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The Bite

By gechol
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The Bite ....
They say it's poisonous
They say it's intoxicating
There is no way to escape the bite
There is no need to escape the bite
His Bite
His trap is perfect
He lures every woman that walks into his gaze
He will hypnotize her with his indescribable temptation
So flirtatious she'll trade her freedom with his deadly promise
As he vows to make her death a pleasure/joy of a lifetime
She smiles at him as she fastens the cuffs behind her back
He puts a necklace around her fragile neck
An unbreakable bond between Her and Him
His gift
His curse
His salvation
She starts to wince as the necklace starts to ensnare her
Her ballerina feet start tip-toeing sexily in her heels
Before she gracefully flies up like a black swan
The necklace starts to bite her tender neck
She replies to it with her passioned moans
She's loving it
Like a swan who soars too high
She starts having difficulty breathing
She tries to flap her wings but she is chained in irons
As she gets higher and higher the sun starts burning her lungs
She sweats, she drools, she wets herself
But most importantly she chokes with a soft gurgle
She pedals her feet kicking back and forth
While The loving necklace still bites her lovely neck
Bite
Bite
Bite
Bites her breath away
He claims every breath she takes
As the necklace turns into a noose
Cursing her fate to an erotic death
The bite becomes unbearable
She desperately kicks for breath
But there is no way to fight the noose,
There is no need to fight the noose
Because,
Her breath is his
Her body is his
Her soul is his
He loves her tenderly
For ....
He is her Lover,
He is her God,
He is her Savior,
Blessing her with his ultimate salvation
They say it's poisonous
They say it's intoxicating
There is no way to escape the bite
There is no need to escape the bite
His Bite
His trap is perfect
He lures every woman that walks into his gaze
He will hypnotize her with his indescribable temptation
So flirtatious she'll trade her freedom with his deadly promise
As he vows to make her death a pleasure/joy of a lifetime
She smiles at him as she fastens the cuffs behind her back
He puts a necklace around her fragile neck
An unbreakable bond between Her and Him
His gift
His curse
His salvation
She starts to wince as the necklace starts to ensnare her
Her ballerina feet start tip-toeing sexily in her heels
Before she gracefully flies up like a black swan
The necklace starts to bite her tender neck
She replies to it with her passioned moans
She's loving it
Like a swan who soars too high
She starts having difficulty breathing
She tries to flap her wings but she is chained in irons
As she gets higher and higher the sun starts burning her lungs
She sweats, she drools, she wets herself
But most importantly she chokes with a soft gurgle
She pedals her feet kicking back and forth
While The loving necklace still bites her lovely neck
Bite
Bite
Bite
Bites her breath away
He claims every breath she takes
As the necklace turns into a noose
Cursing her fate to an erotic death
The bite becomes unbearable
She desperately kicks for breath
But there is no way to fight the noose,
There is no need to fight the noose
Because,
Her breath is his
Her body is his
Her soul is his
He loves her tenderly
For ....
He is her Lover,
He is her God,
He is her Savior,
Blessing her with his ultimate salvation
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knighttemplar1Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent writing and such a lovely neck to bite!!! ^^

gecholHobbyist Writer
oh thank you 


knighttemplar1Hobbyist General Artist
I can feel my fangs sinking into your soft neck and jugular......

gecholHobbyist Writer
nice

knighttemplar1Hobbyist General Artist
Ohhh yes...holding you tight as I drink your red elixir of life...

gecholHobbyist Writer
well .... 


knighttemplar1Hobbyist General Artist
Delicious.....

gecholHobbyist Writer
what is your imagination? 

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migoz2Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful!

gecholHobbyist Writer
thank you