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WARNING: Contains some scenes of nudity and sexual themes. If you are under the age of 18 or are offended by this please do not read on.






It had been a long day for Natalia as she arrived home at her flat in Angel Falls. As she began to get ready for her night out with the girls from work, her mobile began to ring. "hello?" Natalia said as she put the phone to her ear, "what?...you've found a way into Tormentor's penthouse?...right, I'll be there straight away...Thanks Nightfall"
She placed the phone on her dressing table and donned her Mystic girl outfit. Nightfall had told her to meet her at 21:00 and she knew a way into Tormentor's penthouse. Mystic girl sat at her dressing table and brushed her hair back before placing her mask over her eyes and exiting her flat.

Mystic girl took to the skies above Angel Falls as she had some time to do a bit of crime fighting before meeting Nightfall. She saw a gang of thugs breaking into a bank and flew down to intervene. As she landed, a thug turned round and shouted, "hey boys, its Mystic Girl!"
The rest of the group turned round and formed up in the alleyway. One by one they attacked Mystic Girl and each time she dropped them with a single punch. Only 4 of the thugs remained and 3 of them came towards her at once. Mystic Girl ripped a pipe off the wall and examined it before spinning 360 degrees and taking out the thugs like she was playing baseball. The leader of the thugs came out from his cover behind the dumpster and drew his shotgun, aiming at Mystic Girl. As quick as a flash, she threw a ball of electricity at the thug, sending him backwards into the wall. there was a loud CRACK and the thug's rib cage broke, puncturing his lung. Mystic girl walked over to him and said, "Tell me who sent you!". the man just laughed and said, "you will see soon enough." before his head drooped. Mystic Girl checked his pulse and confirmed that he was dead before taking the bags of gold back into the bank and flying off.

It was 21:00 and Mystic Girl met Nightfall at her house. Nightfall was a tall, blonde haired girl who wore a black corset with black gloves and high heels. She was wearing her black mask that covered her eyes and she greeted Mystic Girl. "so, Natalia. I've found a way into Tormentor's penthouse." she laid the plans of the building out on her table, "if we go in through the roof, we can get through the air ducts that run through the whole building and get to the hallway outside Tormentor's penthouse. The place will be heavily guarded so we'll have to take out the guards before entering." Nightfall and Mystic Girl exited the house began their journey to the Penthouse.

An hour later, the duo landed on the roof of the building. Nightfall pulled the grill off the vent and climbed in, motioning to Mystic Girl to do the same. She climbed down the vent and lay on her belly, crawling through the ducts.
They could hear the conversations of various people as they journeyed on to their destination. They came to a grill in the vent and Nightfall looked down to see a group of guards around a doorway. She pointed down and said to Mystic Girl, "were here. you need to take out the guards but wait for me to do my bit." Nightfall crawled on and Mystic Girl stayed by the grill.

Nightfall exited the vent around the corner and approached the guards. 'This better work.' she thought. the guards were still talking as she walked over to them. "hello boys." she said in an alluring tone. They diverted their attention on her as she walked into the group, stroking one of the guards faces. There was a sound above them and Mystic Girl dropped down behind the group, snapping a few of their necks. Nightfall kicked the two nearest to her in the face and knocked them out. "great work." Mystic Girl said to them as the two dragged the body's away.

They came back to the doors and Mystic Girl opened them silently. They crept inside and examined the room. there was a large room with various ornaments in glass containers on platforms around the room with a long sofa on each side. The room then narrowed further down and had bookshelves on either side of it with more ornaments along the sides. They journeyed down and came to a room about the same size as the first one but in the middle of this one was a desk with chairs on the side closest to the heroines. The back wall was all glass and outside was a balcony that overlooked part of Angel Falls. On one wall there were various paintings and on the other, an ornate wooden door. "She's not here." Nightfall whispered and Mystic girl said, "then we wait." There was a creak and the door knob began to turn. Nightfall motioned to Mystic Girl to get into cover as the door opened. Out of the door walked Tormentor, oblivious to the fact that the duo were there. She wore a black corset with straps connecting either side together and she wore black high heels. With a flick of her brown hair, she sat down at her desk and put her feet up, examining her nails.

The two girls then decided to strike. They  leapt out from their hiding spots and nightfall threw one of her knives at Tormentor. it landed in the desk in front of her and Tormentor looked up. "ah, girls. How nice of you to pay me a visit." Mystic girl thrust out her arm and lifted tormentor into the air with her telekinetic powers, flinging her against the wall. Nightfall pounced on Tormentor but Tormentor put her feet up, making Nightfall land on her high heels. They punctured her skin and Nightfall rolled off in agony. "guess its just me and you darling." Tormentor said to Mystic girl as she rose to her feet. She ran at Mystic girl, tackling her to the floor. She and Mystic Girl entered into more of a brawl than a fight but eventually Mystic Girl kicked Tormentor off of her. Mystic girl raised an arm and lifted Tormentor up, bringing her closer to her. She then proceeded to punch Tormentor multiple times with electrified fists. Mystic girl could see Tormentor growing weaker. Tormentor played her last card and summoned up all her strength before pushing away from Mystic girl. The two were slammed into the wall with such a force that the windows shattered. Tormentor yelled, "GUARDS!" before she steadily rose to her feet. The door to the room opened and 30 guards came into the room, all armed with shotguns. Mystic girl rose to her feet but could feel her powers weakening. She tried to lift the guards out of her way but found that she couldn't. They then fired at her and Mystic Girl fell to the floor, drifting in and out of conciousness. She could just see Tormentor walking over to her and she said, "Oh, I forgot to mention. all of my guards have Rudonite injected into their bloodstream, that why you lost your powers." Mystic Girl then dropped into unconsciousness.

She awoke to a banging noise and found that she had been placed in some sort of glass tube. In the tube next to her, Nightfall was also awake. Mystic girl noticed that Nightfall had been stripped of her costume and left naked in the tube. Also, her head was shaved baled. Mystic girl looked down to find that the same had been done to her and all her hair was missing. Regaining all her senses, she looked through the glass tube into a small room in front of her. In the room was a control console and a few large tubes that were connected to the tube she was in disappearing into the wall. At the console stood Tormentor. "Allow me to explain." she said, "you have had Rudonite injected into your bloodstream to keep you powerless and your hair has been shaved for a very good reason. You see, in these tubes is a rubber liquid that I designed myself. It fills up the tubes that you two are in and seeks out anything organic, instantly attaching itself to it, solidifying. The rubber will keep the occupant alive forever as it supplies them with food and oxygen. Once inside, you will be unable to hear, see, feel, taste or touch anything. You will be my ornament to be used as I see fit. I can mould you into whatever pose I like and you will be constantly aware but unable to do anything about it. Lastly, your hair. It would look wrong if the rubber moulded round your hair so I have shaved it to give your head a nice round look. Once you are contained in the 'suit', I will attach a blonde wig to your head as I like blonde girls." Tormentor imputed a command on the console and the tubes began to fill up with the liquid. Mystic Girl yelled as the rubber solidified round her legs, making its way up her body. Once the liquid had covered her legs, it continued up her body, pinning her arms to her sides. The rubber reached her neck and she let out a scream but it was short lived as the rubber entered her mouth and pulled it shut. Her eyes were filled with fear as the liquid reached them, covering them.

Once the procedure was finished, the tanks were drained. Inside them stood two rubber statues. Tormentor smiled and released the two from the tubes. She stood them up and placed a long, smooth blonde wig on each one. Mystic Girl was then carried to the room with the desk and placed next to the chair, facing the entrance. Tormentor grabbed hold of the helpless woman's rubber arms and placed Mystic Girl's hands on her ample buttocks. She then leaned her chest forward ever so slightly, pushing her breasts out. She stood and looked at the statue for a bit and then sat down at her desk, ready to conduct her daily business.
This story was inspired by Rubbermat's picture 'Living Statue'

Mystic Girl, Nightfall and Tormentor are copyright me.

This story is set in :iconangel-fallsda:
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poserhorror Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
like this story :-)
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thomas1850 Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
will we ever read more?
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ArtMania91 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Maybe :) we will see.
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LoneStranger Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Okay so we effectively have a vigilante helping to protect the city that doesn't strike me as concerned about collateral damage. I mean punching someone (I'm assuming somewhere near full force) into a brick wall and then making sure he's dead? La Femme Punisher and most of the villians in the city would approve. The ally came out of left field, we have no idea who she is. The person they're going after is also out of left field, no idea who she is or why they're going after her. The reaction to seeing this person is very violent and you would think would normally be reserved for a mortal arch-enemy, again we don't know why this happened so we don't know why the reaction is so strong. The substance that took her powers away wasn't mentioned as far as I can remember so for us to not know and for the villian to know all about it is also a bit jarring.

I'm not going to call this a bad story, it seems more like you've connected all the dots in your head but forgot to do it for the rest of us.
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ArtMania91 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the critique :)
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680000 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've been waiting for a girl with rubber powers !!! :D
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andrewr255 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011
Love the living statue concept, very nasty thing to do.
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MarshalAdmiralQ Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011
could have been longer in my opinon but it has promise
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BelRhaza4017 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
keep working at it; levia's got a lot of good points, so take them in consideration to help improve your story, but still, u r doing well!
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Levia-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011
Well... it's an interesting peril for them to be left in, but Nightfall and Tormentor came rather out of left field, you didn't post a bio for them and even as a first outing for Mystic girl it kinda starts out in the middle of things, allready having her in angel falls with an ally and an enemy she's after for no specified reason, this story really does suffer from you not telling us important information, just what is this Rudonite substance and how does it seal off powers, does it only work specifically against Mystic girl, if so, how does Tormentor know this?

There's just too many unanswered questions for this to be a complete story.
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