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Deal with the Collector
Story about Chloe

On one slow afternoon day at a local department store, and young employee is hanging up clothes for the Summer season. A beautiful young girl in her early 20’s with long legs and a beautiful face with long brown hair and eyes. She has simple beautiful with a sexy arura that sneaks up on those who pay attention.
Her name was Chloe. She was an introvert girl trying to break out of her shell by going out to clubs at night with her “friends” from work. Although she would flirt with guys at the bar, there was something deeper she wanted, so deep she didn’t fully understand it herself and it would be hard to describe.
As Chloe hangs up clothes on the rack, a mysterious man sits at a bench in the wing of the Mall the department store is located. For months the man has been looking for the perfect candidate to add to his growing collection, but he thinks he’s finally found one.
Chloe goes from one rack to the next and tends to customers. After finishing up putting up the clothes that the customer ended up not buying, a man appeared in her ail. “Excuse me, I looking for something.”
“What would that be?” Chloe responds with a naïve curiosity. “I’m looking for beauty and I think I found it. More specifically I’m looking for a beautiful subject”.
“Oh” Chloe blushes and doesn’t think the guy is creepy. Chloe as shy as she is has a slutty side which she wants to expose but is worried about judgement. She thinks to herself if this guy might be the one to not judge her…
“You are looking for a beautiful subject for what?
The man moves closer as to make his point more intimate. “I want to transform you into a beautiful model, one that can be admired and stand the test of time. Are you a virgin?”
“No I’ve been around, why?” Chloe starting to think the man is prying yet she’s curious where he’s going with this.
“What price would you pay to experience the greatest orgasm physically possible?”
Oh my god, he really just asked me that. Ahhh how do I respond. YES of course but I don’t even know this guy. “Ah……I would pay any price sir.”
After a short pause, he handed her his card. “Go to this address tonight after you leave work, It will be a life changing event my dear.”
Chloe looked down at the dark business card and before she realized it, he was gone as sudden as he arrived.



By the time the mall closed, Chloe was walking to her car and her heart was beating in anticipation and nervousness. I am really going through with this, she thought.
Chloe looks up the address in her phone and finds that it is just out of town. She cranks her car and heads that way. After about twenty minutes she’s outside of the city and driving to a secluded place. She finally makes it to “the place” and sees that it’s a mansion with a gate.
She pulls up and presses the call button, just a moment later the gate opens. Chloe pulls in and is nervous about what may be next…
Waiting for her outside by the front door where the drive way makes a roundabout in front of is the mysterious man from earlier. Chloe parks the car and is greeted by the man who now she suspects is an eccentric billionaire or something.  
“Hello my dear, I’m surprised you showed. You must be curious about what I have to offer you?” Chloe walks up the greet him. “Yes, I’m curious.”. The man laughs and guides her inside.
He leads her to the living room and orders his butler to fetch her and himself a drink. “What do I model?” asked Chloe.
“Oh no, I don’t want you to “model” anything, I want you to be my model.” The man corrects her. “What do you mean?” Chloe responds.
“I want something from you and you want something from me. I want to immortalize your beauty for me to admire forever, and you want to experience the pleasure of a lifetime.” The man continues as they takes sips of their drinks.
Chloe is feeling nervous, turned on, and worried about what the man is saying, she doesn’t even know his name…
“What is your name?”
The man responds, “just call me Shaw”. He sits on his leather seat downing his drink with even the classic fire burning in the background in the fireplace.
Chloe begins to feel tippy from the strong drink and pries, “What do you mean by immortalize me?”
“I want to turn you into a beautify statue my dear, a mannequin to be more precise. I will add you to my collection. In return I promise that during the transformation, you will experience an orgasm girls can’t even image. Would you take that bargain?” the man watches her intently with his piercing eyes, and with a mild age face that doesn’t give the impression of youth but gravitas. Chloe looks back nervous about her decision and asks, “Will I die?....”
“You will feel the greatest pleasure your body could handle and the transformation is permanent and irreversible so yes, you will die”
Chloe felt a sinking feeling while at the same time turned on about the “greatest pleasure of your life”
“You have orgasmed before in your life I presume from your sexual encounters but I promise you, you will feel the BIG ONE with my method my dear.” The man gets up from the seat and walks to gaze at her. Chloe looks back and asked, “what did you mean by your collection, have other girls taken the bargain?”
“Yes, quite a few of them actually. Would you like to see them?”
Chloe is surprise to hear she isn’t the first to accept the deal and her curiosity leads to her accepting to see the others. “Yes, I would.”
“This way my dear.”
The man leads Chloe down the hallway to another door but one that is a double door which looks to be hiding a large room.
The opens it and Chloe follows him in.
Chloe see that it looks like an art gallery except with some large artistic figures occupying the room. Shaw walks Chloe up to the first display when they turned right from the doorway.
Chloe walks up to the display of milf working out. The woman might have been forty something black haired milf with a hard body. Her breast were large and held tight in a sports bra, while her large legs were along with the rest of her skin, covered in what looked like sweat. She was holding small weights with her arms at 45 degree angles like she was about to raise them above her head, all while staring ahead at Chloe and Shaw as if she’s looking at a mirror.
“Who is she?” Chloe stares at the statue before her shocked that it was once a woman.
“Her name was Shay. She was a mother of three with an abusive rich husband and was constantly cheated on and unappreciated by her children. I promised her a way out of the stepford life and she took it. Her big one lasted maybe 9 minutes until she gave way to the cold darkness. Now she stands here happy in my gallery, just look at that smile.”
Chloe listened intently as he tells her about the statue’s history as a former housewife.
Shaw leads Chloe to the next one…
The display is of cheerleader with pompoms raised above her head. The girl is around Chloe’s age and is wearing blue designed cheerleader outfit. The girl look familiar to Chloe, but that was quickly answered by Shaw. The girl would considered a stereotypical cheerleader, thin, blonde, and with a common face for beauty.
“She worked at the same mall as you my dear. She worked in the food court.”
Chloe then recognized her. She never met her but saw her regularly.
Shaw lead Chloe to the next display which was one of kinky nature. Two figures were in the display and were wearing latex one in black and the other in pink. The one in pink was submissive in that she was posed on all fours like a foot rest and had red hair and fare skin while the older one was blonde with black latex and with a whip with one foot on top on her slave place on the small of her back. Both figure faced Chloe and Shaw. While the first two display had their statues with smiles, these two were clearly in pleasure.
Shaw introduced them was Jolene and Vivian. Jolene posed on all fours with her mistress’ foot on her back had the facial expression of a woman in orgasm with her eyes rolled back into her head. The blonde milf on the other hand just had a blank expression like she just got a chance to relax.
Shaw mentions to Chloe that he wanted to preserve the moment of orgasm for Jolene so her froze her as she had it while he left Vivian in a blank face.
What Shaw doesn’t mention is that the two statues are actually a mother and daughter. He thought it would be interesting to show a mother finally getting control of her rebellious daughter.
Chloe looks at the young Jolene’s face who is posed on all fours. She notices that her eyes are so vacant and lifeless. Chill crawls up Chloe’s spine while she’s also quite turned on. Chloe is torn by mixed emotions.
Chloe brought herself to ask, “Did they all really experienced an orgasm?”
“Yes, they all experienced the greatest orgasm of their little lives, I gave them that pleasure and in return they gave me their bodies to be put on display as you can see.” Shaw walks on as he expects to be followed by Chloe.
Chloe takes one more look at the two women on display and walks off to catch up with Shaw. Shaw lead Chloe to the last display of his gallery.
Chloe walks up to see a bed with a two figures on it. One was a blonde in her twenties spread eagle and holding her heals to open up as wide as possible. The blonde clear had pleasure on her face as her eyes are half closed and her head is cocked up towards the ceiling with a slack jaw. The other figure is a brunet with a strap on and is hold her lover’s legs while frozen in the mounting position with the dildo deep inside her partner’s frozen pussy.
Chloe is impressed with the details of the display to the point where she notices that both look like they are sweating.
Shaw introduced them. “This is two drug addicted lesbian lovers name Casey and Rami. They both were going down a dark path of meth addiction so I gave them a way out. They both screamed from the orgasms and just to make it up to them, I posed them together. Not to mention I left their faces just as they were when they orgasmed.”
“So are you ready to join them?”
Chloe nervously looks on to the two girls posed on the bed thinking if she made a mistake or will the big orgasm be worth it…then she’s thrown off thought by his straight to the point question.
She nervously looks at him and says yes. She then looks back at the two figure before Shaw leads her to his lab.

Shaw has Chloe lay on a platform which is 45% from the floor and straps her on. Chloe is starting to get more nervous and restless. As he is preparing the process, she thinks if it’s too late to back out or if she really want to back out. Just as she was about to ask, Shaw cuts her off and reassures her that she will never feel pleasure like the big one.
Shaw walk up to his strapped up house guest and leaned in to inject her with the serum, a special one he created. Chloe held her breathe since no one likes needles.
After the injection agent worked its way through her blood system, it began to transform her and increase her sensitivity to max levels that the nerves could handle. Chloe moving slightly in her restrains started to feel stiff and unable to move on her own. This made her scared, yet she was hoping the orgasm would be worth it.  
As Chloe felt like she was stiffing up, she also felt something else happening...a brewing of an orgasmic pleasure she hadn't felt in a long time.
She was conflicted in her feeling. She was scared about this man who captured her and claims that he will turn her into a beautiful mannequin, and she didn't want to die; yet on the other hand she was beginning to feel a pleasure she never felt before.
(He told me I would experience the greatest orgasm of my life, is this worth it?) thud thud...Oh god! I'm beginning to fee......feel it.
Even though Chloe's body is mannequinizing, the pleasure of the orgasm is forcing her limps to move slightly and her eyes to roll up into her sockets.
The mysterious man looks on and enjoys the thought that he made the process pleasurable and that she will go out with the greatest orgasm of her life, also her last....
Chloe’s limps move wider from her body even though her body is becoming hard plastic. The power of the orgasm is beginning to become unbearable. It’s like if Chloe was thirsty and instead of a cup of water she was feeling an ocean.
Chloe’s thought went quickly from fear and doubt to thinking that this feeling is completely worth it.
Giant explosions of pleasure hitting her like the shock and awe of orgasm. Chloe could hardly think and comprehend anything that was happening but the torrents of pleasure coursing through her body. BOOM BOOM. Chloe’s body shook with each burst even though in normal circumstances she wouldn’t be able to move at all.
Shaw walked up closer to see Chloe transformation more intimately. He saw that almost all of her skin had a plastic sheen and that it just eclipsed her head but her face was still moving as she was orgasming.
Shaw thought to himself that he hadn’t had a girl orgasm this long since the brunet milf in the beginning.
Shaw looked closer into Chloe’s face as she was feeling the orgasmic explosions and yet started to slow down in movement. Her head was tilted up and her face was unmistakably of pleasure with her eyes rolled in the back of her head.
Shaw comforted her as Chloe started entering the darkness.
Chloe could hear Shaw comforting her and telling her to accept the darkness, the cold darkness when it arrives. Chloe started coming down from the orgasm and felt one more coming. Before she knew it, it came….the BIG ONE!
Chloe snapped on her restrains as her body tensed up from the orgasm of the century in her mind. Chloe couldn’t of imagined how powerful the orgasm was. It was immeasurable. Just as the orgasm finished, she started feeling cold and coming down into the darkness.
Shaw could see that her pupils are getting wider and that her end is almost here. Chloe felt like sinking into a cold comfort of the abyss as she came down from her orgasm. Her last thoughts was…this was so awesome. This was so incre incredible. Th…this….wa…was…s…ss….so….pe…per…fe…ct…………………………
Shaw enjoyed the moment Chloe went from a young girl having an orgasm to just a plastic mannequin on his restrains.
Shaw removed Chloe from the restrains and took her to be polished for her new display.

One week since Chloe disappeared….

Shaw is walking down the wing of the mall after grabbing a bite to eat and walks into the same department store he was at just a week ago. As he was looking at clothes during a slow time of the day, he can over hear two coworkers ask each other about their missing coworker Chloe. “She was such a nice girl, I wonder where she went. No two week notice, no nothing.”
Shaw grinned as he walked down the row too check up on something he installed over the weekend when he broke into in the mall.
Shaw leaned on a clothing rack to look up as a mannequin displaying the new summer season swim wear. To Shaw and the coworkers if they paid attention, the figure would be familiar.
The mannequin had long brown hair flowing from the AC just near it, a beautiful two piece bathing suit, and a vacant look to a beautiful face.
The mannequin that now stands in the store used to be a worker name Chloe who after experiencing the greatest orgasm of her life, is now nothing more than a lifeless mannequin on display in a store she once worked at.
She stands in a classic mannequin pose and as Shaw noted, Chloe had the perfect mannequin body. Some of the others needed modifications, but Chloe didn’t need any. It was like she was born to be a mannequin.
Shaw heads out of the store and takes one look back at the girl once known as Chloe. Eventually he will add her back to his collection at home, but he enjoys having her displayed right by people see knew just to see then walk by her and not notice that the mannequin is in fact Chloe.
Shaw leaves the store behind to find another girl to add to his growing collection, while in the meantime Chloe stands tall on her display wearing what she normally would be shy to wear just as a mannequin she has no choice.
With a vacant stare Chloe looks on out to the entrance of the store to see off the man that did this to her. He gave her the gift of the greatest orgasm of her life, but in return her gave up her life to be forever a plastic mannequin….
One of the fans of my motel collection comic asked me to write a story with her as a subject to be collected. This is my first asfr story ever, so yeah I know it's bad and needs editing, but I'd figure why not post it.

So here it is.

Please comment and share you thoughts :)
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xmarilix Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2017
very very good story :)
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asfrmaster2012 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2017
Thank you. There is a "darker" version of the story. Check it out
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Ericamelted Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017
so Chloe accepted to end her life to become a mannequin? and to feel a big orgasm?
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asfrmaster2012 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017
yes to both
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Ericamelted Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017
oh my... was she so crazy? why?
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asfrmaster2012 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
she desired to feel a deadly orgasm and then become a mannequin
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Ericamelted Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
a deadly orgasm?
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asfrmaster2012 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
yes
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Ericamelted Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
but does she know that after death there is only nothingness?
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asfrmaster2012 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
yes
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poserhorror Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think I knew the Chloe character or the fan:-), may I can make a picture-story based on your story? 
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asfrmaster2012 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2016
Of course! That would be awesome!!!
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poserhorror Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks 👍
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asfrmaster2012 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
Apparently this wasn't dark enough for her. So I made a darker version, should i share it?
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Sure!
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SolidOffer Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2016
Yeah, go for it. Curious to see what makes it darker.
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vleight Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
A very good and entertaining story! Yes, some minor editing may help, but you have a talent you should try to cultivate! I look for ward to your next story! {Standing ovation in progress!}
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asfrmaster2012 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2016
thank you.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
This is my kind of story!!! Fantastic! Lucky Chloe :)
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Fntrdy2001 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016
why do you think she is lucky?
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Because I can so.easily imagine it happening to me :)
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Fntrdy2001 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016
do you realize that she litteraly cease to exist, dies, at the end of the orgasm?
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I do!! And what a way to go :)
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Fntrdy2001 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016
;) and for you... does afetrlife wait for her or she is going to fade into nothing but oblivion and eternal nothing as she become plastic?
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I think the second option probably
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Fntrdy2001 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016
me too... and find it more exciting! the price she ay was so high! and now she desn't exist anymore!
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asfrmaster2012 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2016
thank you. I'm glad you like it
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:happybounce:
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