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Jacky blinked. Her head felt numb, and she had trouble remembering what had happened to her.
She was at a party, when a nice young woman had offered her a drink. Seeing the cute smile the woman flashed at her, Jacky eagerly accepted.
She had always known that she liked both men and women, although she generally preferred men. She was more likely to comfortably talk to a woman though, especially in a setting like that. She was more ready to trust a woman she didn't know, since they usually were less likely to try to take advantage of you.
They quickly hit it off, sharing a drink at the bar. They had to stand closely together while talking, trying to hear each other over the music. Jacky enjoyed every moment of it. She was very beautiful, and clearly interested in her. She also seemed eager to break the ice, using the social event as a poorly disguised excuse to loosen up with some more alcohol. Jacky wasn't about to complain.
Jacky groaned in the darkness. Where the hell was she? How did she end up there?
As the evening progressed, she started getting more and more drowsy. Worried that she would have trouble holding her liquor, she was about to excuse herself and end a promising evening far too soon, when something strange happened to her.
She tried to get up, when the whole room started to spin. She closed her eyes and held her head, trying to bring the world back into focus. When she slowly tried to open her eyes again, she saw the ground jump up to meet her, and everything went dark.
Jacky tried to sit up, startled at her sudden flash of memory. She realized she was unable to move. She was lying on her side, with her arms tied behind her back. Her panic slowly building, she started wimpering softly.
Suddenly the room was flooded with bright light, and Jacky was blinded for a moment. Blinking away the sting in her eyes, she saw a man walking into the room, smiling at her. She was lying on a smooth hard wood floor, and she was naked. When she saw his eyes, slowly appraising her body calmly, she felt utterly exposed. She was still working up the courage to ask this strange man what the hell he was doing, when someone else walked into the room.
Her heart nearly broke, when it turned out to be that beautiful woman she met the day before. The woman walked up to the man, flashing her radiant smile at him. She hugged him tightly from behind as he was staring at her. "Do you like her?" she asked him, expectantly.
"Oh hon, she is absolutely perfect!" the man gushed, breaking into a grin. He turned around, grabbed a hold of the woman, and kissed her passionately.
The kiss lasted for several minutes, and Jacky started getting almost as uncomfortable about witnessing that, as she did about being held against her will. Clearly these two got along really well, but why was Jacky there with them? The fact that she was naked seemed to suggest something there, but Jacky was far too traumatized about her abduction to be able to enjoy that idea as she normally might have.
The two lovers finally stopped kissing, and the woman pulled the man along by his hand, walking out of sight.
A few moments later, the woman was back in view again, pausing to look down at Jacky. "Get up." she said. Far too scared of what might happen to her, Jacky didn't even consider disobeying. She got up slowly and awkwardly, her hands tied behind her and her muscles stiff. She winced, as she slowly maneuvered herself upright. Fortunately they hadn't tied her feet together.
Standing there, slightly wobbly and uncertain what was next, she stared straight into the eyes of the woman. Those beautiful eyes looked at her, almost lovingly studying Jacky's face.
"Turn around."
Jacky slowly obliged, careful to keep her fragile balance. When she finally looked up, her heart skipped a few beats. In front of her a noose dangled ominously. She didn't see the expectant look in the man's eyes. She didn't see the office chair, positioned below the noose. She didn't even see the wooden frame, used as a makeshift gallows, or the plastic sheet laid out below it. The noose filled all her vision, a grim statement to condemn her.
She was shoved forward, and she stumbled. She carefully got up on the chair, which was very unsteady. She was in a daze, her shock completely overriding her ability to think or react. Her mind shut down and her body was left on auto pilot, doing as it was told.
She stood there, the chair wobbling slightly below her feet. With her hands still tied behind her back, her whole body tensed, trying desperately to hold her balance. She finally noticed the man, looking at her intently. He just sat there on a comfy looking couch, relaxing. The cold gleam in his eyes shifted, as his gaze followed the hands of his lover. She took the noose, and slowly draped it over Jacky's head. Still far too terrified to put up a fight, she started sobbing softly. "Please," she wimpered, "please don't."
"I'm sorry, love," the woman's voice purred behind her, "but you are part of tonight's entertainment." She tightened the noose and deftly placed the knot behind Jacky's ear. She pulled the other end of the rope over a pulley on the frame, and took out the slack. She then methodically tied off the rope, and left Jacky standing there, uncomfortably aware of the danger she was in.
She picked up another length of rope from the floor, and proceeded to tie one end to the middle column of the office chair. Uncoiling the rope as she went, she walked over to the couch. She sat down next to the man, gave him another passionate kiss, and looked into his eyes.
"Happy anniversary, love." she said, and handed over the rope.
Jacky paniced as she saw the man reeling in the rope with a cold smile on his face. He stopped when the rope became taut, holding it just on the edge of unbalancing her. While he was looking at Jacky, the woman kissed the side of his face, and run her hands over his body.
Her hands quickly found their way to his crotch, and moments later the man had closed his eyes in exstacy, while his lover's mouth worked it's magic.
Normally Jacky would have enjoyed such a show, but now she was staring at the man's face, his eyes still closed in rapture. Would he be satisfied with his pleasure without threatening her life in the process?
His breathing quickly became faster and more ragged, and a hand on his lover's shoulder signed for her to slow down. She understood, and decided to look in on the show while she proceeded. Noticing the woman's attention on Jacky, the man smiled again, and started pulling on the rope.
Suddenly, Jacky started to cry. The chair started to roll away from under her, and panic fully took a hold of her. trying to bend at the waist, she held on for as long as she could, but the noose held her head in place, and her balance was doomed to fail eventually.
The man stared without blinking, and the woman had stopped moving. They both looked at her, transfixed, as she struggled to hold on.
Suddenly her weight shifted, and she lost control. Falling heavily, her neck took the full weight of her body. Her mouth open in a silent scream, she dangled freely for a few moments, her legs frantically tried to find purchase. They flailed about, trying to find the chair that supported her moments ago.
The cruel couple smiled in unison, and the woman continued to drive her lover's pleasure to new heights. The man sighed, smiling up at Jacky. He took in the sight of the tied up woman fighting for her life, relishing the kicking of her feet, the subtle arch of her back, and the way the noose forced her tongue out of her mouth.
He closed his eyes again for a moment, and grunted. "Hold on," he said urgently, and waited for the woman's face to come up again. He just smiled at her.
Jacky, in her violent twitching and struggling, slowly turned away from them, bucking and heaving in her peril. When she eventually turned back to face them, the woman was lying back on the couch. The man had taken his turn to pleasure her, and she looked at Jacky with bliss in her eyes, moaning softly.
Jacky couldn't believe what was happening. Here she was, slowly suffocating, while these two were just going to watch! The fact that they seemed to be distracted from the show more than half of the time didn't really help either. Her lungs burned, as her chest strained to draw in air, but it was useless. Her throat was forced shut under the weight of her body, and the feel of the cool air all around her naked body only served to mock her dying struggle. She was Tantalus, standing up to his lips in water, but dying of thirst.
Roused from her private hell, she once again looked at her executioners. The woman was on the man's lap now, and they both faced her. The enjoyed the sight of Jacky, slowly dying on the noose.
As her vision slowly started to darken at the edges, it became clear to her that she wasn't going to be released. She would die here, dangling helplessly. Her eyes started to roll up in their sockets, her tongue hanging from her mouth. Her legs still twitched uselessly, and her hands curled back, still trying to reach the ropes tying them together.
The soft gagging noises slowly died down, and the lovers looked on, fascinated by her final struggle. They looked on as Jacky finally expired, sagging her head against her limp body.
Overcome with lust, they continued for several hours, leaving Jacky's limp body to hang.
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This story features graphic death, as well as some sexual references. If this offends you in any way, don't read it. If that logic is somehow too complicated for you to figure out, it's safe to assume you shouldn't be reading it either.
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This story features graphic death, as well as some sexual references. If this offends you in any way, don't read it. If that logic is somehow too complicated for you to figure out, it's safe to assume you shouldn't be reading it either.
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abused-toyHobbyist Writer
that was a very good read, i'm still not sure which of the two women i'd like to be!

abused-toyHobbyist Writer
thats an idea!

AuraShamanHobbyist General Artist
...I'm so glad I'm not into killing THIS much...but a fetish for hanging innocent women...? I wish I could scream just how awful that sounds without feeling guilty.

AuraShamanHobbyist General Artist
Yeah, but...still. And I thought my foot fetish was getting bad.

the way i see it.. personally, i know i wouldn't hurt a fly. i know where the line between fantasy and real life lies, and the whole right/wrong argument ends right there for me. And as bizarre as it may sound, some people enjoy the victim side of this fantasy as much as some enjoy the other side... and that's no more wrong, because that still is no more than a fantasy. I certainly won't feel guilty about it.

AuraShamanHobbyist General Artist
Heh...after seeing many "erotic" pictures of women being hung, I would've suggested it was an attraction of the worst. But now you put it that way, it's just another horror fanfiction (with some having ridiculous plots to it XD).
Speaking of which, I've felt similar to foot fetish fanfiction. It just gets on my nerves when a lady, like Cynthia from Pokemon, just flat-out teases me with bare soles covered with ice cream!
Speaking of which, I've felt similar to foot fetish fanfiction. It just gets on my nerves when a lady, like Cynthia from Pokemon, just flat-out teases me with bare soles covered with ice cream!


to be honest, i like ridiculous plots
they do help to reinforce the notion that it's just a fantasy, which is quite important to me.
And I, personally, never understood foot fetishes any more than you seem to understand the hanging thing. But guess what? Fetishes don't need to make sense either, and I think most of us do have some unusual fixations that are hard to understand by others or even ourselves sometimes. So be it

And I, personally, never understood foot fetishes any more than you seem to understand the hanging thing. But guess what? Fetishes don't need to make sense either, and I think most of us do have some unusual fixations that are hard to understand by others or even ourselves sometimes. So be it


AuraShamanHobbyist General Artist
I forgot to say something. Our conversation has made me very curious, so I made a journal entry that asks noose fetishists about the physics and their lust for it. Mind you and some of your friends answer my questions?

This was fantastic! So sexy, good thing I was already in my bed when I started to read this!
Hopefully you won't get into trouble for this, it's not like you got graphic with the sex.
She winced, as she slowly maneuvered herself upright. Fortunately they hadn't tied her feet together.
Ah yes, "fortunate" indeed …
In front of her a noose dangled ominously. She didn't see the expectant look in the man's eyes. She didn't see the office chair, positioned below the noose. She didn't even see the wooden frame, used as a makeshift gallows, or the plastic sheet laid out below it. The noose filled all her vision, a grim statement to condemn her.
*laughs* Wonderful!
"Happy anniversary, love." she said, and handed over the rope.
Now THAT is a perfect couple!
Would he be satisfied with his pleasure without threatening her life in the process?
I'm guessing "no."
His breathing quickly became faster and more ragged, and a hand on his lover's shoulder signed for her to slow down. She understood, and decided to look in on the show while she proceeded. Noticing the woman's attention on Jacky, the man smiled again, and started pulling on the rope.
I like this guy a lot. He's got his priorities straight.
When she eventually turned back to face them, the woman was lying back on the couch. The man had taken his turn to pleasure her, and she looked at Jacky with bliss in her eyes, moaning softly.
Whoa whoa whoa! This guy is perfect!
She was Tantalus, standing up to his lips in water, but dying of thirst.
Brownie points for mythology reference!
The soft gagging noises slowly died down, and the lovers looked on, fascinated by her final struggle. They looked on as Jacky finally expired, sagging her head against her limp body.
Overcome with lust, they continued for several hours, leaving Jacky's limp body to hang.
I love happy endings!
Hopefully you won't get into trouble for this, it's not like you got graphic with the sex.
She winced, as she slowly maneuvered herself upright. Fortunately they hadn't tied her feet together.
Ah yes, "fortunate" indeed …
In front of her a noose dangled ominously. She didn't see the expectant look in the man's eyes. She didn't see the office chair, positioned below the noose. She didn't even see the wooden frame, used as a makeshift gallows, or the plastic sheet laid out below it. The noose filled all her vision, a grim statement to condemn her.
*laughs* Wonderful!
"Happy anniversary, love." she said, and handed over the rope.
Now THAT is a perfect couple!
Would he be satisfied with his pleasure without threatening her life in the process?
I'm guessing "no."
His breathing quickly became faster and more ragged, and a hand on his lover's shoulder signed for her to slow down. She understood, and decided to look in on the show while she proceeded. Noticing the woman's attention on Jacky, the man smiled again, and started pulling on the rope.
I like this guy a lot. He's got his priorities straight.
When she eventually turned back to face them, the woman was lying back on the couch. The man had taken his turn to pleasure her, and she looked at Jacky with bliss in her eyes, moaning softly.
Whoa whoa whoa! This guy is perfect!
She was Tantalus, standing up to his lips in water, but dying of thirst.
Brownie points for mythology reference!
The soft gagging noises slowly died down, and the lovers looked on, fascinated by her final struggle. They looked on as Jacky finally expired, sagging her head against her limp body.
Overcome with lust, they continued for several hours, leaving Jacky's limp body to hang.
I love happy endings!

you're too kind
i'm glad to hear you liked the story. I really wanted to try something a little different, though I always enjoy looking for that slightly surreal blend of tenderness and sadistic violence.
So sexy, good thing I was already in my bed when I started to read this!
Instead of responding to that, I'll just stick to grinning like an idiot.
Ah yes, "fortunate" indeed
Yeah, I figured you would like that little preview
Now THAT is a perfect couple!
No shit! It more or less sums up what I was going for. They both enjoy their hanging fetish, and the fact that they can share it like this is actually the kind of blend I like to look for.
I'm guessing "no."
More like "Hell no"
The hanging show was an anniversary gift, and not enjoying that to its fullest is quite rude.
I like this guy a lot. He's got his priorities straight.
Eh. Watching someone hang is fun. Watching it with someone else whom you like, and who gets as turned on by it as you do.. his priorities make a lot of sense.
Whoa whoa whoa! This guy is perfect!
Haha careful now! Some people do like to give themselves a part in their stories you know
and besides it's hardly a selfless act for him. Naturally, he loves doing that to her while she's enjoying the show. Just as long as he doesn't get to miss all of it, especially the ending 
Brownie points for mythology reference!
How about major brownie points for noticing, and appreciating it
Usually I try to keep down the mythology references, since most people really don't get them. It's a pity though, since I really enjoy the subject.
I love happy endings!
Well... how the hell else was this going to end?

So sexy, good thing I was already in my bed when I started to read this!
Instead of responding to that, I'll just stick to grinning like an idiot.

Ah yes, "fortunate" indeed
Yeah, I figured you would like that little preview

Now THAT is a perfect couple!
No shit! It more or less sums up what I was going for. They both enjoy their hanging fetish, and the fact that they can share it like this is actually the kind of blend I like to look for.
I'm guessing "no."
More like "Hell no"

I like this guy a lot. He's got his priorities straight.
Eh. Watching someone hang is fun. Watching it with someone else whom you like, and who gets as turned on by it as you do.. his priorities make a lot of sense.
Whoa whoa whoa! This guy is perfect!
Haha careful now! Some people do like to give themselves a part in their stories you know


Brownie points for mythology reference!
How about major brownie points for noticing, and appreciating it

I love happy endings!
Well... how the hell else was this going to end?


you're too kind i'm glad to hear you liked the story. I really wanted to try something a little different, though I always enjoy looking for that slightly surreal blend of tenderness and sadistic violence.
Well, I really enjoyed this story! Great job, it was incredibly sexy!
Instead of responding to that, I'll just stick to grinning like an idiot.
*laughs* Good idea. But seriously, my reaction to this was "I'll be in my bunk ... oh, wait, I AM in my bunk already!"
Yeah, I figured you would like that little preview
It's always funny in a horrible way when they don't realize what's about to happen to them.
Also, I tend to prefer it when their feet are free.
No shit! It more or less sums up what I was going for. They both enjoy their hanging fetish, and the fact that they can share it like this is actually the kind of blend I like to look for.
There's clearly a huge story that we're not being told, how did they meet, how many hangings have they conducted, etc. And I like that. Makes your story less of a one-shot sexy piece and hints at a bigger picture.
More like "Hell no" The hanging show was an anniversary gift, and not enjoying that to its fullest is quite rude.
Indeed!
Eh. Watching someone hang is fun. Watching it with someone else whom you like, and who gets as turned on by it as you do.. his priorities make a lot of sense.
That whole bit was just so hot. Them getting off on it together, watching her dance ... wow ...
Haha careful now! Some people do like to give themselves a part in their stories you know and besides it's hardly a selfless act for him. Naturally, he loves doing that to her while she's enjoying the show.
Yeah, but so often in these kinds of stories, guys aren't into being reciprocal with their actions. Hence I got excited, here's a guy who isn't in it just for himself, he also wants her to be enjoying herself too!
Just as long as he doesn't get to miss all of it, especially the ending
Of course, missing the ending would be a crime.
How about major brownie points for noticing, and appreciating it
*blushes* Kind of a mythology geek, I couldn't NOT comment on that.
Usually I try to keep down the mythology references, since most people really don't get them. It's a pity though, since I really enjoy the subject.
So long as they don't distract, putting a few into your stories doesn't seem like a bad idea. If people don't get them, they can look them up and learn something.
Well... how the hell else was this going to end?
*laughs* Ending any other way would have been rather strange, almost cheating.
Well, I really enjoyed this story! Great job, it was incredibly sexy!
Instead of responding to that, I'll just stick to grinning like an idiot.
*laughs* Good idea. But seriously, my reaction to this was "I'll be in my bunk ... oh, wait, I AM in my bunk already!"
Yeah, I figured you would like that little preview
It's always funny in a horrible way when they don't realize what's about to happen to them.
Also, I tend to prefer it when their feet are free.
No shit! It more or less sums up what I was going for. They both enjoy their hanging fetish, and the fact that they can share it like this is actually the kind of blend I like to look for.
There's clearly a huge story that we're not being told, how did they meet, how many hangings have they conducted, etc. And I like that. Makes your story less of a one-shot sexy piece and hints at a bigger picture.
More like "Hell no" The hanging show was an anniversary gift, and not enjoying that to its fullest is quite rude.
Indeed!
Eh. Watching someone hang is fun. Watching it with someone else whom you like, and who gets as turned on by it as you do.. his priorities make a lot of sense.
That whole bit was just so hot. Them getting off on it together, watching her dance ... wow ...
Haha careful now! Some people do like to give themselves a part in their stories you know and besides it's hardly a selfless act for him. Naturally, he loves doing that to her while she's enjoying the show.
Yeah, but so often in these kinds of stories, guys aren't into being reciprocal with their actions. Hence I got excited, here's a guy who isn't in it just for himself, he also wants her to be enjoying herself too!
Just as long as he doesn't get to miss all of it, especially the ending
Of course, missing the ending would be a crime.
How about major brownie points for noticing, and appreciating it
*blushes* Kind of a mythology geek, I couldn't NOT comment on that.
Usually I try to keep down the mythology references, since most people really don't get them. It's a pity though, since I really enjoy the subject.
So long as they don't distract, putting a few into your stories doesn't seem like a bad idea. If people don't get them, they can look them up and learn something.
Well... how the hell else was this going to end?
*laughs* Ending any other way would have been rather strange, almost cheating.

Good idea. But seriously, my reaction to this was "I'll be in my bunk ... oh, wait, I AM in my bunk already!"
Great, now I'll have that grin stuck to my face for hours.
It's always funny in a horrible way when they don't realize what's about to happen to them.
I kinda like the idea of the author and the reader sharing a secret that the victim doesn't know about. The reader sees the mention of a plastic sheet and instantly knows that it's quite serious, though the victim doesn't even notice it at first.
There's clearly a huge story that we're not being told, how did they meet, how many hangings have they conducted, etc. And I like that. Makes your story less of a one-shot sexy piece and hints at a bigger picture.
Also, I think it's a better way to make a short story feel real. There's always a bigger picture to something in real life, and hinting at it makes more sense than suggesting it doesn't exist. If that makes sense
It's also a hell of a lot easier to make it work, but I think it's a lot like using a bit of innuendo instead of describing sex in great detail. Innuendo isn't just a great song, it's also a great way to engage the reader, and let them fill in the blanks.
That whole bit was just so hot. Them getting off on it together, watching her dance ... wow ...
These stories are usually just fantasies in written form, at least mine are. The rest of the story was mostly just introduction for that part, and kind of grew around that idea.
Yeah, but so often in these kinds of stories, guys aren't into being reciprocal with their actions.
Maybe. I'm not going to suggest I'm above writing something about that, but it would be a story where the woman would be a victim. This story was a lot different, since one of the things I hint at is genuine love between the characters. Two of them anyway
This may sound strange, but I think the idea of love can really add a lot to something like this, not just because of the fun contrast with their cruelty. They love each other, and share that moment. Also, some guys do actually enjoy doing that for a girl, you know 
Kind of a mythology geek

Great, now I'll have that grin stuck to my face for hours.
It's always funny in a horrible way when they don't realize what's about to happen to them.
I kinda like the idea of the author and the reader sharing a secret that the victim doesn't know about. The reader sees the mention of a plastic sheet and instantly knows that it's quite serious, though the victim doesn't even notice it at first.
There's clearly a huge story that we're not being told, how did they meet, how many hangings have they conducted, etc. And I like that. Makes your story less of a one-shot sexy piece and hints at a bigger picture.
Also, I think it's a better way to make a short story feel real. There's always a bigger picture to something in real life, and hinting at it makes more sense than suggesting it doesn't exist. If that makes sense

That whole bit was just so hot. Them getting off on it together, watching her dance ... wow ...
These stories are usually just fantasies in written form, at least mine are. The rest of the story was mostly just introduction for that part, and kind of grew around that idea.
Yeah, but so often in these kinds of stories, guys aren't into being reciprocal with their actions.
Maybe. I'm not going to suggest I'm above writing something about that, but it would be a story where the woman would be a victim. This story was a lot different, since one of the things I hint at is genuine love between the characters. Two of them anyway


Kind of a mythology geek


Great, now I'll have that grin stuck to my face for hours.
*laughs* You do that!
I kinda like the idea of the author and the reader sharing a secret that the victim doesn't know about. The reader sees the mention of a plastic sheet and instantly knows that it's quite serious, though the victim doesn't even notice it at first.
That is a lot of fun, I agree!
Also, I think it's a better way to make a short story feel real. There's always a bigger picture to something in real life, and hinting at it makes more sense than suggesting it doesn't exist. If that makes sense It's also a hell of a lot easier to make it work, but I think it's a lot like using a bit of innuendo instead of describing sex in great detail. Innuendo isn't just a great song, it's also a great way to engage the reader, and let them fill in the blanks.
Makes perfect sense to me! (Then again, I do write a lot. Not so much stories like this, but I do write a lot.)
These stories are usually just fantasies in written form, at least mine are. The rest of the story was mostly just introduction for that part, and kind of grew around that idea.
Oh, it always is, isn't it? Building up and creating the scenario for the noosedance ...
This story was a lot different, since one of the things I hint at is genuine love between the characters. Two of them anyway This may sound strange, but I think the idea of love can really add a lot to something like this, not just because of the fun contrast with their cruelty. They love each other, and share that moment.
That is kinda strange, but I enjoyed it quite a lot here. Much more fun than a random sadistic executioner hanging a woman for their own enjoyment.
Also, some guys do actually enjoy doing that for a girl, you know
I know! I just find that in so many of these stories or art, the guys don't care about the woman's pleasure at all, whether she's watching or hanging.
*laughs* You do that!
I kinda like the idea of the author and the reader sharing a secret that the victim doesn't know about. The reader sees the mention of a plastic sheet and instantly knows that it's quite serious, though the victim doesn't even notice it at first.
That is a lot of fun, I agree!
Also, I think it's a better way to make a short story feel real. There's always a bigger picture to something in real life, and hinting at it makes more sense than suggesting it doesn't exist. If that makes sense It's also a hell of a lot easier to make it work, but I think it's a lot like using a bit of innuendo instead of describing sex in great detail. Innuendo isn't just a great song, it's also a great way to engage the reader, and let them fill in the blanks.
Makes perfect sense to me! (Then again, I do write a lot. Not so much stories like this, but I do write a lot.)
These stories are usually just fantasies in written form, at least mine are. The rest of the story was mostly just introduction for that part, and kind of grew around that idea.
Oh, it always is, isn't it? Building up and creating the scenario for the noosedance ...
This story was a lot different, since one of the things I hint at is genuine love between the characters. Two of them anyway This may sound strange, but I think the idea of love can really add a lot to something like this, not just because of the fun contrast with their cruelty. They love each other, and share that moment.
That is kinda strange, but I enjoyed it quite a lot here. Much more fun than a random sadistic executioner hanging a woman for their own enjoyment.
Also, some guys do actually enjoy doing that for a girl, you know
I know! I just find that in so many of these stories or art, the guys don't care about the woman's pleasure at all, whether she's watching or hanging.

Makes perfect sense to me! (Then again, I do write a lot. Not so much stories like this, but I do write a lot.)
Well I really never did that much writing myself, not until I got on dA anyway. I gotta say I do enjoy the process.
Oh, it always is, isn't it? Building up and creating the scenario for the noosedance
I like the difference between that and having a picture. Pictures usually leave a lot to the imagination, which is nice in its own way. The great thing about writing a story like this is that the story isn't as much up to interpretation, which can be interesting too. Slightly less like daydreaming, and slightly more like watching a movie, or reading a book obviously.
That is kinda strange, but I enjoyed it quite a lot here. Much more fun than a random sadistic executioner hanging a woman for their own enjoyment.
Strange is good. I like adding something that feels at least borderline surreal. Though you don't see it in this story, I also have a thing for consensual acts. Consensual vore or snuff, which is strange by most standards but makes for some interesting fantasies. On the other hand, two people having loving sex while enjoying a sadistically cruel fetish.. that's another enticingly strange image
I know! I just find that in so many of these stories or art, the guys don't care about the woman's pleasure at all, whether she's watching or hanging.
Well hey, I'm not saying I'm above writing something like that, but it really wasn't what I was going for with this. And like I said, it fits into the rest of the story.
I think you may like the other hanging story too. It's definately a different kind of set up, and it was inspired by one of Spookiie's best pics
Well I really never did that much writing myself, not until I got on dA anyway. I gotta say I do enjoy the process.
Oh, it always is, isn't it? Building up and creating the scenario for the noosedance
I like the difference between that and having a picture. Pictures usually leave a lot to the imagination, which is nice in its own way. The great thing about writing a story like this is that the story isn't as much up to interpretation, which can be interesting too. Slightly less like daydreaming, and slightly more like watching a movie, or reading a book obviously.
That is kinda strange, but I enjoyed it quite a lot here. Much more fun than a random sadistic executioner hanging a woman for their own enjoyment.
Strange is good. I like adding something that feels at least borderline surreal. Though you don't see it in this story, I also have a thing for consensual acts. Consensual vore or snuff, which is strange by most standards but makes for some interesting fantasies. On the other hand, two people having loving sex while enjoying a sadistically cruel fetish.. that's another enticingly strange image

I know! I just find that in so many of these stories or art, the guys don't care about the woman's pleasure at all, whether she's watching or hanging.
Well hey, I'm not saying I'm above writing something like that, but it really wasn't what I was going for with this. And like I said, it fits into the rest of the story.
I think you may like the other hanging story too. It's definately a different kind of set up, and it was inspired by one of Spookiie's best pics
