Melanie Watson ,23 was getting ready for a night on the town. She was going to meet her friends, Jennifer and Sally at a local club. A 3rd year medical student she needed a night to unwind. As she was preparing to leave, she went to get the mail. Inside was a package addressed to her. “What the hell is this?” she wondered . The Address was from a man named “Ray Crusher”. “That's a strange name “ She thought. She carefully opened the package and a stunning red dress flowed out. Also in the package was a note “From a secret admirer” and a picture of a very handsome, blonde haired man. She hoped that this man wasn't some kind of stalker or creep, but she was stunned by his good looks. And the dress was stunning. “I think I need to try this on” she thought. She went to be bed room and changed into the dress. At first it seem a little to big, but strangely it suddenly fit perfectly. She like the way the dress seem to snug her body in all the right places. “I look great in this thing “ she thought. As she continued to admire the dress she noticed that it seem to have become smoother and tighter on her body. “Am I seeing things? “ she thought. She continue to get ready for a night on the town, but slowly she started to feel strange, like things were closing in on her.
She continued on like this for about another 15 minutes before she started to feel faint. The pressure she felt continued to build. She looked in the mirror and her dress was so taught that it looked like a second skin. She could see her nipples and the shape of her arms and legs. Finally the pressure was too much and she fell to the floor. She realized she couldn't me and called out “HELP ME! SOMEONE HELP ME!”. The door to her apartment opened and man stepped inside. She recognized him as the man in the photo. She tried to get up but couldn't move, her whole body paralyzed except for her face and ability to speak. “Help me “ she said. “Ray” replied “Why would I want to do that went your transformation is proceeding so well? “What the fuck do you mean?! “ Melanie said. “The dress is starting to flatten your body” Ray said. “Why don't you stop this stupid game, you sick fuck!” Melanie screamed. “It's no game” Replied ray “You really will be flattened” and with that she felt the pressure steadily increasing . “This will be the most painful thing you've ever felt, but once you're flat you won't feel a thing.” “Why is that ?“ She asked . “Because, you'll just be a flattened object, and no there's no way to reverse the process.” “LET ME GO YOU SICK FUCK!” she screamed “WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?!” Ray smiled and said “Because I love the idea of women becoming flat and I found a way to fulfill this fantasy, . “ With that the final process started, Melanie started to smooth out as though she were being pressed by an invisible pane of glass. Her nipple's smoothing out and her breasts following suit. He face and the rest of her body began to even out. “Please stop this! “ she said. Ray Replied “ I love when they beg!, so sexy!” He stopped to pose her body, putting both her arms to her side and straightening her legs out. “Please stop, it hurts so much I don't want to be flat!” Melanie screamed. The dress was now taking on an ironed appearance as was the body of the woman underneath. Her face began to smooth out and just before it was fixed forever she said “OH GOD HELP ME! HELP M-” and was silent as her face smoothed and flattened with an express that could only be described as horror fixed on it forever. Her eyes were wide with terror. “ Oh my god this man is crushing me !“ she thought. The flattening effect moved down her body, she was now only inches thick and was smooth as a pane of glass. She manage one thought about how her entire life had been in front of her before the life was flattened out of her. Finally the last centimeters of the thickness her body possessed was smoothed and crushed out of her. Ray looked at her and smiled. She was now completely flat, stiff as a board and smooth as a pane of glass. The dress was unwrinkled and pressed hard against her. Finally it release the pressure and she was processed completely. Her blond hair was stiff and smooth, her face contorted in horror with her eyes wide with terror. Ray smiled “I love when they look like that “ he thought. He removed her dress and the clothing underneath. Remarkable it wasn't flattened.He took off her bra and panties and admired his work. He move down her body and saw two circles that had been her breasts. His heart skipped a beat. He looked at her flattened vagina and his heart beat fast in his chest as he looked at the smoothed out appearance of it. He finally looked at her entire body and smiled. “I can't wait to get you home and use you” he said. Taking one more look at the flattened body that had been Melanie a few Minutes before. He picked her up and carefully put the dress in a bag. There was a hot red head he wanted to add to his collection so he needed it for her. He put her flattened body in his car and drove to his home. He thought about the other 3 women he'd already done this to. They once had futures and lives once as well. He drove off, leaving Melanie's friends and family to wonder what had happened to her. He would get much enjoyment out of her body.
The Special dress
Melanie Watson ,23 was getting ready for a night on the town. She was going to meet her friends, Jennifer and Sally at a local club. A 3rd year medical student she needed a night to unwind. As she was preparing to leave, she went to get the mail. Inside was a package addressed to her. “What the hell is this?” she wondered . The Address was from a man named “Ray Crusher”. “That's a strange name “ She thought. She carefully opened the package and a stunning red dress flowed out. Also in the package was a note “From a secret admirer” and a picture of a very handsome, blonde haired man. She hoped that this man wasn't some kind of stalker or creep, but she was stunned by his good looks. And the dress was stunning. “I think I need to try this on” she thought. She went to be bed room and changed into the dress. At first it seem a little to big, but strangely it suddenly fit perfectly. She like the way the dress seem to snug her body in all the right places. “I look great in this thing “ she thought. As she continued to admire the dress she noticed that it seem to have become smoother and tighter on her body. “Am I seeing things? “ she thought. She continue to get ready for a night on the town, but slowly she started to feel strange, like things were closing in on her.
She continued on like this for about another 15 minutes before she started to feel faint. The pressure she felt continued to build. She looked in the mirror and her dress was so taught that it looked like a second skin. She could see her nipples and the shape of her arms and legs. Finally the pressure was too much and she fell to the floor. She realized she couldn't me and called out “HELP ME! SOMEONE HELP ME!”. The door to her apartment opened and man stepped inside. She recognized him as the man in the photo. She tried to get up but couldn't move, her whole body paralyzed except for her face and ability to speak. “Help me “ she said. “Ray” replied “Why would I want to do that went your transformation is proceeding so well? “What the fuck do you mean?! “ Melanie said. “The dress is starting to flatten your body” Ray said. “Why don't you stop this stupid game, you sick fuck!” Melanie screamed. “It's no game” Replied ray “You really will be flattened” and with that she felt the pressure steadily increasing . “This will be the most painful thing you've ever felt, but once you're flat you won't feel a thing.” “Why is that ?“ She asked . “Because, you'll just be a flattened object, and no there's no way to reverse the process.” “LET ME GO YOU SICK FUCK!” she screamed “WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?!” Ray smiled and said “Because I love the idea of women becoming flat and I found a way to fulfill this fantasy, . “ With that the final process started, Melanie started to smooth out as though she were being pressed by an invisible pane of glass. Her nipple's smoothing out and her breasts following suit. He face and the rest of her body began to even out. “Please stop this! “ she said. Ray Replied “ I love when they beg!, so sexy!” He stopped to pose her body, putting both her arms to her side and straightening her legs out. “Please stop, it hurts so much I don't want to be flat!” Melanie screamed. The dress was now taking on an ironed appearance as was the body of the woman underneath. Her face began to smooth out and just before it was fixed forever she said “OH GOD HELP ME! HELP M-” and was silent as her face smoothed and flattened with an express that could only be described as horror fixed on it forever. Her eyes were wide with terror. “ Oh my god this man is crushing me !“ she thought. The flattening effect moved down her body, she was now only inches thick and was smooth as a pane of glass. She manage one thought about how her entire life had been in front of her before the life was flattened out of her. Finally the last centimeters of the thickness her body possessed was smoothed and crushed out of her. Ray looked at her and smiled. She was now completely flat, stiff as a board and smooth as a pane of glass. The dress was unwrinkled and pressed hard against her. Finally it release the pressure and she was processed completely. Her blond hair was stiff and smooth, her face contorted in horror with her eyes wide with terror. Ray smiled “I love when they look like that “ he thought. He removed her dress and the clothing underneath. Remarkable it wasn't flattened.He took off her bra and panties and admired his work. He move down her body and saw two circles that had been her breasts. His heart skipped a beat. He looked at her flattened vagina and his heart beat fast in his chest as he looked at the smoothed out appearance of it. He finally looked at her entire body and smiled. “I can't wait to get you home and use you” he said. Taking one more look at the flattened body that had been Melanie a few Minutes before. He picked her up and carefully put the dress in a bag. There was a hot red head he wanted to add to his collection so he needed it for her. He put her flattened body in his car and drove to his home. He thought about the other 3 women he'd already done this to. They once had futures and lives once as well. He drove off, leaving Melanie's friends and family to wonder what had happened to her. He would get much enjoyment out of her body.
Really nice, I love his cruelty and enjoyment. Too bad Melanie but never mind!
