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There's nothing inherently tedious about working for the state. I, for one, love it. I've been in this line of work for at least a decade, and it never, ever seemed dull or ordinary. Then again, that might just indicate that I was born to be an executioner.

Today's batch is huddled together in the waiting area, hands and feet shackled, full of anticipation. Two adulterous women scheduled for hanging - their nakedness indicates the nature of the crime and the blue color-coded wristband the manner of death; and a man that could be a deserter of some sort, because his build and resolute demeanor suggests military training, and his color is green - scheduled for shooting. Under that calm and collected facade of his, I can smell fear, and I can't help but smile. I decide that he'll watch the women in their death throes: even if it arouses him, it will also be an image of his own end, exacerbating his anxiety.

The women are cowering openly, clinging to each other. One is a delicate, but not underfed brunette, with well-cared-for nails and big, cute doe eyes. Beneath the round breasts, each a good handful, her chest is rising and falling in an almost exaggerated way, gasping for breath before she can't draw air any longer. She's in her twenties, if that. No wonder her case got reported; the newly married are less prone to tolerance towards infidelity. Her companion seems more mature, but still not a wilted flower; a short-haired blonde, deliciously plump, with curves that remind one of the shape of an acoustic guitar. She has soft boobs and hard hands, blade-thin lips and square jaws, reminiscent of the Aryan peasant women of old, doing the hard work to feed the rest of the world. Tears of shame trickle down from her steel-grey eyes as she tries to cover herself in an almost endearing, belated attempt at modesty.

Without a word, I grab the blonde by the arm. The touch reminds her where she is, and she looks at me with a begging expression - one that I've seen many times before. I lead her to the stand; she's not resisting, she knows it's no use. She trembles a little as she steps up on the slightly raised square of granite under the gallows. I put the noose over her head, adjusting it behind her left ear, stroking her muscular neck. The old cord is slick from the friction it has gone through in previous use, it will tighten very quickly. I remove the shackles from her hands and feet and step back to admire the view. She gives me a frantic look, wanting to have the ordeal behind her. I push the green button in the side of the gallows for elevation, and the rope slides back into the slot, dragging her upward. She tries to stand on tiptoes, but is soon lifted from the stand, dancing on air. Gurgling sounds emerge from her compressed throat, and her face slowly turns purplish red. Her buttocks quiver as she kicks about, her hands try in vain to grasp something. Then her struggle is disorganized into a convulsion, as the oxygen-deprived brain starts failing to function. The fear in her eyes gives way to the vacant stare of the dying and the dead; her tongue hangs out, bluish and swelling. Her body is jerking uncontrollably...then gradually slows down. Only irregular, weak wriggles remain, and then even those cease, and she gently sways, relaxed, motionless. She wets herself, the tiny golden river trickling down on her legs, dripping from her feet. I wait for any last, feeble kicks, but see none. She's completely limp, her neck stretched out beautifully by the cord, her toes pointing straight down. I take a step towards her, picking up the auscultation device from a nearby table. I catch the last, irregular beats of her heart, then the silence of death. I'm aroused, but still have work to do, so I control myself as I lower her down with the other button to almost a kneel, preparing to take the noose off. A sly little fumbling with the heavy-set body allows for a good tactile assessment of her perfect proportions. I set the corpse on the tray behind the gallows, and turn back to attend the next client.

The brunette is in a panic; seeing the other woman die was too much for her. She tries to bolt, but trips and starts to fall because of her feet are tied. I catch her and hold her firmly, dragging her towards the stand with little difficulty. This is also a familiar reaction, especially in the young ones. She fights, but to no avail. I don't remove the shackles this time, to avoid complications. She tries to reach up and take the noose off as I position it behind her ear. It's amusing, really, to see reason run screaming and the animal's instinct take over. She screams as my hand reaches for the button...and her wailing is cut off by the cord tightening around her neck. She struggles against her bonds, strains with every little drop of strength left in her, but the exertion only quickens the process. Despite her lower weight, she fades into unconscious convulsions sooner, and they slacken slightly faster as well. Soon, she is straightened out, her face frozen into the familiar expression of death, her fists clenched forever. By the time I check her heart, it's completely still. Cold sweat forms a film on her pale, spotless skin, nipples still erect from the excitement. I take her down and lay her next to the blonde.

Now, finally, the man. As I suspected, he is shaken by what he's just seen, torn between arousal and dread, tense and on the verge of mental overload. Before he could distance himself from the reality of what is coming, I shake him and tell him it's time. He gathers his last reserves of self-control, and stands up. I tell him to kneel down on the square red plastic floor cover in the corner. He follows my orders; regardless, I leave the handcuffs on, because with these guys you never know. I reach to my waist and take my trusted old Colt 1911 out of its holster. I grab it with both hands, pointing it right between his baby blues. He stares at me like a frightened child, all layers of control and training dissolving into nothing. My finger rests on the trigger. For a very long moment, I just savor the feeling of power, almost as arousing as the sight of the two women writhing and dying. Then with a calculated pull, I send the .45 round through his skull. His brain is splattered all over the plastic covering on the floor and the wall before he could even hear the thunder or feel the impact. His blood is sprayed all over my hands. I take his clothes off and set his remains on the tray, registering the slight angel lust with a smile. I will hose down the corner and the stand later, that's none of my concern right now. As for the moment, I have three bodies to play with, and my own is bursting with lust...
Another erotica piece from me!
The sex/gender of the executioner is hidden for a reason. With a little imagination, you can be the protagonist here. ;) (Warning: you'll probably get turned on reading this!)
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DjEtla Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
It's good when someone enjoys their job, and it's good when someone enjoys doing their job well.
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librarian-of-hell Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed. Thanks for the comment :hug:
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DjEtla Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I like the way you've focused on this main character and described the attitude of that person. It makes me think about the attitude of executioners going back in history. I wonder how many hated the job, and how many loved the job, and how many had more complex or ambiguous feelings.

I'm working on a story that I might try to self-publish some day. I've been giving some thought to the attitude of an executioner. In my story he finds the job good and bad, and its getting more difficult for him as the years go by. But he does it anyway. When someone is set up to hang he needs to take moment or two to collect his thoughts and build up his will before pulling the lever on the gallows.

Anyway, I like your story about someone with a cheerful attitude. It's thought-provoking.
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DjEtla Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
That's a good story. Thanks for the link. I left you a note there.

I post stories here and I enjoy getting comments. But sadly, comments from reader seem to be rare. When I see something I like I try to leave a comment for the author.

If you're interested, I have a little story fragment about a young women who says she'd like to try being an executioner. It's just a couple of paragraphs -- if you'd like to take a look it's here: sta.sh/01mxmliusx2q
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librarian-of-hell Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmmm. Interesting. Intrasex competition? Not really applicable if you're attracted to women, like I am. Also, why would it be hard in any way to pull the lever? I never understood why humans find killing psychologically hard, but that may be a characteristic of my species.

Also, where do I volunteer? :)
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Skaramine Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are correct - i got turned on.
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librarian-of-hell Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
success! :winner:
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Skaramine Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Truly a champ'een!
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Hangnaked Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
I liked the way the brunette got hanged, sfter she watched the other woman, very nice, I would have done the same thing.
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librarian-of-hell Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :) this would be so much fun in reality....
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Whoa, this was fantastic! *adds to favorites*

I only wish the man had been hanged as well. Though the imagine of him kneeling down and accepting the bullet was very arousing. (This whole story was arousing as all hell, but you don't need me to tell you that.)

I like that you left the executioner's gender ambiguous. Very well done with that. You also kept the observations written in such a way that it wasn't obviously a man or a woman leering at the prisoners, if that makes any sense? Some stories I read and it's very clearly written with a Male Gaze going on, even if the executioner is intended to be a woman. In this, you avoided that entirely. 

Are there more stories on the way? 
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librarian-of-hell Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU! :hug: wow, a detailed comment :)

Heh, the shooting part was an idea that a friend gave me, and yeah, looking at someone staring into the barrel, with the other end being in my hand, is freaking hot. :) (and i'm not into men, lol.)

That was on purpose, like a writer's skill experiment. Glad to hear that it did succeed :) And yeah, the "male gaze" is what makes some of those stories boring sometimes, and i wanted something fresh. And perhaps as a lesbian i wanted this to be accessible to all genders ;)

Sure! Actually, my gallery contains more erotica, not hangings, but necro, lesbian cutting, fingering with a .50cal round, and other good stuff. And I plan on writing more, because it's fun :) (And a nice break from the serious poetry that i usually write.) So stay tuned :)
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Welcome! : D

wow, a detailed comment
Yeah, that's how I roll. I usually leave better comments on stories than that (I have a big background in fanfiction, a lot more back and forth goes on in comments on those about favorite parts and such.)

Heh, the shooting part was an idea that a friend gave me, and yeah, looking at someone staring into the barrel, with the other end being in my hand, is freaking hot. :) (Smile) (and i'm not into men, lol.)
Mmmmm, yeah, gunporn is FUN. Huge powerplay, plus some fun phallic symbolism going on there if you want it. Especially cool when it's a man who used to be all powerful and in control (a soldier, as you mentioned in this story) and now he's helpless and kneeling and accepting his death with dignity but fear and a little arousal ... yeah, that just gets my toes curling in the best way. 

That was on purpose, like a writer's skill experiment. Glad to hear that it did succeed :) (Smile) 
Very much so! : D

And yeah, the "male gaze" is what makes some of those stories boring sometimes, and i wanted something fresh. And perhaps as a lesbian i wanted this to be accessible to all genders ;) (Wink)
Oh thank god another woman! *wants to hug you* This fetish can be such a boy's club sometimes. Which is fine, don't get me wrong, but some of this material lends itself to misogyny in a big way and that gets wicked uncomfortable and I feel kind of left out at times. 

Sure! Actually, my gallery contains more erotica, not hangings, but necro, lesbian cutting, fingering with a .50cal round, and other good stuff. And I plan on writing more, because it's fun :) (Smile) (And a nice break from the serious poetry that i usually write.) So stay tuned :) (Smile)
You have quite the talent for hanging stuff, can't wait to see more sometime!
I'll check out your other material. More gunporn sounds very nice right now ...

I should really write more. I've only posted one story and that was a while ago. It's tough, because dA rules say you can't write explicit sex, show erections, or have any fluids going on. Which kind of puts a limit on stories. You managed to avoid that really well by building it up with all kinds of sexy details, and then leaving the rest to our imaginations. 

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librarian-of-hell Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DA rules says that? wtf, then i was lucky my writings didn't get reported. anyway, i think if you pt a mature content tag on it (which i did) you should be able to write anything. and FUCK the bigots. (1st amendment ftw. i like the 2nd the most, but yeah.)

hehe, misogyny. well, after my ex left me, i did turn a bit misogynistic myself (because she was just evil).

anyhow, i don't have much else to say in this comment. feel free to comment on my "gun porn" and other stuff as well, you seem like a fun girl. :) welcome to my world.
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
DA rules says that? wtf, then i was lucky my writings didn't get reported. anyway, i think if you pt a mature content tag on it (which i did) you should be able to write anything. and FUCK the bigots.
Yeah, it says that, but stuff hardly ever gets reported. There's so much content on this site, so unless you tick somebody off and they report you, you're probably gonna be ok. 
I agree though. If you put porn or explicit stuff behind appropriate tags, you should be allowed to post whatever. 

hehe, misogyny. well, after my ex left me, i did turn a bit misogynistic myself (because she was just evil).
And then there's all this internalized misogyny that society pushes on us, so I'm sitting here with this fetish and wondering if I really like it or I'm being misogynist and then I'm like "you know what, porn is porn, real life is real life, and never the twain shall meet" and I enjoy my creepy porn on dA and such and just try to ignore the part of my brain that's still disgusted with some of this stuff. 

feel free to comment on my "gun porn" and other stuff as well, you seem like a fun girl. :) (Smile) welcome to my world.
I shall. Thank you! You seem fun too!
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librarian-of-hell Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
good that you agree on that :)

that seems too complicated. i'm not disgusted at all, it's much easier, lol. then again, i don't look at much "fetish" material on here, because i'm always seeking the real thing. (which is notoriously hard to find.) so i wasn't exposed to the misogyny part much.

thanks :)
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dschingis4711 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
I definitely got turned on reading this.
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librarian-of-hell Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:bow: good to hear that.
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