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I'm not an artist, but I love DeviantArt and enjoy responding to pictures here that excite my natural slavegirl, submissive instincts. And lots of people are watching me, I feel I ought to give something, so I'll try posting some of my poems, I hope they'll be enjoyed. Here's


How to Strip a Girl


Be rough,
rip if you must,
brook no resistance
you're the boss,
but –
Strip slowly.
Enjoy
each newly naked nook
my loosened layers lay bare.
Peel me, feel me,
skilfully sculpt me,
sliver them off me,
soft shirt, short skirt,
slinky, silky slip,
so show my shape.
Pause now,
I'm panting,
shaking,
as searchlight eyes
scan skin.
Brutal with big hands
bruising my bare breasts,
butcher my bra!
Lingering, fingering,
last little lingerie
sliding down slim thighs,
slithering thin thong,
So I surrender,
stripped, stretched,
your victim
bare sacrifice.
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Edwardv17 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Love it :)
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eulaliamerida Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2018
Thanks #tastethewine, #Esday and #Fr3ed1 Great comments, it's nice to know I'm giving pleasure ;) 
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Fr3ed Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2018
What a surprise to find an erotic poem that I actually like and find erotic.  That's definitely a first for me.  brilliantly done!
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Esday Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course you are an artist!
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tastethewine Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018
Wonderful!  Really wonderful!
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Sacron22 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2017
Good poem.  And good advice. 
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Killerbee76 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is some great stuff! Mind if I borrow some of the ideas for text role play?
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eulaliamerida Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2017
My pleasure! :) 
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Killerbee76 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! You're a pretty terrific writer. Feel free to look through my stories and pictures if you like. I would love to get some feedback, and I get the sense you might enjoy some of it. If not, that's ok too.
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herSONherMASTER Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2017  Professional General Artist
*Grins widely and eagerly* Bellissimo❤
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dazinbane Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2017
Nicely done, I will bare that in mind...
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russellcattle Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2017
Oh, you can resist if you want.  It amuses your master. Only by struggling against your bonds can you get an appreciation how firmly they hold you.  Perhaps after a while you will tire and then lay still without resistance.  
 
Then at last the moment comes when the bows that secure your thong are pulled undone. But he does not whisk away your thong just yet.  It lies loose on your body, as if it were a feather that can be taken away by the slightest of breezes.  
 
"You know what to do now," he says.  "Be silent, and do it."
 
But in fact you do not know, and dare not ask. Guessing, you shake your hips and the thong falls away.  You are revealed unto him. 
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eulaliamerida Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2017
yes, having that scrap left on me and having to shake it off is more humiliating, makes me more aware of my nakedness, vulnerability, and His total conquest of me...
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Scarecrow7777 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2017
You are very good at this. Wow. I have a thousand dreams of how to strip a slave, but always imagine proceeding slowly, tearing open ... peeling back but not yet off ... Looking, touching, molesting newly exposed flesh and parts ... not hurrying at any point. Then going back to finish the job.
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eulaliamerida Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2017
Thanks Scarecrow - and welcome to DeviantArt :) 

Yes, I like that approach, think of yourself as the predator, your slavegirl's your captured prey, she's yours now, no hurry, you take your time revealing, exploring, tasting her... if she's wise she'll be alert, responsive, anticipating and making herself ready for what's coming next... 
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CaiusLucius Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2017
This is wonderful and nicely descriptive.
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Sterling557 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017
I'm not quite getting it from the text.  ...You will have to show me. ;-) 
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ronniebegoode Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Very effective. I like the way you've used alliteration to enhance the rhythm. It leads the way to the end, makes it irresistable.
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eulaliamerida Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
Thanks for all these nice comments :) (Smile) 

I'll try to get another poem up this weekend. 
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mahashiva001 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017
This is incredibly erotic, Eulalia. Way to enthrall a guy while leaving him in firm belief that he's the one in control! :-)
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delossilvanos Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2017
Nice!  I second Montycrusto's sentiments.
But regarding your intro statement,  "I feel I ought to give something," I think you already give a lot by commenting in poetic ways on other people's work.  You grace other people's pages with your contributions.
And your assembling collections of what you feel is other people's best work is a big contribution.  It's an honor to have one's work included on your page.
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montycrusto Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2017   Traditional Artist
I couldn't agree more!  :thumbsup:  :D
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romangirl Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Interesting and informative!
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montycrusto Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017   Traditional Artist
beautiful, sensual, delicious, metaphysical... with a little sting in its tail...
damn near perfect
:iconclappingplz:
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