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Castle of Innocent

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The night is dark, 
It was so dark, i cant see anything ....
I try to grab something but i did not found any.

I keep walking, and i saw a castle from afar. 
I reach the front gate of the castle ....
I tried to knock,
but i cant. 

Instead the gate is opened by itself.
The room inside hidden in darkness. 
I wander far to the end of hallway. 
I'm sure i hear voices from there. 

I reach my destination. 
I peek inside of who is the inhabitants of this empty castle 
"Welcome home Ivanna."
......
"Welcome home Marrianne."
......

There are women, a lot of women, naked, and enjoying each other in the room. 
In the middle is a Lady wearing a black corset and welcoming some other women. 
Their eyes are covered in white cement thing. 
She open her mouth and her long thick tongue is touching one of the young woman lips. 
The woman open her mouth she letting her mistress to take her completely. 
The two is kissing for a very long time.

Without knowing, i was already next to her side, when she pull her tongue from her mouth. 
She look at me, and greet me
"Welcome home Evangeline." 
She touch my lips. 

I look up to her
She lift my chin
"I was long for you Mistress ...."  
She slide her thumb into my mouth
She can see how desperate i am
How i long to meet her

She move her face closer to me, 
So close i can feel her warm breath. 
She open her mouth .... 
Her tongue slither out from her mouth
She licks around my lips looking for entrance

I open my lips
I let her enter
I let her invade my mouth
Her thick long tongue keep on going
It fills my throat completely

We lock our lips with a kiss
Her wet saliva runs down from her mouth to my mouth
We kiss for hours 
It like an eternity 

Every time she swirl her tongue, i feel a sliver of my life being sucked out from me. 
She keep on moaning as she suck me out
With each moan her vigor become twice unbearable for her
So powerful until i finally notice her dress bottom dress cant no longer her urge to mating

She moans uncontrollably
She push me down on her bed
I tried to get up, but i cant 
She rubs herself on my crotch 
I tried to cover myself by my hands wasn't there

I want to move, i want to run, i want to get away from her
But i cant barely squirm on bed
She grab my hips and push herself into me
She spread me open
So forceful, so powerful, so persuasive 

Her thrust is so rough
Leave me helpless to satisfy her needs
It's feels like forever since it began 
I start to feel like i'm mold into her shape
Before she finally pull it off and leave it twitched in front of me
  
I start to pity her
I crawl to her and suck her out
She help me push it down my throat 
Her twitching finally end in explosion 
It explode deep inside of my throat 
So much it explode outside my mouth

It get into my eyes
It burns so much 
I cant scream or speak,
I have lost my voice
Before knowing I also lost my eyes 
I cant no longer see her 
She help me by wrapping a lace over my eyes
She touch my cheek and kiss me

I want to touch her back, but she's gone
I crawl around the room looking for my Mistress around the sea of women 
They are crawling, kissing, lusting for each other
I can feel Mistress presence so close, 
Yet so far .... 

Most of them are give up to search for her affection and start enjoying each other 
I too was about to give up, 
before i bump into someone i think i know
Her scent is so familiar ....
Without trading words she kiss me 

Her lips feels so familiar .... 
So comforting, 
She feels like yesterday, but a long time ago 
A young maiden named Maria 

In this speechless world
The indescribable world where we living it
The unspeakable truth of our past life 
We trade our stories through kiss and touch 

For the first time i was trade stories with a woman named Maria 
And then the woman next to me, Annette. 
Then a woman next to her, Joanna. 
Then a woman next to her, and her, and her, and her .....

I kiss her neck, as someone suck on my breast, while someone else sucking me in a place she shouldn't be
We happily enjoy each other in this place

I'm glad to finally found my place in this castle 
A castle of innocent souls. 
A castle of lust.
A sinful place we called Castle of Innocent.
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I missed your stories 😎

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gecholHobbyist Writer

This is i actually finished with the 3rd tribute story, but i just choose not to publish it :)

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okay amiga. Just keep going you do a good job

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You love it ?

and im writing new story, in new story there still your character in it.

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Oh Nice. TY very much. o bet that your storie will be fantastic 😉

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Dark and erotic. Very nice, Gechol!

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I dont know about that, this one is kinda old, but i writting new story that about to released soon, so i think i gonna publish it to introduce new character

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I look forward to seeing that

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i made a mistake by putting too much detail, i wonder if i should cut into parts ?

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Well, I like detail - it gives depth to a story - but too much can also be distracting, sometimes. Cutting it into parts might help with that.


(I hope you don't mean 'Marriage last forever', becasue that is fine just as it is!)

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No, the story still in progress. RN i lost my mood, and will continue to write again later.

if i keep writing while having different mood, i gonna lose the interest.


But still cutting into parts might be a bit challenging, since i have to keep reader interested in it :meow:

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I am looking forward to the new story! But I know exactly what you mean about writing when in the mood - mine comes and goes like the wind. When I don't have it, nothing is right.


When I cut something up (I had to do this with 'The waiting blade' where I originally posted it), I always try to leave the section with a little bit of a cliffhanger or anticipation, to keep the reader hooked and wanting to know more.

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Oh !!! How to do that ?

I never able to do that, since i know the story will end

Even in cliffhanger i know what the next to it.

Maybe i should gave myself an amnesia

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