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Monique just returned to her apartment and she only had 90 minutes to prepare herself to the show. She started with technical matters and turned on the computer, logged in to her account on the tightnoose.com/live encrypted website, connected with live lobby and then began to set up a dozen cameras from different angles and close-ups. When she finished she had little more than 45 minutes to the show. Monique quickly ran to the bathroom.

She looked at her reflection in the mirror then she made the best make-up and the most beautiful hairstyle that the time limit allowed and quietly said to herself. "You are going to do great". After that she started to strip naked quickly. "I'm pretty sure they want to watch me naked" Monique though to herself when she left the bathroom and went to the bedroom. 

Picking up the handcuffs from the bedside table and stood under the noose of a brand new wi-fi supported Noose-O-Matic 2001, which stood in front of the computer.
"I can not believe I'm doing it. I gave the word, I can not withdraw. Not now. Not 2 minutes before my performance" she though to herself. 

Then she clasped one the cuffs on her right wrist leaving the other free, she firmly grabbed the loop with both hands. Monique placed the noose tightly around her neck and quickly cuffed her left wrist behind her back. After this there was no retreat, there was no time for second thoughts. It was too late and Monique was fully aware of this. Live-stream was going on in three, two and one. 

"How nice of you that you have prepared everything!" woman said, voice of a mature woman.

"This has never happened before, I'm really impressed girl!" different woman said, voice was younger and melodic.

"I am very pleased to hear it, considering the circumstances" said Monique with devious smile.

"Monique, listen to me. My friend and I have an interesting offer for you" mature woman said.

"Yes? I'm listening" Monique answered with real curiosity in her voice despite her situation.

"Great! So when you get lifted, you must maintain consciousness for at least 30 seconds. If you do, I promise that you will be lowered down. Unfortunately there is a condition... You have to kick very hard for those 30   seconds. If you will hesitate, lose strength, pass out, or for any other reason you stop kicking end of the offer which means you die in the noose" mature woman said.

Monique nodded in affirmation and a second later the winch that was responsible for pulling up the rope started. Monique had about 30 centimeters of excess rope, which was rapidly decreasing. She was aware of this and two seconds before she was pulled up she managed to catch large breath of air.

Noose tightened around Monique's neck which caused that she gagged loudly as noose was mercilessly started blocking the airways and pressing the veins in her neck.

Now she was happier than ever, that she did not positioned noose knot right behind her head but next to her left ear. For a second Monique hung motionless with an expression of pain on her face and at the same moment she remembered that he must fight the noose and make a show, the best performance in her life. It gave her the hope that will come out of this alive. She looked at the monitor as the timer started.

* 30 seconds *
"It's only 30 seconds, I can do it" Monique though to herself as she strongly kicked her legs forward and backward several times making her body swing in the noose. She felt how much effort and precious oxygen her dance cost and her face turned red. Her hands were cuffed but still tried to reach the noose, vainly. Loud sound of the metallic crackle of the steel chain from the handcuffs spread around the room same as Monique's loud wheeze noises trying to catch breath of a fresh air.

* 15 seconds *
"I'm going to make it... " Monique though as weakened but desperately continued to kick her knees forward but significantly slower. Her hands also weakened, the sounds of chains were  getting quieter. Her face turned dark red and the fear on her face changed to desperation as the sounds she made also became quieter. Her tongue hung out of her open mouth and saliva began to drain on her chest.

* 5 seconds *
"I can do it! I can do it! Just few more seconds!" Monique's kicks turned into quick feet movements resembling a ballerina in the air. This caused her arms to start turning slightly left and right what moved her breasts in a collision movement. Her cuffed hands hung limply behind her back and only slight metallic clicks were heard. Her face has remained dark red. Monique's eyes and face were fully focused on the monitor and the ongoing countdown. Her noises were almost muted. She felt her legs were filling with lead, her lungs burning, her vision falling into darkness...

"WOW! Monique! You really managed to hold 30 seconds! We are very impressed. None of the previous girls whom we proposed this offer could manage to withstand 30 seconds. You bravely fought the noose but unfortunately you kicked too weak. Which means you are going to die in the noose. Goodbye, Monique!" woman said with melodic voice.

"NOOOO! Lies! Deception! You cheated!" Monique though to herself as she managed to wildly and strongly kick a few more times, her hands fought with handcuffs, her eyes were wide open in disbelief, expression of shock and disbelief on her face. "Try to keep consciousness, don't pass out. Fight girl, fight, fi..."

Unfortunately, Monique slowly began to fade. Eyes slowly began to close. Her mouth was open and her tongue hung out and even more saliva dripped on her chest. She managed to gently kick a few more times and and let out one final loud groan before she ran out all of her steam and hung motionless. Monique fade away into darkness. She was gone.

For another minute or two her body twitched while her bladder released on the floor. 

- THE END -
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KaaJi9 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2018
Amazing!
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tootightnoose Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Student Digital Artist
I'm very pleased that you liked it!
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NatalieIsYours Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2018
Me and my sexy socked feet need to meet her 😍
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tootightnoose Featured By Owner Edited Feb 8, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much for commenting but I'm afraid it's too late to meet her.
However, Madeline, Monique's younger sister would be very happy to hang out with you :devilish:
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NatalieIsYours Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2018
Oh!!! Well how can I meet her then 😍 because a couple of girls in cute socks hanging out is a fun time 😘
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tootightnoose Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Madeline values her privacy and that's why I will send you a note ^^
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DjEtla Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
You wrote a good story. Good work. The length is about right. Some people post stories that are too long in my opinion -- they'd be better if they were cut down or maybe broken into a few shorter segments. When I post a story here I try not to let it get too long.

Anyway, good work. I hope you'll share more in the future.
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tootightnoose Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2017  Student Digital Artist
DjEtla, thank you so much!
I'm experimenting with lengths a little bit. I hope that in January I will be able to publish more.

Happy New Year! :party:
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pagon564 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 19, 2017
Good story!
How often you plan to post your stories? 
Do you plan to add a bit of sexual activities? 
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tootightnoose Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much!
It's hard to say how often but I will do what I can.
Yes, but first I have to find out the best way how to add the orgasms with the noose theme.
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thinez Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017
Lies Deception! is she related to Saw Gererra ;P, this is great though!
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tootightnoose Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Student Digital Artist
thanks, that was the intention, in my stories I will try to put similar "Easter Eggs"
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montycrusto Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017   Traditional Artist
very good story -well done :clap:
taut writing and well described scenario, good pacing - great start!
I guess a sequel is out of the question :o  but I hope to read more stories from you. :eager:

Oh, and... if it's not too late... welcome to DeviantArt :happybounce:
~monty
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tootightnoose Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :D
As for the sequel, I plan to write it from the perspective of two observing ladies and try to answer the question why they did not keep the offer for Monique.
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montycrusto Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017   Traditional Artist
looking forward to that..  and any other noose-related shenanigans you come up with  :)
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mesterallat Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2017
Beautiful story. Perfect performance. I look forward to the next story.
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tootightnoose Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much :)
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