheerleader's face.

Denise fought hard but she was no match for the powerful knockout agent in the cloth.  "MMMMM...MMMMM...ohh god...ohh godd..." and Denise started to slide down to the floor, her tennis shoes making a squeaking sound on the concrete floor as the woman kept a strong hold of her.  

"That's it sweetheart.  Go to sleep."

Denise's butt hit the floor, her legs splayed out as her arms dropped limply beside her; she was out cold.  The woman pulled the cloth away and then took the unconscious cheerleader's head in her hands, tossing it from side to side to ensure she was really out.

"Look at you girl! So pretty. Yay!" And she reached down under Denise's arms, pulling her body slowly down the corridor.  As she did she couldn't help but laugh.  "It was just as much fun the second time around!"

THE END
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Jerrick99 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2018
I loved Melissa's excitement at having this merchandise delivered! Who wouldn't be happy with a sleepy cheerleader delivery?! 
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!! especially as I'm the cheerleader:)
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greent64 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, what a delightful story!  It's my first of yours, I'm usually too busy rendering and afraid of getting 
any more new ideas.  I'm very glad I broke the rules here, and look forward to the next ones!

The ending is brilliant, beginning with Denise, and us, believing it might have all been a dream, she was
back in her cheer outfit afterall, and ending with learning just how much Delilah loves her work! :D

And how much of a sucker young Denise was for mirrors  ;P
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
I still love mirrors :D
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greent64 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah I figured ;)
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Sterling557 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016
I love how Cheerleader Denise gets delivered in a Barbie Doll box.  A Pretty doll needs to be played with.

Great Story !  Fun to read.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!!! :D
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LostBrave Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:+favlove: :judge::judge::judge::judge::winner:
:love::reading:Enjoyed Greatly
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!!!
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Ultramichelle Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016
it was a amazing story. I loved how many times she was knocked out!

The mix between peril and humor was fantastic.  

the ending was particularly amusing - "It was just as much fun the second time around!"
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I struggle with endings but this one I was very happy with!
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PitchBLACK-Art Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The details about the delivery box are quite nice. I suppose she will come handy when Denise has to be shared between her different owners.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
great point! :)
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FairyPrincessJess Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016
When will Denise learn? This was a great story! I really enjoyed each part. The ending was great. And very neat idea for the barcode! Although to be honest, I would have mentioned the numbers earlier and have Denise shrug them off as random before finally getting their meaning revealed and recoiling in horror as she once again realises she's now an "it."

Hope that doesn't seem like I didn't enjoy. I just notice the critique request thingie below and figured a full on critique would be tricky.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I appreciate it! There's always going to be things like that and knowing about them will help me write better in the future :)
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FairyPrincessJess Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016
(Look at me! Giving feedback to you) Another thing I would have said was that she didn't really resist at all. But that's understandable and explained by those rules
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, that was something I thought about as I was writing. How much to resist and struggle even with the fear and everything :)
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FairyPrincessJess Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016
You did a fantastic job :)
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!!
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Cracoviia Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great story. Scary scenario but great :D The casual references to Denise and her friends as household items is chilling.

And the ending is excellent, especially as it's quite funny which makes the whole feeling of the story even more uncomfortable. It's like a guilty pleasure, I shouldn't be enjoying this happening to them but...it is fun to read :D And again, a really fun kncokout and capture scene, especially the 'Shhh...' part. very nice work :)
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! I'm really happy with it too :)
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dougiedee Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016
Well done.  I loved the recreation of the original kidnap.  I had to go back and check to see if you'd just rewritten it and nailed the little details again like the shoes squeaking, or if you'd just copy pasted verbatim.  It's a very nice conclusion to a great story.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!!! I took my time on this last chapter because endings are something I struggle with.
I'm really happy with how this entire story turned out!
I really appreciate all your comments :)
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dougiedee Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016
You're welcome, it turned out great.

I get the ending thing.  The build up and initial capture is usually my favorite element of erotic lit, and after it's over I always just want to leave it open ended, but I usually churn out some sort of ending.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I am exactly the same way!
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dougiedee Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016
I feel whatever happens after the damsel is captured is best left up the reader's imagination.  I've done the hard work for you, I've got her all helpless, now do whatever you want with her.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I do that quite a bit too, especially if I don't have any ending in mind :)
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TazLooking Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016
Sounds like Denise is still relegated to an "it"... The driver referred to her as "it" and the lady referenced "it" was just as much fun the second time!!!
I imagine the lady likes the power of controlling "it" with chloroform??? Maybe these folks may feed you??? No telling what else they have planned for "it"!
At least no one fed Denise to a large hungry carnivorous plant!!! Not yet...
Great series!!!! You were really busting out the chapters over the weekend! As usual, very nice work!!!!:) 
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I'm really happy with this one, as my multi chapter stories go this is one of my best I think :)
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TazLooking Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016
I am going to Fav this now that it is complete. I really enjoyed the entire series, it flowed very nicely throughout, nice work!!!:)
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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Rob66 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 8, 2016
I'm just sorry the story ended because I enjoyed every one if the 12 installments. Already looking forward to your next story. :) and thanks for the cameo. ;) I always wanted a blonde of my own lol
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FairyPrincessJess Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016
That was you?!
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Rob66 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016
:)  Guilty as charged  lol
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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AlexisFairchild Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was a fun story. Great job on it!
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! !
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Dimir3D Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Excellent final ... Poor Denise - a happy awakening and a terrible disappointment. = (
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!!!
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TimOrgano Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Very awesome story.

Poor old Denise. 
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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RenderPretender Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nicely done.  The entire story was very well written from start to end.  I also like the double twist ending there.  Dream, not dream, forced to relive the entire event again.

Thanks for sharing.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
you are very welcome!! thanks for letting me (or not) use you and her :)
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RenderPretender Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)  My pleasure.
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Gaira69 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Haha.....Denise doomed to live out her final moment of freedom like some combination of the myths of Narcissus and Sisyphus.  Priceless.

Emma and Ary are lamps?  I wonder if they are living lamps, forced to stand there, or they were robbed of their will through some hypnotic process or drug, or if they were just subjects of taxidermy?  Katie is a permanent bondage toy.  I wonder if she is ever allowed out of her restraints.

The Barbie doll box delivery method is priceless.  just like that ad with the guy packing up one woman and taking delivery of another....can't seem to find it now.  I would be torn......take Denise out to play with.......or leave her mint in the box to keep her value?  Then again a nice unboxing video of Denise for YouTube would be fun.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
would love to see the ad you are talking about! happy you liked it :)
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Gaira69 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Oh?  You didn't use that as a basis?  You've probably seen some of the other work on here that is based on it, and were inspired by that.  I'll have to double my efforts to find the original.  The delivery guy with the handcart is part of the ad, which made me think you had seen it.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
no I haven't!
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Gaira69 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Was a real commercial:

youtu.be/vvmNOspTbmM

Sexist.....but hot.
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