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A full teardrop runs down a pale cheek. It pauses, twinkling on the edge of a trembling jaw; another drop joins it, and as the little throat contracts in one final swallow, the tear does not touch the thick white rope as it drips from the uneasy chin, and lands on a milky white breast below. Within a fraction of a second, the teardrop finds a soft nipple set in motion by hyperventilating lungs. A few more drops join from above and form a cooling salty coat around the hardening nipple. Then, for a magic moment, the breast is weightless. Like the beautiful little body of which it is a part, it falls five, maybe six inches, and for a moment changes shape, together with its twin, in a joyful little dance, before the thick white noose tightens under the delicate head. With a twitch the pair bounces in joy, leaving the teardrop in free air until it once again joins warm skin; it passes a sweet navel, runs over the smoothness between two young legs, and embraces a little pink button already stirring. It rests for a little while as shoulders and hips writhe desperately in vain. Then, as a pair of knees is lifted, the teardrop is released by a warm, searching head that makes the helpless girl shiver in ecstasy, as the teardrop blends in and mixes with thick liquid at the slippery encircled tip. The following moment the shaft sinks deep into the helpless body, and the magic blend of fear and joy disappears into the hanged little girl.


Thanks to editor MephMarwood :iconmephmarwood:
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Gabidu25 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2018
Pretty ! beautiful story written;) 
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uniqueuna Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Thank You!
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Gabidu25 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2018
;) 
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Gabidu25 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2019
I really love this story.
I once again read your story, the details are breathtaking ;) 
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likedangler Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2018
sensuous.  erotic.  Imagination-stirring (as well as other things stirring...)
May the creative juices keep flowing from you.
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uniqueuna Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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HaroldHemp Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2018
Lovely.  You have a gift for the written word.  Please share more with us.  
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:iconuniqueuna:
uniqueuna Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Thank You!
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Sacron22 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2018
Terrific writing.  Sexual, gentle, edges toward romance.  The tear on your nipple... shocking sexuality, really got me aroused.  
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uniqueuna Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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DrGeppetto3D Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2018
You can really put a lot of fantasy in just a few words, wonderful!!!
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uniqueuna Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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anyone2016 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautifully described.
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uniqueuna Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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MephMarwood Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A whole story in the experience of a drop of salty water. All the rest left to the imagination. Sweet, lovely, and poetic. Last sentence is a treasure!
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uniqueuna Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
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