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Be brave, young slave,
Your girly games are gone,
Rome's won!

No friends, childhood ends,
Alone,
Some brute's to own.

Your turn, cheeks burn,
Flick back your hair.
Men stare.

Displayed, afraid,
Flesh to be sold
For gold.

Undressed, breasts pressed,
Touched where you know
Men shouldn't go.

You're bare, don't dare
Complain,
Even of pain.

"Where caught?" "Up north."
"They're wild."
"Just a child –

A kid. What d’you bid?"
"Ten" "No, fifteen."
"Okay, thirteen."

"A deal. Slut, kneel!"
Wrists feel
Bonds of steel.

Now stand the brand
Burning your thigh,
Don't cry.

The man commands.
He rules.
No time for fools.

Walk quick to his stick,
Sharp goad,
Stony road.

"Whore's brat, sewer rat,
How long will you take
To break?"

On your knees to please,
Obey,
Only way.

A young captive from The Northern Forest faces a fearful future...

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KhassiAdu Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2018  Student Traditional Artist
It' first poem for me read in English and it very beautiful cos it rime  and cos it accrat 
I not white slave girl I black servant eunuch but it was xact like I reeled when I start work harem boy 6 year ago
Thank you
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eulaliamerida Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2018
Thankyou Khassi - I'm especially glad you feel it reflects your own experience,
that makes me feel quite humble!
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KhassiAdu Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks
Other poems I try read but English too hard but your poem v easy and make me feel like I did feel after they castrate me and I start work as harem boy
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Zungur Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2018
Great poetry!
Very intense without a word too much.
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eulaliamerida Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2018
Thankyou, I'm glad you like it so well!
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Hbarefooter Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2017
You have a very vivid imagination and a great gift to express it adequately. Do you see yourself as a slavegirl who hasn't found a Master upto now and doubts whether you will ever find him?
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eulaliamerida Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2017
Thanks for your nice comments here and on my other writings. In truth, I have found someone who understands my needs and fantasies, we get together as 'Master/slavegirl' often enough, it works for both of us.
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dazinbane Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2017
Very nice, and quite poignant. Could be associated with my character 'Ancilla'...

Mature Content

Ancilla by dazinbane
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eulaliamerida Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2017
Thankyou Dazinbane - yes, your ancilla images express the slavegirl's experience very vividly too. Your negatia has more my looks, i can identify with her! 
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CaiusLucius Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2017
She should exist to please.
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Sterling557 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017
Thirteen is a good price!   I had better get down to the slave market while there is still lots of selection.... and before all the best girls are gone.
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tripx713 Featured By Owner May 24, 2017
oh to be owned!
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eulaliamerida Featured By Owner May 15, 2017
thanks again to all who've added this to their favourites! 
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mahashiva001 Featured By Owner Edited May 10, 2017
Amazing indeed! Who would have known that getting sold in a Roman slave market can be such a poetic experience! :-)
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eulaliamerida Featured By Owner May 1, 2017
Thankyou for all these nice comments, this slavegirl is honoured. 
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orionspacetrader Featured By Owner May 1, 2017
Love it. Thank you.
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agricola64 Featured By Owner May 1, 2017
very nice - thank you!
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montycrusto Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2017   Traditional Artist
Stunningly good.  I really love your language-play, this would be amazing read aloud too. 
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ronniebegoode Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, that conveys the message so well. It's chilling, I've got shivers all down my back. You have a rare talent for erotic verse.
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mincus1 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017
Amazing!Clap  I can't imagine how many northern slavegirls had thoughts like this as they were marched south.....
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KhassiAdu Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2018  Student Traditional Artist
And  African slave BOYS when they were taken north to Arabia and made into eunuchs on the way
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