This story contains horror,gynophagia,dolccete and death.
The story is pure fiction and all people in it are meant to be over 18 and more importantly,they are not real people.
To those who are still here I hope you enjoy.
It was your avrage Friday afternoon at Dolcette highschool.
We meet the two troublemaking stars of our story...Dragana and Lea.
Just like most girls in highschool Dragana and Lea were eagerly waiting for the end of the day to enjoy a nice night out.
They spent all day boring the hell out of their class with their plans for the night.Each thaught that her boyfriend was the best,and better then the other girl s.
It was just the start of the day tho...
Seeing as it was the end of the school year soon there was a big school asembly where the headmaster would be giving a speach.
This year it was hinted that it would be the first in a long time that the most extream punishment would be used on two students who have been making problems for both teachers and other
students alike.
Dragana and Lea were worried at first,when they heard that two girls would actualy have to die this friday for the big school asembly they were scared.They knew that most teachers
did not like them,but after a short thime they convinced themselves that surely this was all just one big joke,they wouldnt actualy kill two girls just to roast them.
They spent their day lauging and as usual making problems for their teachers and anoying the rest of their class,but today felt a bit strange.
The teachers were not reprimanding the two girls like they usualy would.
One thing you need to know about Dolcette high is that punishments were "strange" by most people s standards.
One classic punishment was that a girl that comes to school in a sluty outfit,if the teacher notices the girl would be forced to strip nude and spend the rest of the day wearing
nothing then a shameful expression.
More severe punishments would take the form of spankings or more extremely folging.
And finnaly on paper the ultimate punishment would take the form of death by butchering and roasting.This is a punishment that had not been used in a vary long time.
Finnaly the headmaster of the school walks in to the classroom.
"Hello everyone,I dont want to take time out of your lesson so I will be quick.Dragan and Lea,I need you to come with me to my office...Now."
"Great...what is he going to bitch at us for this time...."Lea thought to herself as she got up from her desk.
Dragana quickly got up aswell to join her friend.
A short walk down the hallway and they got to the headmasters office.
"Hello sir,you wanted us here?"Dragana spoke in a submissive tone,fully expecting to be responded to with some sort of insult aimed at her less then apropriate behavior.
"Good you are both here.Now as you know,this school has strict rules of behavior,and even more strict punishments for breaking them!"He says to the girls.
"So what,we have to strip and get floged across our ass and tits again..?" Lea responds in almost bored sounding tone of voice.
"No...We have tried that far too many times on you two,you two are sluts through and through,and that is why I have just signed your death warrant s this morning!!"
Both girls took a moment to process the words they just heard
"YOU WHAT!!!!"finnaly Dragana screamed out
"You two are now going to be escorted to the buchers shop next to the school where you will be processed and made ready for tonights asembly"The headmaster exclaimed in a calm and
monotone voice,it was if he had just ordered a dinner from a normal restaurant.
"You cant!!!"Lea decided to add.
"You two knew the rules of the school,and you both tried your hardest to piss off every teacher and all of your classemates,you deserve this and honestly i cant wait to watch you roast"
The headmaster now looked to the office door
"Now,its time to get you to the butcher,boys they are all yours now"He exclaimed and then two heavily buther shop workes came in the room and grabed both girls by their arms.
"Wait please dont do this,we are sorry,PLEASE headmaster,we are sorry,dont kill us !!!!"Dragana said while tears started to flow from her eyes.
But their pleeds for help would fall on deaf ears.
The two one stuck up cock teasing girls were dragged through the hallways,it was a sight to see.
The trip to the butcher s shop was not long,only maybe 100m from the school itself.
The two crying girls were taken in to be back where the sows are brought through.
"Two fresh sluts,traight for their headmasters office!!"
One of the two men yelled out.
"please let us go,we wont tell anyone,we will just run away."
"Even if I could bitch, I woulnt.Now its time for you two to strip.Take off everything!!"
"oh god i cant belive this is happening,i just hope its just a nightmare"
Both girls soon found themselves fully naked infront maybe 5 to 6 men all inspecting every inch of their body.
They had been forced to strip many times as punishment,but this time it was difarent,this was not to humilliate them.
They were used all the boys of the school looking and inspecting their naked from,but thise men were not inspecting them in the hope of fucking them,they were looking at them
like they were already meat.
Their sad truth was that they effectively were already nothing more then meat to be processed and roasted.
"Now girls that you are nice and naked,its time to move on to where we will be conducting your processing/execution"one of the men,clearly someone of a senior possition in the butcher
shop told the girls.
They had both hands bound behinde their back and walked to a large room with many devices that Dragana and Lea thought were taken straight from a horror movie.
And the centerpiece was two jessica3000 spiting machines.
These machines were desinged to automaticly impail,gut and stuff the sow that is placed on them.
Once the machine starts there is no way to stop it,once that button is pressed,any girl on the machine is facing certain death.
The spike was about a inch and a half wide,and it had a inch wide stabilizing spike that goes in the poor girls anal cavity.
Lea being the bigger and older of the two was chosen to demonstrate to the younger Dragana exactly what it looked like to be processed.
"NO...PLEASE....STOP!!!I dont want to die like this!!!!!" Lea screamed and kicked as she tried to breake free.
"Stop your whinig slut,We dont have all day"
Lea s legs were secured with steel restraints,then her neck was secured to make sure it was a straight line from her pussy to her mouth.
Dragana was shaking and loudly sobing as she saw her best friend being prepared to be killed like she was just a pig and nothing more.
Now seeing the body that Lea had,with her nice C cup breasts,she would have probably ended up on meat draft anyway at some point in her life.But there was a chance that she
could get lucky and live out her whole life.But their headmaster took that chance of a full life from both thise girls.
Dragana had a much smaller body compared to Lea,she had petite breasts that were nice and perky but were nothing special when it came to size alone.
What she did have was one hell of a fantastic ass.
Both girls looked through their tears at one of the men aproching the large red button on the side of the machine Lea was straped to.
"Pleas....dont do this, I dont want to die like this"Lea managed to say through her sobing and crying.
"You should have thought of this when you were acting like a stuck up slut"he say as he hovered over the button with his finger.
"NO!!!!! PLEASE DONT!!!"Lea screamed at the top of her lungs.
Then in one moment,the man sealed Lea s fate and pressed the activation butten.
"Enjoy what little time you have left now bitch"
As soon as the button was pressed Lea could feel the cold steel spit making its way slowly through her body.
She was not a virgin,she poped her cherry a while ago but this spike was far bigger then anything that she had ever taken up her cunt before.
"AAAAGH MAKE IT STOP!!!"
painfiled screams escaped from Lea s mouth as she felt the spike make its way further and further through her young body.
All the while Dragana looked on in horror at what was happening to her friend,and it was made all the wors by the fact that she knew that she was next in line to experience
what its like to be killed like a slut,not that she dident deserve it and thats something even she knew.
She knows she deserves this fate.
While she was watcing her friend die in one of the wors way imaginable,she was being groped by the men.
"Get on your knees and open your mouth whore,I want to see if you are good for anything other then roasting."one of the men that was groping her suddnly comanded her.
seeing noting else she could do Dragana droped to her knees and opened her mouth like a good slut.
While Dragana was giving the blowjob of her life in a missguded hope that if she does well she might get to live,the guttign saw sprung to life under Lea s belly.
Lea panic ed as she her the was even tho the pain was fluding her sences.
Then the pain of the spit was nothing compared to the red hot pain of the saw slicing open Lea s body,allowing all of her guts to fall out and on to to a slide in to a
disposal bucket.
Lea felt sick as she felt her guts falling out of her body,there was blood everyware and the wet sound of guts hitting steel made both girls really understand that there is no
hope of making it out of this alive.
Soon after this Lea felt the spit at the back of her throat.She opened her mouth and the spit made its way all the way through the young girl.
By this time the man that decided to face fuck Dragana had finished and he decided to cover Dragana s face with his cum.
Lea was still alive to her suprise,she would stay alive for a while more.
Next Dragan was lead to her Jessica machine and was straped down just like Lea before her.
Unlike Lea,Dragana did not try to escape,she knew there was no whay she was making her way out of this.
"pleaseeee....dont kill me...!!!"She begged and pleeded with the men.
But just like with Lea,the activation button was pressed and Dragana felt the spit start to move.
Now being even smaller the Lea,this was much more painful for Dragana.
The spit strched her poor pussy.
The fact that her face was still driping with cum only added to her humiliation.
Soon her own saw sprung to life and just like with Lea it sliced her open and spilled her guts out on to the machine s disposal slide.
Dragana had lost the strenght to even cry anymore.
The pain of the saw was unbarible.
but soon the spit made its way through Dragana aswell.
Then both girls started their long roasts.
Both girls still alive,still feeling the pain of the fire as it turned their meat in to a golden brown.
Later that night,back in the school,the headmaster of Dolcette high was giving his planed speach.
"Good evning everyone,I want to thank everyone here for their hard work this year.Tonight we have a special dinner planed,as you know this school used death as a punishment for
a long time,and im glad to say we are finnaly bringing that punishment back.Two of our students,Dragana and Lea have been selected to be your dinner and the firs girls to pay
the full price of breaking the rules of the school."
Then Dragana and Lea were wheeled out the roasted and beautifuly prepared girls.
"Now I hope you enjoy tonight s special dinner,Dig in everyone"
A short story.
it contains death,dolcette and rape themes,so please view at your own peril.
it contains death,dolcette and rape themes,so please view at your own peril.
The story has a lot of small formatting & spelling errors. If you want the reader to enjoy it more you can go through and polish it. Near the top right of the page you should see a button that says "Edit with StashWriter." If you click that, you should be able to make any edits or changes you wish.
(There's also a button that's simply called "Edit." I don't use that one very much. I prefer the "Edit in StashWriter" button.)
I do this a lot. When I post a story here I keep making small edits and corrections (sometimes big ones) for months, trying to make it better.
Let me say your English is excellent. I really admire people outside of English-speaking countries who learn our language so well.
This is a mostly non-consensual story. I don't have a problem with that and I'm sure some people like to read this sort of thing. It's only a fantasy. However non-consensual stories are not the ones that I like most. I prefer when my main characters have some mixed emotions. For example, in this story, it might be fun and quirky if one girl has a non-consensual attitude but the other has mixed feelings.
One girl could say, "Oh my God -- this is horrible!"
The other could smile and shrug and say, "Yeah, but admit it, you've wondered what it would feel like. We all have. We wouldn't be at this school if we didn't find the idea a little bit of a turn on. So if we have to do this let's try to stay upbeat and enjoy the adventure."
I'd love for the semi-willing girl to turn back to the Principle and ask in a sweet and flirtatious way, "Will you tie our hands here? Or will someone do that later?"
He could say, "I can do it now if you're both ready."
She could smile and nod and say, "Yes, I think we're both ready for that."
.... Anyway, those are my reactions, since you asked for my views. My best advice is to write whatever story you like -- don't let others influence you away from the kind of work you most want to read or write.
One last thing -- if you want to get more readers I'd recommend posting your story in some of the "Groups" here at DA that are focused on this type of story.
I have never seen someone take the time to write such a well worded reply to a request for a critic.
I will try to implament your sugestions and,im only wondaring witch grupe would you sugest to join?
As for the renders,im still buying characters and props and learning about doing the lighting in them.
Again thank you so much for this amazing reply
(All of my stories and art are posted to some groups. So if you want, you can look at any of my stories and art and you'll get an idea about which groups are a good fit with your work.)
I have Fanfiction Request: Longpig Hamburger Fastfood Restaurant
Meats as Hamburger: WWE's Sasha Banks and WWE's Bayley, WWE's Natalya, WWE's Ruby Riott, WWE's Sarah Logan, WWE's Liv Morgan, WWE's Ronda Rousey, WWE's Becky Lynch.
Diners: Billionaires
any specific requests for each girl, like how they would be prepared and served ?
And trust me,i knew sluts like them.
Tho this was a real fun one to write
It's fun to read the choices of the spectators.