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Plains rolling endless
Sea of grass a blowing wind
Home of Ancestors
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Shesvii Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
It's very beautiful and the image of nature is sooo powerful! :iconloveloveplz:
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ArthurGarvin Featured By Owner Edited Oct 25, 2018
Nicely done! I like the way your haiku starts with a specific image rooted in nature (the rolling plains) and then generalizes the imagery to be about the Ancestors. The blowing wind makes a nice connector between the physical world of the plains and the spiritual world of the Ancestors because the wind has a physical effect but can't be seen. Lots of thought put into a few powerful words. 
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jameycakeshotty Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you I am so glad you like it. Im a poet and didn't kno it hey! JKs
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Rob66 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2018
Very nice haiku :)
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jameycakeshotty Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you. :)

Hopefully its a $100 Netflix gift card nice.
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Rob66 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2018
I'd vote for you! Good luck and let me know if you win.
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jameycakeshotty Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. Unfortunately its not a voting thing.
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Rob66 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2018
Then I will just keep my fingers crossed for you:)
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jameycakeshotty Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dayum I won :noes:
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Rob66 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2018
For real???
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jameycakeshotty Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah!
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