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"Hello?"
"Mr. Photographer?"
"Is anyone here?"
"Hello?"

The five 18-year-old high school cheerleaders walked through the door of the warehouse where they were expecting to do a photoshoot for a team picture.  As they walked in they looked around at the graffiti painted all over the walls; there was no sign of anyone there.

"Are you sure this is the place, Denise?" Emma, a ponytailed brunette and the first one through the door, asked.  She was the adventurous one and already walking to the right looking for somewhere to explore.

"This is the address they gave us," Denise, the head cheerleader who came in right behind Emma, replied.  She shook her head letting her brown pigtails bounce back and forth.  Denise was the obvious choice for head cheerleader: she was the most popular girl in school, gorgeous, busty and full of energy and spirit.  "Right Kim?"

"You know it!" Kim, a heavy-set blonde, asserted as she strolled in next.  "This is the place all right!"

"It seems kinda...I don't know?" Katie, a somewhat shy, petite blonde asked.  Like Denise she had her hair in pigtails as she looked around nervously.

"Hello?" Ary, the last one in, shouted.  She was another brunette and came across as the smart one of the five, always questioning everything.  "This seems like a strange place for a team picture."

"I'll go check this way," Emma shouted as she headed through a doorway to the right and down a corridor.  The other four proceeded to the left into the large room that was about the same size, they thought, as their gym.  There were a number of doors to the right but they kept walking to the left, staying inside the large room.

"Hey look at these huge blue mats," Denise remarked.  "They would be a great place to pose on don't you think?"

"For sure!" Kim gushed, seeming happier than usual.  She found a support pole near the mats and grabbed on it, twirling.  "Haha a stripper pole girls!"  Denise gave her a sideways glance as they walked around.  

"Hello?" Ary shouted again.  "Is anyone here?"  Her eyes were scanning everywhere.

"This place feels really creepy," Katie muttered, turning to Denise.  Even though the two girls were the same age Katie clearly looked up to her friend a lot.  "Are you sure this place is safe?"

"Yeah, did you do reference checks on the photographer?" Ary added.

"You know it is," Kim interjected.  "It's all good!  I checked everything out before I told Denise about it!" She did a mock cheer as she said this. "Mustangs rule!" she added, referring to their school mascot.  The five girls were all in their cheer outfits, black and white with gold lettering and sleeves.

Katie didn't look convinced.  "I don't know if this is such a good idea shouldn't the photographer be here by now?"

Denise, who was a couple inches taller than the 5'1" Katie, reached out to her grasping her by the shoulders.  "Come on Katie don't be such a spaz! It's just a photo shoot, we will walk around till we find where we are supposed to be.  Do I hafta shake you? Cos you know I will!" And Denise playfully shook Katie's shoulders lightly.

"I don't want to be here all day," Ary stated, heading towards one of the four doors they had passed on the right.  "I'm going to go look, anyone coming with me?"

"We should totally split up," Denise answered, "so we can find them faster!" She pulled Katie with her towards the doors. "You go that way, and I'll go through this other door.  Ary you look that way where you are heading."

Katie seemed more at ease now that Denise had assured her everything would be fine.  She and Ary each went through a different door.  Just before Denise was about to go through the third door, she turned back to Kim.

"Don't you have the number maybe you should try calling them?"

"There's no signal in here must be the walls, I'll walk back outside and try."  Kim smiled.  "Wow for the first time I feel like I am actually part of the team!"

"Whatever, you know you're only on the squad because the rules say we have to have five seniors.  We have been carrying you all year.  Well not literally! So I guess you finally did something worthy of being a Mustangs cheerleader getting this team photo set up, and on the cover of the yearbook too!"

Kim said nothing as she turned to walk back towards the door they had entered through.  Denise bounced ahead without a second thought.
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:iconmyslef1:
myslef1 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
When does part 2 come out? :)
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
it is a 12 part story, it's all posted
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:iconmyslef1:
myslef1 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay! Thanks!
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:iconsterling557:
Sterling557 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016
Come into my parlor, I mean my deserted warehouse, said the spider to the fly.
Cheerleaders... they fall for it every time !
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
We do lol
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:iconlostbrave:
LostBrave Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:excited: Kim Set Them Up :?  :backstab:
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Read on :)
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argyleman1 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2016
where can i c the video
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:iconrob66:
Rob66 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2016
Where can I find the video that inspired this story? I bet I'd love it!
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
send me a note
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:iconsaloniko:
saloniko Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2016
fun description - brisk pace
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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:iconjapender61:
japender61 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2016
"Let's split up!"... famous last words in every slasher flick, lol!  :D
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
lol yeah!
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:iconrenderpretender:
RenderPretender Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Off to a good start, short and sweet.  Thanks for sharing.  :)  Well written, as always.
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!! I see you posted something new too *runs off to look*
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:iconultramichelle:
Ultramichelle Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016
Very nice part 1!

"This place feels really creepy,"  - yeah, not a problem at all ^^  
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!!! ;)
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:iconultramichelle:
Ultramichelle Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2016
You are welcome!!
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:icontazlooking:
TazLooking Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2016
Nice intro to the story!!!! Maybe there some very large hungry spiders lurking in the warehouse... :)
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
ooooh
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:iconcracoviia:
Cracoviia Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like a good deserted warehouse, you can never go wrong with them. perfect place for meeting people :D
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
haha yeah
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dougiedee Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
That poor Mustangs football team.  Gonna have to make do with the JV cheer squad all season. 
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Perhaps ;)
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FairyPrincessJess Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
Well, I hope they've enjoyed their lives. This is a recipe for a horror movie. And those never end well. Or maybe they'll just get captured in some way like Denise always does and then have the picture in the year book.

I look forward to seeing what happens!
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I hope I surprise you a little :)
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:iconfairyprincessjess:
FairyPrincessJess Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
I'm sure you will
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Sacron22 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
Impressive creative output, dear lady.  Fun stories and beautifully rendered images.
Are all cheerleaders so... 'flighty'?  
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Umm..giggles idk??
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:iconsacron22:
Sacron22 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016
probably not all, gotta be one smart one (at least in fiction).  
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
There is :)
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Dangerguy01 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not the sharpest knives in the drawer, are they? Have they not watched a single horror movie in their lives? ;)
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
umm...giggles
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Dangerguy01 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well that response was in character. ;)
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!!! :iconcheerplz:
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PitchBLACK-Art Featured By Owner Edited Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice introduction, you gave a good idea about the appearance of each of your characters and also of their relations to each other. An intersting and by the way very georgeous team, seemingly heading into trouble if one think about their creepy location. And they even went voluntarily there ....
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
yes totally voluntarily!!
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abashful1 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
Ya know, I have hypno cameras with high intensity mesmer-flash technology built in on sale this week. Have your photographer give me a call :devil:
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
hahaha okay ;)
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pizzanerd1 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
Love the story
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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:iconclarksavage:
ClarkSavage Featured By Owner Edited Aug 26, 2016
Five cheeaders in a creepy building. What could possibly go wrong? ;)
Great start and I look forward to reading the next installment.
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!! ;)
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Miss-Jadis Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Something wicked this way comes! Excellent build to what one could only imagine, an eventful day.
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!!
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:iconmiss-jadis:
Miss-Jadis Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
You are most welcome my devious twin! LOL! :hug:
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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tripx713 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
I'm so glad to see you writing again! I can't wait to read more of this story.
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:iconcuria-dd:
Curia-DD Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I'll try to write a little at a time and keep it coming :)
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