I'm not an artist, but I love DeviantArt and enjoy responding to pictures here that excite my natural slavegirl, submissive instincts. And lots of people are watching me, I feel I ought to give something, so I'll try posting some of my poems, I hope they'll be enjoyed. Here's
How to Strip a Girl
Be rough,
rip if you must,
brook no resistance
you're the boss,
but –
Strip slowly.
Enjoy
each newly naked nook
my loosened layers lay bare.
Peel me, feel me,
skilfully sculpt me,
sliver them off me,
soft shirt, short skirt,
slinky, silky slip,
so show my shape.
Pause now,
I'm panting,
shaking,
as searchlight eyes
scan skin.
Brutal with big hands
bruising my bare breasts,
butcher my bra!
Lingering, fingering,
last little lingerie
sliding down slim thighs,
slithering thin thong,
So I surrender,
stripped, stretched,
your victim
bare sacrifice.
Then at last the moment comes when the bows that secure your thong are pulled undone. But he does not whisk away your thong just yet. It lies loose on your body, as if it were a feather that can be taken away by the slightest of breezes.
"You know what to do now," he says. "Be silent, and do it."
But in fact you do not know, and dare not ask. Guessing, you shake your hips and the thong falls away. You are revealed unto him.
Yes, I like that approach, think of yourself as the predator, your slavegirl's your captured prey, she's yours now, no hurry, you take your time revealing, exploring, tasting her... if she's wise she'll be alert, responsive, anticipating and making herself ready for what's coming next...
I'll try to get another poem up this weekend.
But regarding your intro statement, "I feel I ought to give something," I think you already give a lot by commenting in poetic ways on other people's work. You grace other people's pages with your contributions.
And your assembling collections of what you feel is other people's best work is a big contribution. It's an honor to have one's work included on your page.
damn near perfect