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Charlotte and the Worm.

Charlotte, a young 26 year old girl with lovely red-brownish hair was asleep one cold foggy night when she woke up from a dream of her younger brother when he was 8 years old getting eaten alive by a giant snake right in-front of her. The last thing she remembered from that dream was his barefeet disappearing into the snakes mouth. But that was all a bad dream, a snake wouldn't be out in this cold of a night.

She took a deep breath and jumped out of bed in her white and pink pajama pants, blue short-sleeved shirt and her blue socks. The wooden floor was a little cold when she steped onto it from her warm and cozy bed but she had to poke her head into her brother's bedroom to calm herself down from that dream. Her brother now was 20 years old and both herself and her brother still lived with their parents who were out for the night.

After Charlotte check on her brother she went back to her bed. She got into her bed and laid back down. "I really hope I don't have a another nightmare" said Charlotte finishing with a yawn, she fell back asleep in her comfy and warm bed.
Little did Charlotte know that on that night there was a huge worm like creature called carnictis lurking around her neighborhood looking for a meal. It went around in the dark, cold and foggy night when it came to Charlotte's house. It was a long creature about 6 meters in length. It looked at Charlotte's bedroom window which wasn't shut properly and could sense a smell that was most likely coming from that window.

It then went up onto the wall a went up to her window, inside it could see what looked like someone sleeping. It then nudged the window opened a little bit and slid into the house. There Charlotte slept right in-front of the worm, the worm's mouth was watering, a tasty meal right there and so easy to catch as long as the prey stays asleep. The carnictis went closer to Charlotte's bed her sheets covering her body, they had to go as they were in the way.
The  carnictis grabbed the top end of the bed sheet and pulled it off of Charlotte's body, once it was off she shivered a bit and twitched her toes. The worm was now able to eat it's prey, it thought how was the best way to eat it's prey and thought feet first could work as Charlotte's feet were right in-front of it. It went to the sleeping girls feet but just as it's maw was going grab her feet it noticed her feet had some kind of soft and tasteless material on them.

Charlotte could feel something on her feet and moved a bit. her head now facing closer to the window made the carnictics think head first will be the better way to go. It slivered over towards Charlotte's head and bit down on her head. "AHHH! WHA-WHATS HAPPENING!" said Charlotte while screaming and slowly realizing what's happening. The worm swallowed her head in a bit to her neck. Her blue socked feet and her legs were kicking and she was using her arms to try and pull her self away form this nightmare that was infact real. The carnictics swallowed again and loved the taste of Charlotte but did not like the taste of her clothing. As it slowly swallowed the poor crying girl her shirt ripped due to the teeth of the carnictics mouth, her shirt got ripped and torn so much that it fell off Charlotte's body. The worm swallowed again over her breasts then again down her stomach. As it swallowed again it started to push her pajama pants and panties down her legs and while ripping them a bit.

It swallowed again to her knees, then again. Her pants and panties had fallen off of Charlotte's body and the worm swallowed again to just above her ankles. The worm used it's tail to push the girls socks down, Charlotte could feel her socks coming off her beautiful and soft feet and something hairy and cold going across her smooth barefeet, tickling her sensitive soles. "HAHAHAHA NNNNOOO NO STOPP D-DOING THAT, L-L-LET ME GO PLEASE!" said Charlotte crying and laughing.

As both of her socks and been removed and both of her cute wiggling feet were now bare. The carnictics stopped ticking Charlotte and started swallowing again. The girls young brother had woken up to the ruckus next door in his sisters room and opened her bedroom door, all he saw as he opened it was her blue socks on the floor and then as he looked up he saw his sister's barefeet disappear in to the strange beast. "Oh m-m-my god, CHARLOTTE!".

Charlotte was now gone, the carnictics slivered away through the window in a rush breaking the window. It would retreat to a safe place to digest the poor young girl. Crying inside, Charlotte could feel her skin tingling as she was digested. She soon blacked out. All that would remain of her from the worm was her bra.

The End.
A story I wrote about a Carnictis eating a young girl named Charlotte.

If anyone would like a sequel to this with her younger brother getting eaten or her parents getting eaten, let me know and I will happily write that up.
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JacobHtt Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2018
Also do you do requests or story trades?
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RamalonTheDestroyer Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2018
I can take requests yeah.
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JacobHtt Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2018
Could you do one of these group of girls that land in a carnictis pit and as the worms start to eat them, they give in to their fate and try and get as much pleasure out of it.
The names are:
Isha(she’s the one who suggests they give in and stop fighting)
Holly (has her head swallowed first)
Olivia(who just gives in straight away with out fighting)
Liv(Who tries to fight but gives up)
Courtney (who’s the only one fighting to the end)

Also can the others be swallowed feet first apart from holly who has to be swallowed head first. Also they’ve got massive tits and fat ass’s.

Thank you so much I look forward to reading and I can even write a story for you if you want?:)
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RamalonTheDestroyer Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2018
Well I certainly can do that? might take a while as I've got a lot to do but I definitely get to it soon
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JacobHtt Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2018
Thank you so much!:D I can’t wait to read it
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JacobHtt Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2018
I’d love to see her mom get swallowed
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RamalonTheDestroyer Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2018
Might make a sequel then.:) (Smile) 
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Aulthar Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2018
sure
how tasty is her younger brother do you think?
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RamalonTheDestroyer Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2018
Probably fairly tasty, I would probably go for Charlotte's mother my
self.
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