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Angels Peril

By gechol
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In 1995, my national Television copies everything from whatever western TV show over to us. Two of them i remember is Baywatch and Charlie's Angel.
While the national TV struggle to keep their costumer asking for more show of the Baywatch and Charlie's Angel episode each week, They began to air the copycat of the show.
Surely my 4 year old self didnt remember the title of the show. But let's just give it name as the original Charlie's Angel show.
So the show is not perfectly copy the western TV show, and cast 3 Asian women instead of Caucasian. Their name remain the same Sabrina, Jill, and Kelly.
I watch a lot of episode Charlie's Angel and Baywatch from my national TV show, but only 1 episode and 1 episode only i remember till today.
One morning Sabrina go outside and buy an ice cream for her nephew, at that time, there is this one little girl who looks sad. She try to cheer her up by offering an ice cream to her, but she sobs and start crying, she said "I want my mommy." Then Sabrina ask "where's your mom?" and the little girl continued to cry. Until she able persuade her to show her house.
They both walk 2 block away to her house and talk to her dad that her daughter miss her mom and wonder where her mom could be. Her father is kinda panicked when her girlfriend show up and say that her mom is run away with her boyfriend, leaving her with her daughter. Sabrina would have believed it but she curious for a second having a glimpse at the living room with with the wife picture near the incense and some mystical offering. She grow suspicious that her husband make her own wife a sacrifice to evil spirit to become rich and powerful. She then said to the little "Dont worry i will find your mom, okay." Her husband said "Dont bother Miss, i'm sure she will never back." Sabrina leave the house and contacted Charlie and the other Angels.
After meeting they all agree to help the little one to find her mother. They watch the little girl house, after the girlfriend's father exit the house, they say a man in black javanese outfit enter the house, a man who usually consider a powerful voodoo practitioner. After waiting for hours the man leave the house, they both follow the voodoo man to a shack make of bamboo wood and in the back there is an ugly man with shovel digging the ground, beside him is a woman who is the little girl mother.
The Angel didnt not quite get what the mother do with the dangerous voodoo man and his accomplice. While the Angels decide to wait and see for what will happen, the accomplice ask the woman to jump to the hole in the ground. Then he buried the woman up to her shoulder, leaving only her head above the ground. The Angel become uneasy for the event that about to happen but they remain hiding and hope nothing bad will happen.
The mother of the little girl remain buried in the ground for quite some time until midnight and the moon become full, then the voodoo man ask "The master is ready for you pretty one." The woman reply "But i'm not sure about this Mbah (a call for black magic practitioner)." "Dont worry pretty one, im sure your husband will take a good care of your daughter and they will become rich and all business he has will become successful. Dont you talk about this with your husband too?" "Yes Mbah, if this is what the best for my daughter i'm ready now Mbah." Then the voodoo man circling garrote make of small chains around her head, then he look up to the full-moon and pray to his Master "Oh Master please be kind to accept this woman sacrifice and give her family a luxury life in return." After finished praying he start to choke the little girl mom with his garrote, tighten the chain around her neck, while she cant fight back and feel the chain of the garrote slowly wrapping around her neck, coiling and taking her breath away.
For some minute the Angels not able to move from the horrors they saw. The little girl mother eyes meet with Sabrina, in her helpless state she kinda feel regret and scared, not ready to be sacrificed to an evil entity. In her gasp and gagged she desperately ask Sabrina for help, her tongue sticking out desperate for some air until finally her eyes rolled up and she stop making any sound. The voodoo man finally release his garrote on the poor woman body. Sabrina is cried and scream, rushed to the evil man for what he had done to the now lifeless woman. But Sabrina get bounced of before able to attack him, "Too bad, the moon is not full anymore or i will be able to make another ritual for you nosy bitch!". The voodoo man accomplice quickly get inside to grab a gun, but the Angels quickly retreat and admitting their defeat.
The next morning the Angels come to seek a powerful voodoo witch. The meet with an old lady who be happen to claim to be a powerful witch and can help people from their problem. The Angles consult their problem and somehow the witch agree to help them.
A week later the Angels had decide to infiltrate the voodoo man lair. Jill supposed to be a bait, Kelly distract the accomplice and Sabrina gather information of the voodoo man weakness for the witch to counter him. Jill come with a provocative suit, accompany by Kelly to the voodoo man. Jill manage to gain the voodoo man trust that she want to be a sacrifice in exchange for her parent good fortune, they both continue to talk in the voodoo man bed room for her reason to know him more intimate. It leave Kelly seducing the voodoo man accomplice, she also manage to drag him to his room for a more sexual relationship, Kelly said she love a man who service a black magic. With the two man gone, Sabrina able to sneak successfully to voodoo man underground lair. The air is thick with blood and rotten smell, it was dark even in mid daylight, she light her match and try to find the wall, when suddenly she touch a face, a face of a woman, and beside her is another face of a woman, when her eyes able to adjust with the darkness, she able to see the room is full with the head of the voodoo man victim, including the little girl mom that recently been mounted to the wall. There are a lot of dry blood in the wall painted the wall dark red. Cant handle with the agonizing scenery she saw, she immediately puke and break a bowl from the table. The voodoo man grow suspicious of the sound and become alert. But thanks to her provocative skill Jill is able to convince him it was only a cat or something.
The Angels regroup at their base to learn what they can about the voodoo man. Sabrina is cry and feel sorry for almost blew up their team cover while she learn nothing. Jill and Kelly chill her up. Jill able to gain Intel that the voodoo man always powerful and protected with his master slave from the mystical real all the time, except when he praying to his master, he wont be able to protect himself, or his master will accuse him as disrespect to Him. While Kelly able to learn that his accomplice is dealing with drugs, so he might trap him to police and get both him and the voodoo man for police. While Charlie somehow still not sure the plan might work, he care about bring a justice to a little girl, but he care about her Angel the most. After convincing Charlie about the plan, the group agree that Jill should keep being a bait by saying she agree to be sacrificed in the next full-moon, while Kelly and Sabrina hiding in case the plan goes wrong. Meanwhile Bosley will stay with the witch watching when she should attack the voodoo man with magic.
Skipped to the appointed day, Jill come to the voodoo man shack alone. Sabrina and Kelly hiding in the woods watching her from afar. Arrived at the shack the voodoo man ask her "Do you wear what i told you to wear pretty one?". "Yes Mbah," Jill reply removing her coat showing her body in an attractive babydoll. "Now, that's how to please the Master. Im sure He will reward your parents with good fortune and healthy life." His accomplice finished dug the hole and prepared to bury Jill body. Jill become uneasy to become so helpless in the situation. The others angels are contacting Bosley, He said they are ready. Bosley ask the witch to ready her spell. Voodoo man coils his garrote around Jill neck, and ask "Are you ready to meet your Master pretty one?" Jill suddenly get cold feet and decide to say she is not ready "Can we wait a few minute Mbah?" "Very well pretty one" He reply. Sabrina and Kelly goes panic, The witch is ready to attack the voodoo man, Bosley is told to stop her right away, but she didnt hear anything, she keep chanting her spell and attack the voodoo man while he still protected. The master slave who know the voodoo man about to get attacked by the witch decide to protect him and bounce off the spell to the witch. The witch body cant take the spell and vomit blood at instant and get heart attack. Bosley tell the girl that the witch attack is failed and has bounced of to her. He tell the Angels, to try revive her and need the Angels to buy more time.
Jill look up to now panicked Sabrina and Kelly as the voodoo man say "now already five minute, lets proceed" while he look up to full moon. Jill said "Wait!! Wait Mbah!!" Then suddenly Kelly and Sabrina get out from their cover, saying they want to be a tumbal (sacrifice) too. The voodoo man says "Well is this not the nosy bitch from last time". Sabrina scared and stammered "Sorry for last time Mbah, actually i just sneak in want to be a tumbal (sacrifice) but i get scared when i saw it last time. I want my parents to have a luxury life too Mbah, and make then happy and have long life." "What about you pretty one?" He look up to Kelly. "Me too, Mbah. i just followed my friend and decided that i want to be tumbal (sacrifice) too Mbah." Kelly said. "Very well, you all beautiful ladies, the Master will be happy to accept you in the after life."
The Angel manages to give the team some times while the voodoo man accomplices dig 2 more holes next to Jill. Bosley quickly bring the witch to hospital as she get help, he call cop about a black magic practitioner about to kill 3 ladies in the woods. The police were not trust him, and Bosley said if they are not gonna trust him, they might gonna trust the good witch, and so the police arrive to the hospital to ask question with the witch who still not awake from her weak state.
Meanwhile the voodoo man accomplice is finished dug 2 more holes. The voodoo man the Angels who now naked in the underwear to step inside to each hole. Kelly jump in the middle hole while Sabrina position herself in last. Now the three Angels just position themselves in a very difficult situation. They look at each other while the accomplice bury their body and only leave their heads above the ground. The voodoo man say to them "Well beautiful ladies now is the time for you to meet the Master, please send my regards and be a good women, please his desire in the afterlife and you all should be treated kindly." The voodoo man look up to the moon and start praying "Oh Master please be kind to accept this woman sacrifice and give her family a luxury life in return." "NO!! NOOO!!! PLEASE NO!!! I DONT WANT TO DIE!! NO I DONT WANT TO DIE!!!" Jill freak out as the garrote start biting her neck. Kelly who are next to her cant believe what she just saw, she scream "JILL!!! NOOO!!! PLEASE NO!!!! T-THIS CANT BE HAPPENING!!! THIS CANT BE HAPPENING!!! OH MY GOD!!! JILL NOOO!!!". Jill loud gagged noise deliver more terror to Kelly, while Sabrina speaks "Please Mbah, Please dont take her first. Take me instead. I will give myself as first tumbal (sacrifice)." The voodoo man reply "Dont worry pretty one. I will sacrifice you all, you really are impatient are you?" he said while tighten his grip on the garrote, making Jill suffer in her erotic peril, unable to move, unable to fight back at his assailant, unable to use her athletic move to slip away from her near death situation. Jill still able to look at Kelly in her last effort, their eyes are met and she speak her final whisper in her gagged voice she said "HHHNNNGGGGGHHH!!!! HAAAAAAAA. . . . AAAAAACCCKK!!!! NNNNNNNNNNN .....AAAAAA ..... AAAAAAAAAAAAA...... AAAAAAGGHHH!!!!!". Kelly who watch Jill last moment just a few inches from her is sobbing and her eyes are full of tears, ruining her mascara. Finally Jill eyes is rolled up and she gagged for her last time before finally she was still.
"Nooo.... Jill Im sorry!! Im sorry.... Im so sorry!!!" Kelly feel regret to not be able to help her friend from out of her misery. Then the voodoo man look up to Kelly and he said "Now that your friend is with the Master, you must be cant wait to meet her, right?" as he said while the voodoo man coiling Kelly soft neck. "NOO!! NOOO!!! GET AWAY FROM ME YOU MONSTER!!! GET AWAY OR I SWEAR I WILL FUCKI . . . . . . . EEEEKKK!!!" before Kelly finished cursing him the voodoo man has already tighten the garrote, using it to block her vocal cord bad mouthing him. Kelly is very helpless and in her helpless attempt she look at Sabrina. Sabrina is now unconscious, maybe Jill death is too much for her, or maybe she just decide not to look at their dying friends, or maybe the voodoo man put a spell so she will remain silent. While looking at Sabrina, Kelly get a glimpse of hope. She hear a police siren from a very far far away. She hope that she can scream so the police will hear and help her and Sabrina. She stare at Sabrina who still unconscious in her sleep. She stare so deep hoping that Sabrina will wake up from her stare and scream as loud at she can. After staring for and gagging for a minute at Sabrina, Kelly start to cry uncontrollably. Her vision start to darken while her chest feels so hot. Her lungs start desperate asking her for fresh air, her tongue is sticking out leaking some saliva. Its looks like Kelly is already gone, but for some reason after the voodoo man loosen his garrote she still able to speak some word "HNNAAAAAAA........ AAAAAAAAHHHKKKK!!! OOOOOOO.......... NNNNNNNNNNNNN.........AAAAAAAHHHHHHKKKKKK!!!! NNNNNGGGGGGGGHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAA..........." so he tighten his garrote again on Kelly neck, while somehow the goner lady still try to fight back. The voodoo man make sure Kelly really gone this time, he keep his garrote tight for another minute until Kelly stop dripping saliva from her lousy mouth.
Bosley now ride with the police try to save Jill which he didnt know who already gone, and Kelly too recently, only left with Sabrina. He and the police is ride through the whole forest try to find out where the ladies could be.
Moments later Sabrina wakes up while she feels cold metal chains slithering her neck. She had a nightmare about a woman who she about to save, but she failed to prevent that from happening, and her friend Jill and Kelly captured by and evil voodoo man who put them in the same peril as the late woman. They both screaming asking her help, but somehow she cant move to save them, and they both died from a garrote on their neck while starring at her desperate for help. She open her eyes, she had one hell of nightmarish dream she tried to forgot. The place is dark, she want to rubs her eyes, but somehow she cant. She want to move her body but she cant move anything. She then greeted by an familiar voice "Are you wake up now pretty lady?" She look around to see where the voice come from but she not found anyone. Then voice keep say "You have a beautiful hair, shame i have to let you go..." as the voice right behind her, she can feel the man breath who sniffing her hair. "No, No let me go. . . . who are you? What happening to me?" protest Sabrina. "Are you not remember who am i O'Pretty Lady? look to your right". Sabrina turn her head hard to the right "K-Kelly! is that you? OH MY GOD KELLY!! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO KELLY!!! YOU MONSTER!!!" Kelly lifeless head still staring to Sabrina, her eyes is blank, her make up is ruined, her mouth opened wide and her saliva is everywhere flooding the floor, in her death Kelly still trying to make Sabrina to scream at as loud at she can with her horrific death "Maybe you will remember this one" The voice said as a head roll in front of her. "JILL!!!! JILL!!!! OH MY GOD!!! OH MY GOOD!!!! OH MYYY GOOOOD!!!! T-THIS CANT BE HAPPENING!!! THIS IS NOT TRUE!!!" Sabrina scream as her nightmarish dream turn out to be reality. "Arent you miss them Pretty One? Dont you impatient to be the beautiful sacrifice for the Master? Now it is your time to meet him. Im sure he will gladly accept you as his concubines" the voodoo man start gripping his garrote real tight, it start biting Sabrina lovely neck. She still processing all the information that suddenly entering her mind, she needs to talk her way out of this or she will end up like two of her friend. "AAAAACCKK!!!! HAAAAAAA.........AAAAAAAACCCCKKKK!!!!" She want to talk back to him but her voice now is replaced by a gagged sound, she try again and again and again, trying to persuade him to let her go but she cant, its not like the man want to let her go anyway. One minute later she start gasped for air, her lungs start begin fresh air from her, but she cant make any air enter her lungs. She began to cry as the situation is really out of her hand. Desperate for mercy Sabrina look up to the only man who can decide her fate. Despite taking pity for Sabrina, the evil man continues keep his firm hand at the grip of his garrote, an instrument that can reveal women face at their ultimate ecstasy before they die. As his grip get tighten, Sabrina tongue have no choice but to sticking out to buy some times "AAAAAHHHH!!!!! AAAAHHHAAAAAAAA ...... HAAAAAAAA ....... NNNHAAAA......... AAAAAAAAAAAA..........NNNNAAAAAAAA...........!!!!". The evil voodoo man get aroused looking at Sabrina eyes who begs to him for mercy "Ladies are so beautiful when they are desperately begs for their life. You want me to let you go right?" He said while sticking out his tongue, Sabrina blinks in agreement. His saliva then accumulate on his tongue and slowly it split and touch Sabrina tongue and enters her mouth. "There now you has taste my mercy, now be a good girl and please your Master. You keep him waiting." Sabrina close her eyes while still crying as his mercy is not what she expected. Then the voodoo man start tighten the garrote real tight on Sabrina, her lovely neck cant take such a violent abuse. Sabrina start to cough and her eyes rolled up, her vision is blur and all her option is fade away. In her last effort she try to accept unavoidable demise as something erotic, painful yet erotic. She turn on so hard her face is become more red both from lack of air and blushing from embarrassment. Her mouth say "OOOOOGGGGHHH!!! NNNNGGGGGHHHH ............ NNNNNNNNNHHHHHHHHH.........!!!! GGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH" in her half-cough sound. She also start to think that both her friend is so lucky can die in such sexy and erotic way with her. Sabrina also thinking how lucky Kelly are, to be able to die in a sexy babydoll, she must be greeted specially for presenting herself in sexy outfit, not like her and Kelly. She cant wait to see her friend again as slowly she can see Kelly and Jill at the feet of her Master. As slowly but steady, Sabrina be able to see her late friend with her new Master, her body in mortal world become still.
Meanwhile the police and Bosley unable to find or rescue any of the Angels in the night, the decide to find it again in the morning. In daylight, they see a hill path, that cant be see with naked eyes in the night. They arrived at the shack not found anyone, or anyone alive. But they did find the basement full of victims head. Bosley hoped that they not find Jill, Kelly, or Sabrina head there, and they not. While the voodoo man and his accomplice has escape through other route with the Angels heads, leaving Bosley scratching his head trying to find three sexy ladies while their bodies is just a half feet under.
-ending-
as my family grow terrified at the voodoo man method of sacrificing women. I'm the only one who doesnt afraid of scared of the things what happen, the 4 years old me. And i got a dream about it several time whenever i remember it.
Maybe i was a victim before this, maybe im was the executioner, maybe i just someone who just pass by who get aroused looking at criminal get execute ...
While the national TV struggle to keep their costumer asking for more show of the Baywatch and Charlie's Angel episode each week, They began to air the copycat of the show.
Surely my 4 year old self didnt remember the title of the show. But let's just give it name as the original Charlie's Angel show.
So the show is not perfectly copy the western TV show, and cast 3 Asian women instead of Caucasian. Their name remain the same Sabrina, Jill, and Kelly.
I watch a lot of episode Charlie's Angel and Baywatch from my national TV show, but only 1 episode and 1 episode only i remember till today.
One morning Sabrina go outside and buy an ice cream for her nephew, at that time, there is this one little girl who looks sad. She try to cheer her up by offering an ice cream to her, but she sobs and start crying, she said "I want my mommy." Then Sabrina ask "where's your mom?" and the little girl continued to cry. Until she able persuade her to show her house.
They both walk 2 block away to her house and talk to her dad that her daughter miss her mom and wonder where her mom could be. Her father is kinda panicked when her girlfriend show up and say that her mom is run away with her boyfriend, leaving her with her daughter. Sabrina would have believed it but she curious for a second having a glimpse at the living room with with the wife picture near the incense and some mystical offering. She grow suspicious that her husband make her own wife a sacrifice to evil spirit to become rich and powerful. She then said to the little "Dont worry i will find your mom, okay." Her husband said "Dont bother Miss, i'm sure she will never back." Sabrina leave the house and contacted Charlie and the other Angels.
After meeting they all agree to help the little one to find her mother. They watch the little girl house, after the girlfriend's father exit the house, they say a man in black javanese outfit enter the house, a man who usually consider a powerful voodoo practitioner. After waiting for hours the man leave the house, they both follow the voodoo man to a shack make of bamboo wood and in the back there is an ugly man with shovel digging the ground, beside him is a woman who is the little girl mother.
The Angel didnt not quite get what the mother do with the dangerous voodoo man and his accomplice. While the Angels decide to wait and see for what will happen, the accomplice ask the woman to jump to the hole in the ground. Then he buried the woman up to her shoulder, leaving only her head above the ground. The Angel become uneasy for the event that about to happen but they remain hiding and hope nothing bad will happen.
The mother of the little girl remain buried in the ground for quite some time until midnight and the moon become full, then the voodoo man ask "The master is ready for you pretty one." The woman reply "But i'm not sure about this Mbah (a call for black magic practitioner)." "Dont worry pretty one, im sure your husband will take a good care of your daughter and they will become rich and all business he has will become successful. Dont you talk about this with your husband too?" "Yes Mbah, if this is what the best for my daughter i'm ready now Mbah." Then the voodoo man circling garrote make of small chains around her head, then he look up to the full-moon and pray to his Master "Oh Master please be kind to accept this woman sacrifice and give her family a luxury life in return." After finished praying he start to choke the little girl mom with his garrote, tighten the chain around her neck, while she cant fight back and feel the chain of the garrote slowly wrapping around her neck, coiling and taking her breath away.
For some minute the Angels not able to move from the horrors they saw. The little girl mother eyes meet with Sabrina, in her helpless state she kinda feel regret and scared, not ready to be sacrificed to an evil entity. In her gasp and gagged she desperately ask Sabrina for help, her tongue sticking out desperate for some air until finally her eyes rolled up and she stop making any sound. The voodoo man finally release his garrote on the poor woman body. Sabrina is cried and scream, rushed to the evil man for what he had done to the now lifeless woman. But Sabrina get bounced of before able to attack him, "Too bad, the moon is not full anymore or i will be able to make another ritual for you nosy bitch!". The voodoo man accomplice quickly get inside to grab a gun, but the Angels quickly retreat and admitting their defeat.
The next morning the Angels come to seek a powerful voodoo witch. The meet with an old lady who be happen to claim to be a powerful witch and can help people from their problem. The Angles consult their problem and somehow the witch agree to help them.
A week later the Angels had decide to infiltrate the voodoo man lair. Jill supposed to be a bait, Kelly distract the accomplice and Sabrina gather information of the voodoo man weakness for the witch to counter him. Jill come with a provocative suit, accompany by Kelly to the voodoo man. Jill manage to gain the voodoo man trust that she want to be a sacrifice in exchange for her parent good fortune, they both continue to talk in the voodoo man bed room for her reason to know him more intimate. It leave Kelly seducing the voodoo man accomplice, she also manage to drag him to his room for a more sexual relationship, Kelly said she love a man who service a black magic. With the two man gone, Sabrina able to sneak successfully to voodoo man underground lair. The air is thick with blood and rotten smell, it was dark even in mid daylight, she light her match and try to find the wall, when suddenly she touch a face, a face of a woman, and beside her is another face of a woman, when her eyes able to adjust with the darkness, she able to see the room is full with the head of the voodoo man victim, including the little girl mom that recently been mounted to the wall. There are a lot of dry blood in the wall painted the wall dark red. Cant handle with the agonizing scenery she saw, she immediately puke and break a bowl from the table. The voodoo man grow suspicious of the sound and become alert. But thanks to her provocative skill Jill is able to convince him it was only a cat or something.
The Angels regroup at their base to learn what they can about the voodoo man. Sabrina is cry and feel sorry for almost blew up their team cover while she learn nothing. Jill and Kelly chill her up. Jill able to gain Intel that the voodoo man always powerful and protected with his master slave from the mystical real all the time, except when he praying to his master, he wont be able to protect himself, or his master will accuse him as disrespect to Him. While Kelly able to learn that his accomplice is dealing with drugs, so he might trap him to police and get both him and the voodoo man for police. While Charlie somehow still not sure the plan might work, he care about bring a justice to a little girl, but he care about her Angel the most. After convincing Charlie about the plan, the group agree that Jill should keep being a bait by saying she agree to be sacrificed in the next full-moon, while Kelly and Sabrina hiding in case the plan goes wrong. Meanwhile Bosley will stay with the witch watching when she should attack the voodoo man with magic.
Skipped to the appointed day, Jill come to the voodoo man shack alone. Sabrina and Kelly hiding in the woods watching her from afar. Arrived at the shack the voodoo man ask her "Do you wear what i told you to wear pretty one?". "Yes Mbah," Jill reply removing her coat showing her body in an attractive babydoll. "Now, that's how to please the Master. Im sure He will reward your parents with good fortune and healthy life." His accomplice finished dug the hole and prepared to bury Jill body. Jill become uneasy to become so helpless in the situation. The others angels are contacting Bosley, He said they are ready. Bosley ask the witch to ready her spell. Voodoo man coils his garrote around Jill neck, and ask "Are you ready to meet your Master pretty one?" Jill suddenly get cold feet and decide to say she is not ready "Can we wait a few minute Mbah?" "Very well pretty one" He reply. Sabrina and Kelly goes panic, The witch is ready to attack the voodoo man, Bosley is told to stop her right away, but she didnt hear anything, she keep chanting her spell and attack the voodoo man while he still protected. The master slave who know the voodoo man about to get attacked by the witch decide to protect him and bounce off the spell to the witch. The witch body cant take the spell and vomit blood at instant and get heart attack. Bosley tell the girl that the witch attack is failed and has bounced of to her. He tell the Angels, to try revive her and need the Angels to buy more time.
Jill look up to now panicked Sabrina and Kelly as the voodoo man say "now already five minute, lets proceed" while he look up to full moon. Jill said "Wait!! Wait Mbah!!" Then suddenly Kelly and Sabrina get out from their cover, saying they want to be a tumbal (sacrifice) too. The voodoo man says "Well is this not the nosy bitch from last time". Sabrina scared and stammered "Sorry for last time Mbah, actually i just sneak in want to be a tumbal (sacrifice) but i get scared when i saw it last time. I want my parents to have a luxury life too Mbah, and make then happy and have long life." "What about you pretty one?" He look up to Kelly. "Me too, Mbah. i just followed my friend and decided that i want to be tumbal (sacrifice) too Mbah." Kelly said. "Very well, you all beautiful ladies, the Master will be happy to accept you in the after life."
The Angel manages to give the team some times while the voodoo man accomplices dig 2 more holes next to Jill. Bosley quickly bring the witch to hospital as she get help, he call cop about a black magic practitioner about to kill 3 ladies in the woods. The police were not trust him, and Bosley said if they are not gonna trust him, they might gonna trust the good witch, and so the police arrive to the hospital to ask question with the witch who still not awake from her weak state.
Meanwhile the voodoo man accomplice is finished dug 2 more holes. The voodoo man the Angels who now naked in the underwear to step inside to each hole. Kelly jump in the middle hole while Sabrina position herself in last. Now the three Angels just position themselves in a very difficult situation. They look at each other while the accomplice bury their body and only leave their heads above the ground. The voodoo man say to them "Well beautiful ladies now is the time for you to meet the Master, please send my regards and be a good women, please his desire in the afterlife and you all should be treated kindly." The voodoo man look up to the moon and start praying "Oh Master please be kind to accept this woman sacrifice and give her family a luxury life in return." "NO!! NOOO!!! PLEASE NO!!! I DONT WANT TO DIE!! NO I DONT WANT TO DIE!!!" Jill freak out as the garrote start biting her neck. Kelly who are next to her cant believe what she just saw, she scream "JILL!!! NOOO!!! PLEASE NO!!!! T-THIS CANT BE HAPPENING!!! THIS CANT BE HAPPENING!!! OH MY GOD!!! JILL NOOO!!!". Jill loud gagged noise deliver more terror to Kelly, while Sabrina speaks "Please Mbah, Please dont take her first. Take me instead. I will give myself as first tumbal (sacrifice)." The voodoo man reply "Dont worry pretty one. I will sacrifice you all, you really are impatient are you?" he said while tighten his grip on the garrote, making Jill suffer in her erotic peril, unable to move, unable to fight back at his assailant, unable to use her athletic move to slip away from her near death situation. Jill still able to look at Kelly in her last effort, their eyes are met and she speak her final whisper in her gagged voice she said "HHHNNNGGGGGHHH!!!! HAAAAAAAA. . . . AAAAAACCCKK!!!! NNNNNNNNNNN .....AAAAAA ..... AAAAAAAAAAAAA...... AAAAAAGGHHH!!!!!". Kelly who watch Jill last moment just a few inches from her is sobbing and her eyes are full of tears, ruining her mascara. Finally Jill eyes is rolled up and she gagged for her last time before finally she was still.
"Nooo.... Jill Im sorry!! Im sorry.... Im so sorry!!!" Kelly feel regret to not be able to help her friend from out of her misery. Then the voodoo man look up to Kelly and he said "Now that your friend is with the Master, you must be cant wait to meet her, right?" as he said while the voodoo man coiling Kelly soft neck. "NOO!! NOOO!!! GET AWAY FROM ME YOU MONSTER!!! GET AWAY OR I SWEAR I WILL FUCKI . . . . . . . EEEEKKK!!!" before Kelly finished cursing him the voodoo man has already tighten the garrote, using it to block her vocal cord bad mouthing him. Kelly is very helpless and in her helpless attempt she look at Sabrina. Sabrina is now unconscious, maybe Jill death is too much for her, or maybe she just decide not to look at their dying friends, or maybe the voodoo man put a spell so she will remain silent. While looking at Sabrina, Kelly get a glimpse of hope. She hear a police siren from a very far far away. She hope that she can scream so the police will hear and help her and Sabrina. She stare at Sabrina who still unconscious in her sleep. She stare so deep hoping that Sabrina will wake up from her stare and scream as loud at she can. After staring for and gagging for a minute at Sabrina, Kelly start to cry uncontrollably. Her vision start to darken while her chest feels so hot. Her lungs start desperate asking her for fresh air, her tongue is sticking out leaking some saliva. Its looks like Kelly is already gone, but for some reason after the voodoo man loosen his garrote she still able to speak some word "HNNAAAAAAA........ AAAAAAAAHHHKKKK!!! OOOOOOO.......... NNNNNNNNNNNNN.........AAAAAAAHHHHHHKKKKKK!!!! NNNNNGGGGGGGGHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAA..........." so he tighten his garrote again on Kelly neck, while somehow the goner lady still try to fight back. The voodoo man make sure Kelly really gone this time, he keep his garrote tight for another minute until Kelly stop dripping saliva from her lousy mouth.
Bosley now ride with the police try to save Jill which he didnt know who already gone, and Kelly too recently, only left with Sabrina. He and the police is ride through the whole forest try to find out where the ladies could be.
Moments later Sabrina wakes up while she feels cold metal chains slithering her neck. She had a nightmare about a woman who she about to save, but she failed to prevent that from happening, and her friend Jill and Kelly captured by and evil voodoo man who put them in the same peril as the late woman. They both screaming asking her help, but somehow she cant move to save them, and they both died from a garrote on their neck while starring at her desperate for help. She open her eyes, she had one hell of nightmarish dream she tried to forgot. The place is dark, she want to rubs her eyes, but somehow she cant. She want to move her body but she cant move anything. She then greeted by an familiar voice "Are you wake up now pretty lady?" She look around to see where the voice come from but she not found anyone. Then voice keep say "You have a beautiful hair, shame i have to let you go..." as the voice right behind her, she can feel the man breath who sniffing her hair. "No, No let me go. . . . who are you? What happening to me?" protest Sabrina. "Are you not remember who am i O'Pretty Lady? look to your right". Sabrina turn her head hard to the right "K-Kelly! is that you? OH MY GOD KELLY!! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO KELLY!!! YOU MONSTER!!!" Kelly lifeless head still staring to Sabrina, her eyes is blank, her make up is ruined, her mouth opened wide and her saliva is everywhere flooding the floor, in her death Kelly still trying to make Sabrina to scream at as loud at she can with her horrific death "Maybe you will remember this one" The voice said as a head roll in front of her. "JILL!!!! JILL!!!! OH MY GOD!!! OH MY GOOD!!!! OH MYYY GOOOOD!!!! T-THIS CANT BE HAPPENING!!! THIS IS NOT TRUE!!!" Sabrina scream as her nightmarish dream turn out to be reality. "Arent you miss them Pretty One? Dont you impatient to be the beautiful sacrifice for the Master? Now it is your time to meet him. Im sure he will gladly accept you as his concubines" the voodoo man start gripping his garrote real tight, it start biting Sabrina lovely neck. She still processing all the information that suddenly entering her mind, she needs to talk her way out of this or she will end up like two of her friend. "AAAAACCKK!!!! HAAAAAAA.........AAAAAAAACCCCKKKK!!!!" She want to talk back to him but her voice now is replaced by a gagged sound, she try again and again and again, trying to persuade him to let her go but she cant, its not like the man want to let her go anyway. One minute later she start gasped for air, her lungs start begin fresh air from her, but she cant make any air enter her lungs. She began to cry as the situation is really out of her hand. Desperate for mercy Sabrina look up to the only man who can decide her fate. Despite taking pity for Sabrina, the evil man continues keep his firm hand at the grip of his garrote, an instrument that can reveal women face at their ultimate ecstasy before they die. As his grip get tighten, Sabrina tongue have no choice but to sticking out to buy some times "AAAAAHHHH!!!!! AAAAHHHAAAAAAAA ...... HAAAAAAAA ....... NNNHAAAA......... AAAAAAAAAAAA..........NNNNAAAAAAAA...........!!!!". The evil voodoo man get aroused looking at Sabrina eyes who begs to him for mercy "Ladies are so beautiful when they are desperately begs for their life. You want me to let you go right?" He said while sticking out his tongue, Sabrina blinks in agreement. His saliva then accumulate on his tongue and slowly it split and touch Sabrina tongue and enters her mouth. "There now you has taste my mercy, now be a good girl and please your Master. You keep him waiting." Sabrina close her eyes while still crying as his mercy is not what she expected. Then the voodoo man start tighten the garrote real tight on Sabrina, her lovely neck cant take such a violent abuse. Sabrina start to cough and her eyes rolled up, her vision is blur and all her option is fade away. In her last effort she try to accept unavoidable demise as something erotic, painful yet erotic. She turn on so hard her face is become more red both from lack of air and blushing from embarrassment. Her mouth say "OOOOOGGGGHHH!!! NNNNGGGGGHHHH ............ NNNNNNNNNHHHHHHHHH.........!!!! GGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH" in her half-cough sound. She also start to think that both her friend is so lucky can die in such sexy and erotic way with her. Sabrina also thinking how lucky Kelly are, to be able to die in a sexy babydoll, she must be greeted specially for presenting herself in sexy outfit, not like her and Kelly. She cant wait to see her friend again as slowly she can see Kelly and Jill at the feet of her Master. As slowly but steady, Sabrina be able to see her late friend with her new Master, her body in mortal world become still.
Meanwhile the police and Bosley unable to find or rescue any of the Angels in the night, the decide to find it again in the morning. In daylight, they see a hill path, that cant be see with naked eyes in the night. They arrived at the shack not found anyone, or anyone alive. But they did find the basement full of victims head. Bosley hoped that they not find Jill, Kelly, or Sabrina head there, and they not. While the voodoo man and his accomplice has escape through other route with the Angels heads, leaving Bosley scratching his head trying to find three sexy ladies while their bodies is just a half feet under.
-ending-
as my family grow terrified at the voodoo man method of sacrificing women. I'm the only one who doesnt afraid of scared of the things what happen, the 4 years old me. And i got a dream about it several time whenever i remember it.
Maybe i was a victim before this, maybe im was the executioner, maybe i just someone who just pass by who get aroused looking at criminal get execute ...
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gecholHobbyist Writer
Ummm... what? I dont get it

malreHobbyist General Artist
ok sorry for not being able to make me understand, it's just a little blurry your story of angel and holes, it's not great like sacrifice a hole no?

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@.@ *confused*
Its a hole on the ground. A ritual of some kind
Its a hole on the ground. A ritual of some kind

malreHobbyist General Artist
yes a hole ,this expect ritual , hair or blood , this real

gecholHobbyist Writer
Umm... tv show. I write it on the story

malreHobbyist General Artist
it's for tv show mww possible


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Idk what mww stands for. But its been mentioned in the end
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Yes... sorry my english is not good enough :3
Do you know which part need to be fixed?
Or all of them?
Do you know which part need to be fixed?
Or all of them?
