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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, which contains adult content and scenes of horror, violence and gore that some may find disturbing. Do not read on if you are likely to be upset or offended by such things.


The loud chatter of the expectant crowd died down to a quiet murmur as the lights in the auditorium dimmed, indicating that the show was about to begin. Moments later, rock music began blasting out from the speaker stacks on either side of the stage. A couple of soft yellow lights brightened again, focusing on the stage. Into this newly lit arena strode the first act of the evening, a beautiful, busty woman dressed in nothing but black lingerie and knee-high black rubber boots. In time to the music, she entered from the right of the stage and sauntered across to the centre. From backstage, a female voice addressed the crowd over the PA system:

"Ladies and gentlemen, please give a warm welcome to our first act, the delightful Eva!". Eva reached the centre of the stage, smiling seductively at the crowd as she gyrated her body in time to the music. She gazed out across the room, winking in acknowledgement of the applause, whistles and cat-calls from the audience in the stalls to the front and sides of the stage, and waving to the unseen spectators in the private booths on the upper levels. Tossing her head back, she flicked her shoulder length dyed-blonde hair away from her eyes, dark with mascara, and began to perfrom a striptease act. As she danced seductively, the announcer continued reeling off some vital statistics about the performer. "Eva is 25 years old, is five feet six inches tall and hails from Europe. She's an aspiring actress and says her best feature is her stunning 34G breasts!"

In response to this reference, Eva unhooked her brassiere with one hand and let it fall to the floor, covering her chest with the other arm as she teased the crowd. They didn't have long to wait though, as seconds later the sexy stripper sank to her knees, placing both hands behind her head and giving the crowd a full view of her ample breasts, to a chorus of whoops and cheers. Leaning forward, she crawled, on her hands and knees, towards the front of the stage. A mischievous grin played on her pouting lips as she slowly slid her black panties over her curvy behind and down her legs. Eva casually flicked the underwear off her foot, carefully ensuring nobody in the crowd could get a good view of her nether regions. Now wearing nothing but the black rubber boots up to her knees, she quickly swivelled around 180 degrees, stood up and slinked back to the centre of the stage, the hypnotic swaying of her buttocks mesmerising the crowd.

Back in the centre of the stage Eva turned towards the crowd, covering her crotch with one hand and sat on the floor, stetching her rubber-clad legs out in front of her, knees pressed together. Then, slowly and sensually, she began to peel off the rubber boot on her left leg, occasionally parting her legs just for a second to give the crowd a glimpse of the softness between her thighs. Flicking the first boot away, she carressed the inside of her leg and wiggled her toes at the enchanted crowd. The right boot soon followed, and now completely naked, the skilful stripper adopted a kneeling position again, finally parting her legs and giving the delighted viewers a full view of her pussy, neatly trimmed with a narrow landing strip.

Smiling sweetly, Eva cupped her left breast with one hand, while her right hand slid slowly up her inner thigh. She began to rub her labia with two fingers, gently at first then with increasing urgency as the show reached a new level of intensity. Then she slid the two fingers inside herself, tilting her head backwards and closing her eyes as she let out a convincing gasp of pleasure. Suddenly, and without warning, a huge jet of steam burst out of the stage beneath the stripper, engulfing her completely and obscuring her from view. Simultaneously the music stopped and the auditorium fell completely silent, save from a few whispered comments from the stunned crowd. Slowly, the steam cleared and the audience began to be able to discern the figure of the stripper in the centre of the stage once again. Eva was still kneeling with one hand on her breast, one between her thighs, but was now completely motionless. Her whole body had taken on a blue tinge, and a thin layer of wintery frost coated her pale skin. It appeared as if she had been frozen solid. Her head remained tilted backwards, her eyes closed. Her mouth was frozen open, as if still gasping in pleasure, or perhaps in shock at whatever had just happened to her - although it was not at all clear if she had had any time to react at all.

The audience remained transfixed on the immobile stripper for a couple of minutes, her motionless body glistening in the dimly lit arena as the steam cleared from the stage until, snapping them out of their awed silence, another figure emerged from the left side of the stage. An athletic dark-haired woman clad in a skin-tight, blue latex catsuit, strode towards the motionless, kneeling figure. She was barefoot, with the latex suit covering her entire body from the neck down to her ankles, save for a partially unzipped front which exposed some of her cleavage. She stood next to Eva's frozen form, and smiled warmly at the crowd, addressing them in a voice which was immediately recognisable as that of the announcer who had introduced the stripper a few minutes earlier.

"Ladies and gentlemen, please give another generous round of applause for the lovely Eva, who I think you'll agree has put on quite a show for us tonight!". The audience responded cautiously at first, then with increasing volume. The woman continued: "I'm Kitty, and I'll be your hostess for the evening." Acknowledging the resultant applause, Kitty looked down at the inert stripper: "Doesn't she look amazing posed like this?! She'd make a lovely decoration for our lobby, don't you think?" A few audience members cheered and laughed at this objectifying joke at the stripper's expense. Kitty leant over, gently brushing the side of Eva's head with a latex-clad hand as she continued: "Unfortunately, the slightly....crude flash freezing process we've used on poor Eva tends to leave subjects rather.....fragile." A few brittle strands of frozen hair broke off the side of the stripper's head and fell to the floor. Kitty began to run her gloved hand sensually over the stripper's torso and tapped gently with her knuckles on the right breast. The resulting tapping sound indicated to any viewers who remained in doubt that the stripper had indeed been totally solidified.

Kitty carressed Eva's cheek, then slowly and sensually slid three fingers into the frozen stripper's helpless, accepting mouth. She placed her other hand against the back of Eva's head. Then without any warning, she jerked her hands back and upwards. With a sickening, icey crack, the top part of the frozen girl's head just snapped off in her grasp. The audience gasped in astonishment. Kitty balanced the stripper's upper head on one hand, raising the other hand to cover her own lips in mock horror. "Ooops", she exclaimed, her eyes wide and innocent but an arched eyebrow and cruel half-smile indicating her real sentiments. Only Eva's lower jaw, chin and bottom row of teeth remained attached to her neck and the audience could even see her tongue poking almost comically out of her halved mouth, blue and frozen in an upward curl.

"Oh well!", Kitty shrugged, smiling at the crowd as she carefully placed the top half of the stripper's frozen head on the stage a few feet away from the rest of her body, facing the crowd with Eva's overbite resting on the ground. Kitty walked back to the left side of the stage and disappeared for a moment. She emerged seconds later carrying a baseball bat over her shoulder with a casual swagger. She knew the audience could guess what was coming next. With a wink, and a cheeky grin, she stood over the frozen naked stripper's body and raised the bat behind her own head. A few members of the audience started an impromptu countdown "Three....two.....one....". With a single, athletic movement, Kitty swung the bat towards the helpless stripper, connecting directly with the frozen orb that had minutes ago been a soft, warm breast. Immediately, and spectacularly, the stripper's torso and arms exploded into dozens of large frozen chunks and hundreds of smaller fragments which scattered backwards across the stage. TV screens to the left, right and above the stage quickly replayed the shattering in slow motion. As the bat connected, the stripper's right breast had been instantly pulverised into icey mush, with cracks spidering out across her torso and arms, breaking the fragile, helpless body into several pieces. Sent flying backwards by the impact of the bat, many of the chunks continued to break apart into smaller pieces as they bounced across the stage, taking several seconds to come to rest. The cameras picked out a few recognisable chunks of frozen girlbits littering the stage - a hand here, half a breast with erect frozen nipple still attached there. The beautiful stripper's torso, magnificent breasts and all, had been utterly destroyed.

All that was left in the centre of the stage, as the hostess Kitty admired her handiwork, was the stripper's rigid lower half from the waist down, still frozen degradingly in a kneeling position with legs spread. A couple of inches of spinal column were visible jutting out of her jagged, cracked waistline. And to complete the humiliating nature of her demise, the cameras picked up two of Eva's frozen fingers stuck to her inner thigh. While the rest of her hand and arm had shattered along with her torso, these fingers remained inserted in her solidified pussy, still exploring her most intimate area for all to see. The audience broke into spotaneous applause and cheers at the spectacular display they had just witnessed. Those in the private booths above were no doubt enjoying themselves, and each other, more intimately.

Kitty gave a little bow in response to the applause, and motioned with her hands for the audience to let her speak. "Thank you, thank you, on behalf of me, and poor Eva here who isn't able to show her appreciation right now. I'm sure she'd be glad that you got so much enjoyment from watching her give her all, literally, for you tonight. Or maybe she wouldn't, but the poor thing isn't really in a position to complain now."

Allowing a further round of applause and cheers, Kitty continued: "Don't go anywhere, that was just the start. We've got an amazing show planned for you tonight and we'll be right back once one of our crew has swept up the mess out here." She swung the bat over her shoulder and started walking towards the back-left of the stage. Pausing, as she approached the still intact upper part of the stripper's head resting on the stage, Kitty looked back over her shoulder with a cruel smile and winked at the crowd. Slowly, she pressed her right, bare foot down on top of Eva's head. As she increased the pressure, the fragile skull cracked and gave way under her foot. The ex-stripper's beautiful face split open and collapsed into icey mush as it was crushed by the hostess's foot. The stage cameras zoomed in to give the audience a close-up as one of the hapless dancer's eyeballs popped out of her collapsing skull and was caught under Kitty's toes. Noticing this, Kitty took great delight in squishing the lifeless frozen orb into an icey pulp which oozed up between her toes. She winced a little and shivered at the sharp, cold sensation running through her foot. She continued for a few seconds, grinding the collapsed mess of stripper skull, face and brain under her foot until nothing recognisable was left of the unfortunate girl's head. Then, with a final wave to the crowd, she sauntered off stage accompanied by the occasional icey crunch of a random piece of shattered stripper being crushed under her feet. The stripper's lifeless, solidified lower body, still frozen permanently in its masturbatory pose, remained in the centre of the stage, mindlessly soaking up the applause and cheers from the delighted guests.


© 2019 - 2020 SolidOffer
This is a later chapter of a longer story started out in "Market Value - Prologue". It's an idea I've had in my head for a while and wanted to get out there, so I decided to publish out of sequence. Once again, it's very dark so proceed with caution.

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Curia-DDHobbyist Writer
WOW!!!!!

That was so incredibly intense, and exciting!!! So dark...and yet I couldn't stop reading!
wringer-uk's avatar
Superb. Eva's worthless status is just wonderful - required to strip then be reduced to a frozen source of fun and ridicule. Kitty's smirking dismissive attitude as well as her smashing apart of Eva are hugely enjoyable. And I love the crowd enjoying themselves, happily accepting poor young Eva's brutal demise merely for some entertainment.
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twinevr1Hobbyist Writer
This is dark, but I like it still!
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emikochan13Professional Digital Artist
Such a great story and so well written, awesome once again ^_^
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Great job.

Is there a link to Market Value - Prologue?
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SolidOfferHobbyist Writer
Thanks! The prologue is here: www.deviantart.com/solidoffer/…
sarkan299's avatar
Incredible work!! Wow, poor Eva! I bet she wishes she didn't take this job! Well, I guess if her frozen lower half could think it would think that... 

Oh, and excellent title!
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