Marriage last forever
Tell me how cute i am
Tell me i'm funny and lovely
As a woman, i'm used to how man use me
They throw me away after they done with me
It's like nobody take me seriously
But then i met you
In one of my friend's party
You sad poor thing
All the girl's who get close to you only speak lies to you
They promised they will be with you till the very end
But then they chicken out, leave you hanging alone in that empty room
Like any rose, they have their own thorn
Some woman too afraid to take a leap of faith with you
Some other too afraid to spend the rest of their life with you
But not me
I'm ready to cut all my thorn just for you
The very thing that protecting me and keep me alive
so i throw a party, a marriage party
and you are my groom
You will see i'm not like any other woman that have been with you
My heart is honest, I am yours and yours only
While my friends and family help me decorate the dark room
The place that all other women leave you alone after they use you
The place when i first saw you
When you squeeze the neck of those cheater you know gonna leave you soon enough
Your own domain when men treat you just like a toy to satisfy their girl
But not me
I come with wedding dress
With a priest stand by my side
I take the stairs to stand next to you
The priest ask me
"Will you take your husband in Happiness, Sickness, Rich, Poor, forever till life and dead ?"
"Yes i do!" I look at you
You dont have to say a word, because i already know your heart
"You may kiss the bride"
And in front of everyone we kiss,
I feel your thick strand, so strict and manly, rubbing against my skin
You grip are so firm when you slide yourself and snug my neck tightly, afraid of letting me go
I throw the thornless rose, may that lucky girl get same fate as me
As the priest help me bind my wrist on my back, so i cant never leave you
As i look around where my friends are crying in happiness
My heart is racing, my chest are aching
I jump so sudden, no time thinking back
What is left is a leap of faith to be forever with you
Everyone is cheering when i jump, cuz they dont understand the pain
They only saw how romantic we dance together
Or when i kick my legs desperately, gasping for air
From all your possessive demeanor,
You choke me so hard, keeping me breathless
I'm not blame you for it, after all those women who left you
Oh my sweet husband
Oh poor poor dangling Noose
The clock is slowing down, seconds becoming hours, minutes becoming days, hours becoming years
Time sure flies, as you keep hogging onto me, claiming my body and my souls
The things we do together, flashing before my eyes, as i waddle slowly and my sight starting to fading
This time there are no boyfriend will save me from you
No husband will save his wife from your grip
Because I'm yours, yours only, and yours forever
Because I'm your wife, your honest loyal wife
and our marriage last forever
I love this! (I would, seeing as I have previously written it from the groom's side!)
Yeah, i forget you story, only remember that this is inspired from yours.
I actually write this idea down last year, i only have the prefect mood today 
If you took any inspiration at all from my story I am very happy!
Sadly i think i kind of execute it to be my writing style, instead of your writing style
i gonna try it again in other story
We all have different styles! Your style is just fine. (No 'sadly' about it!)
Well yes, actually i have no style, i think this style of writing i copied from Uniquena
I don't agree! I know uniqueuna's wonderful style, and yours has a quality of its own that is different. We are all influenced by others, but our work reflects our own character and desires.
well yes i try to mimic her but failed 
Because i dont put blowjob scene too much on my writings