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There was a knock on the door.

"Come in."

Delilah pushed open the door to his office.  "You said you wanted to see me?"

"Yes," the man replied.  "I have something for you."  And he leaned over the side of his desk and picked up the glass box, handing it to her.

"Wow!" Delilah exclaimed, looking at the complete cheer outfit inside.  "This will get a place of honor over my mantel I think! Is this...everything?"

"Yes, every stitch of clothing it was wearing when you acquired it."  He tapped lightly on the desk.  "You've earned it.  That last delivery was your best so far. I've already sold the blonde and have potential buyers coming in today for the brunettes."

"I wish I could buy what was in this," Delilah mused, looking down at the box.  "The fun I could have!"

"I pay you well, don't I? What do you do with all your money?"

"Well I think we mentioned, Faye and I, we were looking at getting a van.  That Grand Cherokee is nice but it can only hold so much? So we have both been saving up for that."

"I see.  So how much do you have, if you could make an offer today?"

"Just the twenty-five grand you paid me for this delivery."

"Sorry, Delilah, that won't be enough.  I'd love to cut you a deal since you bring me such good product, but I can easily get three times that much for that one."

"I know.  And we are on the road so much, it's not like I'd have the time to enjoy it anyway.  It would just sit there like the elliptical I bought last year.  You should see how much dust is on that thing!  Don't buy exercise equipment if you don't have time to use it."  She turned towards the door.  "Thanks again for doing this, love the clear display box, that's a seriously nice touch!"

"You're welcome.  I look forward to your next delivery."


The man smiled as he opened the door and welcomed the couple inside.  He had changed his look, in place of the plain t-shirt and jeans he was now in a perfectly tailored navy suit.  The showroom he ushered them into was a bit more lavish than the 'check-in' room had been; there were nice chairs and tables set around the room, as well as some nice art on the walls.  The framed portraits were all of well-dressed and glamorous looking women.  In the center of the room was a long piece of furniture, larger than a coffee table and covered over with a dark red cloth.

He showed them to a pair of very nice upholstered chairs, taking note of their appearance.  The man was average height, dark hair, wearing a sport coat and khaki slacks' he seemed very laid-back and blase, which was in stark contrast to the woman, who had fiery red hair that was up in a bun, a form-fitting black dress, and knee-high black leather boots.  He couldn't decide whether her appearance screamed more 'vampire' or 'dominatrix'.

"May I get you both something to drink? Champagne perhaps?"

"That would be lovely," the woman replied.  "Don't you think so Guy?"

"Sure.  Champagne, thank you."

The man returned a few moments later with two champagne flutes.  He took a chair across from the couple.  "Thank you for coming in today.  When I saw your ad on Vbay earlier I thought it best to call you in." He glanced at a card in his hand.  "Guy and Melissa, right?"

"That's right," Melissa answered.  "I have to admit I never expected such a quick response when I put in our request for a 'generic big boobed cheerleader type'.  

"Timing is everything in my business.  I just happened to get such an item in stock yesterday and you're the first potential buyer."

"Wow, that is incredible!" Melissa exclaimed, turning and giving Guy a playful punch in the shoulder.  "Isn't it honey?"

"Ouch.  Yeah, it almost sounds too good to be true.  Like that girl you brought home on Halloween that turned out not to be a 'girl' at all?"

"He/she looked pretty, what can I say? I still had my fun.  Even if you didn't."

Guy rolled his eyes a bit.  "Yeah I'm really starting to wish I hadn't taken the afternoon off now."

The man could sense a bit of impatience in Guy's voice.  "You didn't come all this way just to talk. Let's show you what you came to see."  He stood up and walked over to the center of the room.  Guy and Melissa put down their glasses and followed him.  The man pulled away the cloth, revealing a glass display case; lying inside the case, fast asleep and wearing nothing except the tag around her neck, was Denise.

"Wow," Melissa's eyes lit up with excitement.  "Look at that! Guy, look at that!"

"It's...very nice."  He pulled Melissa aside for a moment.  "You realize if you show too much excitement we're going to end up overpaying again? Just like we did with the BMW?"

"Hey, you liked that car as much as I did!  I can't help it if I like what I see!"

"Just...try to save it till later, he is gonna gouge us if we don't."

"Fine, I'll try, but THAT is exactly what I've been looking for and you know it!"

They turned back to the man, who was smiling, pretending he hadn't heard any of their conversation.  

"That...that is pretty much what was advertised I think," Melissa calmly spoke, doing her best to hide her elation.

"It should be, considering it IS a generic big boobed cheerleader.  As I mentioned, I just acquired it yesterday.  You're the first to see it, but if you walk out of here you certainly won't be the last."

Melissa was standing on the side of the case now, looking down and admiring.  "What's the barcode thing around her neck for? And how long has she been asleep? She IS asleep, right?"

"Yes, deep in dreamland.  The barcode is for inventory purposes.  Once the sale is final then it can be removed, if you like."

"You said she was a cheerleader? If I buy do I get the cute little cheer outfit too?"

"Sorry, I actually sold the clothes already, in a manner of speaking.  What you see is what you get."

"So can we...touch?"

"Of course."  The man carefully unlocked and removed the lid.  Melissa immediately reached down and started playing with the pigtails.

"I LOVE these!"  She finally let them go and then started running her fingers along Denise's cheek, poking and prodding a bit.  "Will she wake up if I keep doing this?"

"Probably not. It's only been a few hours.  The solution I used is an eight hour one." He turned to Guy.  "You are welcome to touch it too, just be careful.  As they say, if you break it you buy it."

Melissa's hands had moved on to Denise's breasts at this point.  "They are real, Guy.  How about that?"

"Good. I hate those bolt-ons."  Guy reached out and poked Denise's legs gently.  "Nice muscle tone."

Melissa moved down to see for herself.  She poked Denise's other leg a bit.  "You're right! Definitely in great shape, fit, toned, and...waxed!" she added as her fingers slid over Denise's smooth mound.  "Oh the things we can do, Guy..."

Guy was trying to remain sedate even as his wife was having a hard time containing her enthusiasm.  "Do you have a brochure, fact sheet, something?"

"Right here."  The man pulled out a card from his jacket pocket with a photo and some of the pertinent information from the field sheet: age, height, weight, hair color, shoe size, etc.  Guy took it and began reading it over as Melissa continued to 'examine'.

"You mentioned a solution," Melissa blurted out suddenly.  "How does that work?"

"They make three strengths: two hour, four hour, and eight hour.  A concentrated amount breathed in and it goes to work in seconds."

"Could I...get some of that?" Melissa gushed.  "I think it would come in handy," she added as she petted Denise's head.

"It sounds like you really want to take it home with you today," the man smiled.

"Oh, Guy, can we?" Melissa turned to her husband and gave him puppy-dog eyes.

Guy made a face as if he had seen that look a thousand times.  "Fine. How much?" he asked the man.

"Seventy-five thousand.  That includes same-day delivery.  I'll even throw in some of that solution for free."

The couple's faces fell almost simultaneously. 

"We only brought fifty in cash," Guy mumbled.  "Is there any other payment types you take?"

"I'm sorry. This is a cash-only business.  I'm sure you understand why."

"Oh, Guy!" Melissa threw her head into her husband's chest, unable to stop her theatrics.  "I just must have it!"

The man paused, thinking for a moment.

"I may have a solution, if you are willing to listen.  Would you consider co-ownership?  Taking on another buyer for the other twenty-five grand, and working out an arrangement?"

"You can do that?" Melissa asked.

"Well it just so happens that one of my suppliers is interested in it too, but only has twenty-five thousand - and also isn't home a lot so wouldn't expect to need much time with it.  I could give her a call, I'm fairly sure she would do it.  She also happens to be the one I sold the cheer outfit too, so there's an added bonus."

"I don't know," Guy spoke.  "It sounds complicated.  I have enough complicated in my life," he added as he looked down at Melissa.

"I PROMISE, I will take care of everything dear! Just say yes."

"You said the same thing about the BMW.  And who is the one that washes it and does all the maintenance on it?"

"This will be different. I promise!" And she gave Guy the puppy-dog eyes again.

"If I don't say yes I'll never hear the end of it. Fine."

"Yay!" Melissa practically jumped into Guy's arms and gave him a huge kiss.

"Okay, have a seat, I'll go get the paperwork, make the call, and bring out some more champagne."
Here is Part 11! One more chapter to go, I think :) This one is a bit longer than others but it just kept writing itself that way :)
One particular Deviant inspired much of this with their comments so thank you - you know who you are ;)

Please keep the comments, notes, and critiques coming!!

DD

Previous:  The Cheer Squad: Part 10Denise was standing on the platform still, wearing only the barcoded tag around her neck and a lost expression on her face.  She was still trying to process what was happening to her.  She had lost all concept of time but assumed it hadn't been a day yet since she and her friends were lured into an abandoned warehouse by one of their own, chloroformed, and kidnapped.  Just a day before she had been the most popular senior in her school, the head cheerleader, and dating the quarterback of the football team; now she was in this room with this man, no idea where she was, and being treated as no more human than the box of her clothes that sat on the nearby table.
He was still standing behind the camera as he spoke.  "Now, stand perfectly still, with your feet shoulder width apart, and your arms at your sides, your hands just away from your body.  Look straight ahead."  Denise complied; his instructions to her sounded like a photographer talking to a model and
 Next:  The Cheer Squad: Part 12 (Conclusion)The constant bumps and jarring finally caused Denise to wake up.  She tried to reach for her eyes to rub them but she couldn't move her wrists, they were secured somehow.  She jerked her head up only to find that her neck was secured as well.  She attempted to twist and kick but her waist and legs were bound somehow.  She glanced around and discovered she was inside some sort of box and the ties holding her in place were plastic.
"You're awake," a male voice to her left spoke.
"What the hell? Where am I? Who are you?" Denise screamed.
"You're in the cab of my delivery truck.  You were sold a while ago.  I'm Anthony."
Denise struggled but the plastic ties were too strong.  She was completely naked except for the tag around her neck.  "Sold? What do you mean sold?"
"Do you not understand English? Someone came into our store and paid money for you.  That's what sold means."
"Where are my clothes? Who paid money for me? What kind of store are yo
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greent64 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hilarious! :D  

More stuff I love in how you're unspooling it:

The swift and complete scene change, totally different mood, car dealership.  Pleasant.
And the parallel to buying a luxury object like a car is abundantly clear, campy without
being heavy-handed.

I could tell it was important that Delilah could not afford you, but time-sharing you?
I didn't see that coming!  How profoundly humiliating is that!?

On to the final chapter!
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
yay!!!
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Sterling557 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016
The couple Guy and Melissa seem oddly familiar ... :-)
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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LostBrave Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:+favlove: Thoroughly Enjoying :wow: :love::reading:
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saloniko Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016
time-shared denise :)
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Cracoviia Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This scenario is so scary and yet quite funny at the same time, especially Melissa's enthusiasm :D The puppy dog eyes, the jumping, you forget for a second that they're talking about acquiring a person...or maybe 'generic big boobed cheerleader' doesn't count in the same way as other people? 
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Why doesn’t it? ;)
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Cracoviia Featured By Owner Edited Sep 7, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I think you do count, but then I am not the kind of person who buys cheerleaders so maybe they have a different perspective ;)
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe ;)
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FairyPrincessJess Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016
Great job with this one! I'm really enjoying this series!

I'm also gonna assume that I'm the Deviant in question. Because I'm feeling egotistical today :)
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Ha!! ;)
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amazonarrow Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
I'm sure they will enjoy their acquisitions.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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TazLooking Featured By Owner Edited Sep 5, 2016
I was surprised to see this part up, I thought you might want a day to goof off and do something else. Anyhoo, the banter back and forth between husband and wife was interesting!
But to have reduced Denise to "it" is even more humiliating than just being a barcode!!! "It" infers not human!!! Life with this pair will be use and abuse squared and many doses of chloroform... Was the blonde really sold?? the "merchandiser" keeps saying so, and was that what he meant when he stated that one of the girls was no longer with us.
He may have been just trying to scare Denise, which worked very well!!! Love the story, you are doing a great job with this!!!:)

BTW: is Denise ticklish? Another DA writer uses long periods of tickling during slave training. There are so many possibilities, but in my mind, nothing fatal, just erotic...
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Not that ticklish no...

Yes, you figured right, he was trying to scare me. It worked!
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chmie Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016
In my opinion this buyers are truly agents FBI or other agency. If I were on place of this seller I shall check them eventually leave with this cheerleadears in my opinion they are suspicious
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
ok
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Rob66 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 5, 2016
I'm envious of the two purchasers but they deserve it.

The "it" reference and comparisons to unused exercise equipment is just a brutal dehumanization of Denise. Really great story and I bet a little wishful thinking too :)
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
yes it is thank you :)
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Y-Phil Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great job at stimulating our mental movie... Rich of details, very well written :D
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much!!!
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Y-Phil Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome :aww:
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dougiedee Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016
I liked the exercise equipment analogy.  And that sale scene.  Very different from the usual auction block fair.  Great job.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!!
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Dimir3D Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Спит Белоснежка в хрустальном гробу © Марина Цветаева

Snow White in a crystal coffin sleeps ©
This picture forced me to remember magnificent verses of the poet Marina Tsvetaeva.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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PitchBLACK-Art Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Those couple sounds like a lot of trouble and the co-ownership with Delilah doesent make matters for Denise all the better. If this guy has so many buyers at hand, why sell it to the first bidder.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I thought about that, about bringing another buyer into it... I decided not to complicate things any further :)
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Gaira69 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Wow, you were going to be sold cheap if he had cut her a deal at first.  You really have to sell for full price, it is your new purpose to make your collector as much money as possible.  But you are likely now going to find your new home something long term, it doesn't sound like they are the kind to trade up constantly.  

I love the uniform as a trophy.  Having leftovers on display is pretty hot.  You were another one bagged in their sport hunting for profit.

I guess this means we will never learn of the fates for Emma, Katie, and Ary.  They just disappear into this black market as if they never existed.  
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Actually I was going to probably reveal their fates in the final chapter...

I love the uniform as a trophy too!
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RenderPretender Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, it is uncanny and super creepy how well you nailed the conversation down.  Jesus.  Really creepy.  Personalities too.  Like, scary scary.  Yeah, the girls are going to love this.

LOL, it's pretty great.  :)

Also... this...

"You said the same thing about the BMW.  And who is the one that washes it and does all the maintenance on it?"  - Spoiler Alert:  Mexicans, that's the answer.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
LMAO I should have known!  And thank you for the comments that inspired this :)
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RenderPretender Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
10 out of 10.  Bravo.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Now I just have to write one more part, the delivery
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RenderPretender Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, that's the best part!  I mean, not the delivery, but what the couple have planned and what they do to their cheerleader!
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
well, if you have ideas...lol
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RenderPretender Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's your story, I'm not trying to hijack it!
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
You aren't hijacking it lol. It's almost done at this point :)
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ClarkSavage Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016
Your writing creates some interesting mental images!
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!
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