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This was a terrible idea, thought Marissa.  They shouldnt have broke into four groups, not with a hapless noble that was begging to be attacked by something.  She watched as the curvy princess walked ahead, her shapely body filling out her skin tight white dress nicely.  Marissa's group was in the middle of the pack, with two groups of two 200 meters ahead of them, and Shireens group of three taking up the rear 200 meters behind.  They slowly made their way through the North woods, and were only a few miles from the college.  They were traveling in a small group to reduce attention.  Marissa had really wanted a whole battalion, but "Shireen knows best" was the name of the game.  The woods were beautiful, but dangerous, with all manner of horrible beasts and bandits filling its many miles.

The area they were meandering through was infamous for giant invertebrates, especially giant spiders.  They would be no real problem, as long as the princess didnt wander off alone.  As they progressed, giant webs began to appear in some kf the trees.  "Keep sharp Claire" Marissa said plainly.

Claire was a trainee, but other than her bathing incident, she was very competent.  She took point ahead of the princess, expertly surveying her surroundings with her hand resting on her sword.  Her leather corset and white cloak effectively concealed a very voluptuous body, that Marissa had caught a glimpse of during her shaming.  One of the qualifications to join the college was a standard of beauty, which Claire definitely met.  Marissa was a knockout herself, with long, light brown hair, a beautiful face, and a body that some women would kill for.  

Claire led Marissa and the princess through the heavily webbed section of the northwoods.  Marissa called a halt, and glanced around.  The sunlight cast beautiful light off of her form fitting black channeling suit.  She felt deeply unsettled, as something was wrong with their surroundings.  They had plenty of run ins with giant spiders, and even spiderkin, but these webs were different.  She stuck her staff into a thick strand of them to test their strength.  They were thin, almost sheetlike in appearance, and incredibly sticky and strong.  They had a stretch to them, but they didnt rip at any point as the pulled on them with the staff.  She definitely didnt want to fall into them, or run into what created them. 

They couldnt proceed on the main road, as there was a huge web of the silk blocking the beaten path, and it would be difficult to go around without getting tangled.  Marissa wondered how the others got through it, and realized that it must have been put up in the last couple of minutes.  They would have heard commotion of they were taken, and would have run into them if it had been here for some time.

  Claire drew her shortsword and swung at a section of the webbing, with no real effect.  The razor sharp sword sliced through a small portion of the silk, before getting gummed up and rendered temporarily useless.  She pulled hard on the sword, but it was now a permanent fixture in the web.  She didnt want to risk getting herself caught in it, so she decided to just get assistance from Shireen when they inevitably caught up.  Shireen wouldnt be happy, but better than risking getting stuck herself again.  There was much embarrassment to be had when she got caught undressing alone by the river by a Giant spider several months prior.  It had halfway wrapped her in a disgusting cocoon before being confronted by college gaurds. Shireen brought out her whole stalking group to ridicule her after killing the spider.  She was left wrapped up and strung up in the courtyard for the afternoon as punishment for leaving the grounds for a dip in the river without informing anyone.  She had vivid memories of the event, and never wanted to be trussed up like that ever again.  The silk had concealed her privates, and her ample chest, but left her dangling feet for passerbys to tickle relentlessly. 

As she shuddered at her flashback, she heard rustling in the undergrowth behind them.  She turned around lightning fast, just in time to see a huge net of spider silk being shot at all 3 of them.  It was spewing from the chest of one of the most horrific beasts she had ever seen.  The silk immediately tangled all 3 girls, the force sticking them to the webbing behind them.

After the spraying cone of web ended, the beast was in full view.  It was easily twice as tall as the girls, and heavily muscled with 6 powerful arms.  It was covered in a thick fur, and had a cluster of red eyes.  Its mouth was a circular shape, lined with razor sharp teeth, and salivating with a sticky drool.  It chuckled with a unnaturally deep voice at the girls predicament.

The beast strode up to them, and towered over the web.  Marissa attempted to raise her staff, and ready a spell, but it was violently wrenched from her hand, and tossed it into the forest.  All of the girls struggled in the web, but were completely stuck fast.  The webbing clung to them, and restricted their movements to mere struggles.  "Let us go beast!"  Claire grunted.  The princess was in shock, as she had never seen a real monster before.  She looked up in horror, unable to process what was happening.  Marissa tried to kick at the beast, but the beast had the density of a brick wall.

The beast stood in front of the girls, drool leaking from its maw, and leaned down.  "Welcome to my home, my sweets" it said with a grin.  "Your college took my humanity, but I will take far more".  It ran a finger down the princess's face, making her shudder.  "This one looks like royalty, I think I'll consume her first.  Ive never tasted high born"  The girls began struggling more vigorously, now that the creatures intentions were clear.  "Heheheh, look at you.  You think escape is still an option.  There will be no escape...".  His mouth opened wide, and a longue, mucous covered tongue began to slither out like some horrible serpent.  At the end of the tongue was another circular mouth, with a row of dull triangular teeth.
The horrible maw opened into a funnel shape, and closed several times, as if stretching.  The tongue lowered down to the princess's face, breathing foul smelling air at her.  It was heavily salivating, and she could see down into it.  Inside was a spasming tube of gooey flesh, lined with mucous.  It sputtered and burped, and she began whimpering and crying.  The other girls kept squirming, but their attention was on the tongue.

It slowly moved above her head, and hovered there for a moment.  Drool dripped onto her beautiful long brown hair, and doen onto her body.  Her grey green eyes were opened wide in horror as she gazed into the tunnel of slimy flesh above her.  The maw opened a bit, and struck the top of her head with a loud slap, and immediately began stretching over the top of her head, and thats when she started screaming.  An ear splitting shreak eminated from the princess as the tongue began to work its way down her face.  Drool ran down her head, and onto her skin tight dress.  The scream was interrupted by the tongue which quickly sucked in the rest of her head.  Her protests were mostly reduced to a muffled high pitched noise, her voice obscured by the tongue.  The tongue lingered with just her head inside for a moment, making the girls wonder what was going to happen.  Would it decapitate her, or suck her brains out?  "Please, let her go!" both girls repeatedly cried.  A rough visage could be seen where her face was making an impression in the tongue.

Their questions were answered as the tongue spasmed twice before opening wide to stretch around her feminine shoulders.  There was a horrible sucking sound as the tongue continued its work, moving down her squirming form.  It pulsed again before stretching over her ample chest, leaving a bust shaped bulge in the tongue that bounced up and down with ever sucking motion.  The princess struggled uselessly as the tongue pulled her up out of the webbing with incredible strength, sending strands of silk snapping as they reached their tearing point.

The two escorts tried to grab the princess, but were powerless to stop what was happening.  They yelled and protested, but the beast kept slurping.  The tongue began spasming more rapidly, quickly sucking her in as her legs kicked in the air.  Drool ran down her shapely ass, and legs, and with two more spasms, she was in up to her waist.  Her legs violently kicked in the air as the beast lifted her horizontally, sending both of her shoes flying off.  As the tongue worked over her big hips and ass, a clearer shape of her womanly form was protruding through its flesh.  Two more gulps, and only her legs below the knees were visible.

Marissa quietly muttered "oh god..." as the tongue spasmed again, with the princess's perfect feet and wriggling toes mere inches from her face.  One final spasm, and she was entirely inside the tongue.  She was still producing a high pitched scream, muffled by the tongue.  Her form was visible as the tongue waved in the air.  With a horrible gulping sound, her body began moving towards the beasts main mouth somewhat slowly.  The tongue wiggled in the air as the curvy form traveled through it, stretching the pink flesh.  As it reached the mouth, the shape paused for a brief moment.  The monsters neck and jawline stretched to huge proportions to accommodate the incoming meal.  The other girls looked on in horror as they could clearly see the princess's horrified expression through the tongue's flesh for one last time.  With one last large gulp, the shape disappeared down into the beasts throat, silencing the muffled screams with an awful, prolonged slurp.  The tongue slowly receded into the beasts mouth afterwards, dripping drool onto the ground.

The beasts stomach became distended as the princess filled and stretched it, with her limbs and face ocassionaly pressing against it, creating a horrifying silhouette.  The beast rubbed its belly gently, and let out a long a disgusting burp right into Claire's face.  She turned away from the monster and began to beg and plead.   "Now that I have eaten, an introduction is in order.  My name is Ghrolath, and you are mine now."  "No amount of whimpering will save you.  You are food, or a toy to me now, nothing more."  He grabbed Clair with two of his huge arms, and tore her from the web.  The strands previously restricting her stretched for a solid meter before snapping.

"You see, for better or worse, I am full.  But I cant just have you thrashing around, and having a small chance of escape. I need to cocoon at least one of you, or our journey will be more stressful for me." he said with a grin. She thrashed and squirmed with all of her might, but the beast was monstrously strong, and had six huge arms to control her with.  He grabbed her corset, and roughly  sliced it with his claws, sending leather and cloth tatters to the ground.  He then roughly pulled each of her boots off, throwing them aside.

He held her for a moment, looking at her shapely and perfect body.  She was wearing nothing but white underwear and leggings at this point, and was totally overpowered.  She was absolutely beautiful, as were the other two girls, and every woman he had seen from the college.  She had long black hair, and grey blue eyes, and had a perfectly delicious curvy body, with large breasts, hips, small waist and a plump ass.  "You are very beautiful my sweet, perhaps I will eat you last" he quipped.  Ghrolath remembered his old human desires, but they were long gone, replaced by something far more sinister.  She squirmed in his arms and grunted, but he was incredibly powerful.  She was struggling as hard as she could while he gently passed her from hand to hand, running his fingers down her scrumptious body.  His longue tongue shot out, and stuck to her stomach.  She wimpered as the disgusting, tongue slithered up her belly, and between her breasts, leaving a slimy trail of thick drool dribbling down her body.  It stopped at her neck, spasming once to cough up a big wad of warm, sticky flem that messily dribbled down into her cleavage.  She turned her head away in disgust and terror as the tongue slimed the whole side of her face, and then hovered in front of her for a moment, quivering before letting out another sickening and foul smelling burp.

She began shaking with absolute horror at the thought of being devoured like the princess was, swallowed alive by this horrible beast.  "I beg you Ghrolath, please spare us.  We will do anything you desire, just please dont eat us".  Ghrolath pulled his tongue back in, much to her surprise.  He let out a deep chuckle, before he spoke.  "You are as ignorant as you are gorgeous my dear, you are already doing what I want and need you to do."  "Keep begging and struggling, its all you are good for".  He grabbed both of her arms, and forced both of her legs together before adding: "Thats enough out of you, I want some variety".  He moved her legs in front of his chest, where there was a large group of spinnerettes that were shifting and preparing silk.  "Get a good look at these surroundings, they will be the last thing you ever see.  I will wrap you from head to toe in a tight, inescapable cocoon, before devouring you alive like your friends" the beast uttered.

Ghrolath lifted Claire up so that her legs were directly in front of his chest.  A wide, flat stream of opaque cream colored liquid silk sprayed out, attaching to Claire's ankle.  It left the spinnerettes as a liquid, but solidified into a sheetlike fabric almost instantly.  Without delay, Ghrolath spun her around a couple of times, wrapping the wide band of silk fairly tightly around her feet and ankles.  She tried and tried to struggle, but he was immensely strong.  With her silk wrapping started and anchored Ghrolath pulled her away from him as he continued to spin her, drastically tightening the silk.  She winced in discomfort as the extremely tight silk stretched over her body, snaking up her bucking form.  Her feet were so tightly wrapped that her individual toes were visible.  It tightly compressed her knees, thighs, and then tightly wrapped over her large ass and hips in two revolutions.  The silk was skin tight, and accentuated her curves perfectly.  He was methodical, and in less than a minute, she was wrapped up to her waist in ultra tight silk.  "Stop please, its so tight!" Claire cried.  "On the plus side, your ass looks wonderful" Ghrolath said with a fiendish grin. Marissa looked on in horror, stil unable to free herself, or reach her staff.  She was unable to cast any spells without it, other than some lesser healing abilities, none of which would help here.

Ghrolath forced Claire's arms to her sides after the band had wrapped over her midsection, with her hands flat against her hips.  The material was so snug that her bellybutton was visible beneath it.  The band of silk sealed her upper arms and shoulders to her, and covered her large, bouncing breasts in a couple of passes.  Claire cried out again, pleading her captor to stop.  Ghrolath was focused, and unphased by his preys attempts and cries.  He moved her so that the webbing went back down her body, further compressing her chest, and sealing her hands to her hips.  It snaked back up, wrapping around her neck as he shifted her.  She let out a final cry of "No ple" before the silk wrapped around her head and face several times, gagging her quite effectively, and reducing her scream to a muffled "MMMMMMMPH".  Her facial expression was quite visible beneath the tight coating of silk, with her mouth stretching the fabric as she tried to scream. 

Ghrolath quickly and effectively wrapped her in another skintight layer over the next couple of minutes for good measure, skillfully passing her from hand to hand and rotating her like a parcel.  She moaned and tried to yell as the silk squeezed her curves, accentuating her body further.  In less than a minute, Claire has been completely cocooned, and rendered helpless.
 
When he was finished, he gazed upon her for a moment.  Her cocoon was a masterpiece, as always.  He had become very proficient in his skillful wrapping, and it was a source of pride for him.  He threw the poor girl over his shoulder, and then turned his attention on Marissa.

He threw his newly cocooned meal over his shoulder, and bent down to scoop Marissa out of the web.  She screamed and kicked, but was no match for his strength.  He roughly tore her out of the webbing with a snap, and tossed her over his other shoulder.  Marissa punched and kicked at her foe, but his body was incredibly dense.  He simply ignored her strikes, and carried the pair of women away into the forest.

Marissa screamed for a time, hoping her allies would hear her.  Her voice became hoarse after awhile, and she gave up.  Her group was probably already tracking them. The beast carried them for over a mile through the undergrowth, and the forest became progressively darker and more silk covered.  Thick bands of the material streched between trees and rocks, and rendered the area almost impassable.  The beast must have had help, or a long period of time to set up such a huge network of webs.  "Where are you taking us?" Marissa asked.  "To one of my larders, my sweet" he replied bluntly.  

The thought made Marissa quiver.  He was taking them to some sort of horrible storage, where he could keep them until he was ready to eat them.  She thought of the princess, who was probably half digested by now as far she knew, and thought of Claire.  She glanced over at Claire, looking upon her tightly wrapped form in horror.  She was still squirming to her credit, Claire was always a fighter.  She thrashed wildly the entire way, muffled protests eminating from her silk gagged mouth.  Marissa couldnt help but admire the beasts handiwork, the webbing was more form fitting than even her channeling suit, which was custom fitted.  Claires shocked facial expressions were perfectly visible, and even her ears were making an impression through the thin but strong fabric.

"It will be ok Claire, they will come for us" Marissa said, unsure.  Claire simply replied "Mmmmmph" weakly through her gag.  "Im counting on it my sweet.  Your beautiful cohorts will make a lovely addition to my home.  I have even discovered from one of your "lost" guards, that the valuable Shireen would be here.  She divulged the information on the promise that I would release her, and I ate her anyway" Ghrolath growled.  "You wont get away with this, Shireen will carve you to bits you filthy beast" she replied.  "Mmph!" Claire added aggressively in support.  "Perhaps, perhaps not.  One thing is certain, I will take you two back to my lair, and I will dress you appropriately my beautiful mage.  I hope you enjoy silk."

They arrived at the entrance to a cave, carved into the side of a large rocky hill.  It was dark and secluded, and the entrance could only be seen from one side due to the huge amount of webbing everywhere.  Thick sheets created a silk tunnel towards the entrance.  Human and animal bones littered the cave entrance, with two giant piles right next to the main silk door.

Ghrolath strode up to the door, which was a large sheet stretched over the cave opening, and sliced a hole with his finger.  He ducked through the opening before sealing the entrance back up with a quick shot of silk.  Marissa's eyes adjusted slowly to the dimly lit lair.  The only light was coming through the semi transparent silk door.  The cave was fairly small, less than a few meters from end to end, and was covered in webbing.  Large pillars and sheets of silk stretched from floor to ceiling, and bones littered the ground.  

"Home sweet home" Ghrolath chuckled.  He lifted Claire's squirming form off is shoulder, before slapping her tightly wrapped ass fairly hard with a free hand.  She yelled through the silk in pain, and started thrashing hard again.
"Don't go too far" he laughed as he gently placed her cocooned body on the sticky cave floor.  She bucked and kicked, but even the default stickyness of the floor was enough to anchor her in place.

"Now it's your turn my curvy prize" he growled as he released Marissa from his hands.  She fell to the cave floor, and before she could stand up, he grabbed her arm.  "Please no, I wont go anywhere!" she cried.  "I know you wont, because Im going to wrap you with silk until you can barely breath" he replied.  He shot a band of silk at her feet, the liquid splashing briefly, before cooling and contracting.  She squirmed and protested weakly, as she knew it was no use.  Marissa began crying, and stopped struggling, maybe he would be more merciful and gentle if she didnt fight him.

She was wrong.  Ghrolath picked her up, and with machinelike movements began to wrap her with the same tightness as he did Claire.  The silk wound up her snug clothed body, and was even tighter than her rubberlike channeling suit.  He was less cermonious with Marissa, wrapping her from her toes to her hips in half the time.  She sobbed as he spun her, wrapping the off white material around her shapely ass.  He forced her arms behind her back before the wide silk sealed them to her, and crossed over to wrap her chest.  As she spun, she caught glimpses of the princess shoving her face into the beasts belly wall.  A grotesque impression of her face and hands protruded through the skin.

Ghrolath stopped wrapping at her shoulders, before forcing her face to his chest.  She was face to face with the princess, through the beasts flesh anyway.  Ghrolath pushed their faces together, horrifying Marissa to the core. "That is your future my sweet.  After she is digested, I will devour you and your friends." he said.  "Please Ghrolath, I have rich family, and connections.  I can get you whatever you want." she whimpered.  "Its always the same.  You weak humans say the same thing before I silence you.  Be quiet and enjoy the sounds of your digesting friend" he growled with annoyance.  He moved her to his chest, and wrapped her head and neck several times, before wrapping her squirming body with another layer.  She weakly protested, but stopped after he stopped spinning her.  She had already watched Claire struggle for a long time with no effect, and decided to save her energy.  All she could do was wait for rescue. The silk was extremely tight, but not as uncomfortable as some of the clothes she owned.  It was very soft at least, with the consistency of fine silk fabric, without the slipperyness.  It had effectively gagged, blindfolded her, and reduced her hearing.  All she could do was squirm uselessly, and grunt unintelligibly. 

He placed both of the cocooned women in a web, taking a moment to admire their cocooned forms writhing in the dim light.  His admiration was interrupted by a sound of commotion outside.  He heard a femine voice shouting "Marissa, Claire, Miss Vanderpool, are you in there?"  Ghrolath was surprised and impressed, normally it took the hapless women at least a day to track him.  He quickly composed himself, and hid behind a large sheet of silk.
Consider this a draft, if anyone has anything that they want to add, let me know! More to come!
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FishtanksOfCO Featured By Owner Edited Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I must say, this series has definitely been one of my favorites, and this accompaniment does it justice so well it makes the series even better. I greatly anticipate part 2 of the written series and the final entries in the main series, particularly the cocooning one. Keep up the great ideas! I'm sure many others anticipate the conclusions too. :) It seems this area of interest is less rare than I thought it was.
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2016
Glad you enjoy it!  I am dedicating some time to get some of part 2 written today.
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FishtanksOfCO Featured By Owner Edited Dec 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I look forward to its release. :)
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Sharpeltini Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2016
look forward to the continuation.
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
Soon!
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iGxproto Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
I love that you made written version. Once the drawings give you the setting and characters, you can let your imagination run wild. Thanks for this!
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2016
Glad you enjoyed it, that means a lot!
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Jokerz-1824 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016
For some reason, I read all of Ghrolath's lines in Tony Jay's voice.
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016
I was thinking super deep, almost demonic lol(think azmodan from diablo 3), but that honestly might work too.
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chippsdubbo Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
Awesome; like id said before you are a better writer than you want to admit
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016
Thanks, that means alot! I feel like I used to be better, but I stopped after college.
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Bigbangboom100 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2016
Mmmm...nice. Very nice. Must read more.
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016
Soon :)
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Starskyandhooch Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2016
This is a great companion piece! Well done!
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2016
Thanks!
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upholder Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I can just hear Ghrolath as he leaves the lair full of his bound victims: " Stick around!"
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2016
"Looking for your friends? They're a bit wrapped up in something. I had dinner with one of them though". /cheesy
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upholder Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
" Hands up, who wants not to be eaten?"
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2016
"Speak up! What does "mmmmmmph" mean?" "I invite you to dinner, and you show up under dressed. No worries though, full length, custom form fitted silk dresses are mandatory, and on the house. We have a plethora of comfortable seating."
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CC-Darkside Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
 Good, you've named the other two girls. :P, I also like the addition of a backstory, which for obvious reasons you couldn't include in the commissioned art.  Wasn't it the women themselves who turned Ghrolath into a spider?  I'm curious about that event itself, and a short flashback to that incident might be a fun read, even if a bit short on good old vore. 
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016
Glad you like it!  It wasnt the women depicted here, but Shireen played a part in it.  Maybe Ill have a monologue from ghrolath or something.
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johner2 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016
and this is why everyone liked claire the most in the first part :D.
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016
Im a sucker for curvy black haired white girls, especially with blue or grey eyes, what else can I say?  ;)  Looks like ghrolath liked her quite a bit too.
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Farianvore Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016
Great so far, I just wonder how much of the juicy Princess will be left next part.....
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016
I honestly havent decided.  Part of me likes the idea of her being around a while longer, but the other part of me likes the horror aspect of her being digested during the story.
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chippsdubbo Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
But you already know my feels
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chippsdubbo Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
Its your your story... We will respect (and enjoy) your choice
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Elenanais2000 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooooooh that's just great. The story complements the drawings beautifully! More!

I love the fact that Ghrolath can speak and taunt the doomed girls... It gives a whole feeling of anticipation and adds a lot to their hopeless situation.

The narrative also gives a sense of time... We find out how long it took for Morgan to realize what's about to happen to her before and during her ingestion.

I can't wait for the rest... And I hope we'll see something from the point of view of poor Morgan. That unfortunate girl being slimed to immobilization in the stomach waiting in dread to be digested alive deserves to be revisited. :)
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016
Glad you think so, it means alot!

Yeah, I wanted to change it up from my previous predators.  It just makes the peril more plausible with this many victims too.  Some random spider woukdnt be able to outsmart 5 women.

I doubt we will get much of a pov from the princesa. She is mainly here as the initial vore sexiness, and to scare the hell out of the other girls as she gets slowly digested.
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Elenanais2000 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It depends on the women (cue joke about blondes lol). :)

Of course I think that the princess' point of view is a bit limited, because it's probably pitch black inside Ghrolath's stomach. She must be terrified with all those liquid gurgling sounds around her, then being slathered with slime and immobilized, she must have thought she was actually being digested. I wonder if it was a relief when she realized she was only being prepared for it...

The other girls are effectively blindfolded... Is it mostly an aural experience for them then?
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016
I guess the other girls have a pretty limited visual experience as well. In my head, the princess is gone though . She served to show what happens eventually, nothing more. All the sexy cocoony stuff is just a prelude to the horrifying truth for these girls, that they are now food.
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FascinationJorugumo Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just Love that Story ;DDD
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016
Glad you like it!
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FascinationJorugumo Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep ^__^
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Xandarz Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016
I can help wit the writing if you're interested. Currently working on a collaboration with Seperator on his Sarlacc series.
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016
I appreciate the offer, but Id like to write this one myself.  I would love a critique though if you see something out if whack.
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Xandarz Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2016
No problem I would hope you'll do the same for that series!
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SigmundFries Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016
One thing I really liked about the artwork was the detail in the victims' feet as they were wrapped/swallowed. Could you have a description of those in the story, such as toes wiggling, soles arching, etc? Aside from that I'm really loving this so far! 
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016
Not a huge foot guy, but Ill try to work some more in!
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SigmundFries Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016
Thank you!
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Allard-Liao Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016
My only suggestion would be to add a little more detail to the cocooning scenes.
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016
I agree!  On it!
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amichaelc93 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016
Nice addition! Adds a lot to the images
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Ghrolath4 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016
Thanks, that means alot.
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