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stga: Can you imagine how much this girl kicked and jerked and shuddered as she was strangled?
GaryGurl: Oh yes, only too well! ... I imagine ...


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She was trying to be dignified as they forced her to sit on the garrote and chained her ankles to the post. Despite her nakedness she was trying to be brave. That changed as they latched the collar around her throat. Then she began to panic, squirming and pleading, struggling in place, unable to move due to the shackles and collar keeping her pinned.

Her sentence was read, loudly, as she was starting to wail in fear and scream for mercy at this point. Then the order was given, and the executioner took their place behind the post. The victim, noticing the end was near, shook her head as much as she could, twisting her body from side to side, the collar already holding her neck in place.

The executioner twisted the handle very slightly, not even a half turn.

The victim screamed in utter terror, eyes wide, body slick with sweat, assuming the garrote was tighter than it was. She soon realized she could still breathe, although not move her head anymore, and sobbed.

The executioner waited a moment, allowing the condemned to take in several gasps of air, before turning the handle half a turn.

Her whole body lurched, shackles clanking, bound hands twisting. The condemned's mouth gaped, wheezing dramatically, still breathing, though shallowly now. Her belly heaved and her breasts bobbed. She was starting to be in pain now, true pain, and her eyes watered. She spluttered pleas, which were garbled by her tongue. Her eyes wandered this way and that for someone to beg for mercy. The witnesses gave her no such comfort.

The executioner turned the handle another short turn.

Now the condemned writhed, legs kicking as best they could constrained by the chains, revealing her most intimate parts to the witnesses. Her hips bucked up and down, twisting side to side, lifting her entire body from the garrote post several times. Her arms, tied as they were, stretched out, fingers grasping the air. The garrote slowly forced her tongue out of her mouth, dripping saliva down onto her chest. A very thin and desperate noise issued from her throat: she was still breathing, a very small trickle of air was making its way into her lungs.

The executioner waited quite some time, as the condemned shuddered and struggled in place, movements becoming weaker, that horrible thin sound still persisting. Her shackles rattled as her legs jerked. Cold sweat shone on her skin. The chilly room made her nipples harden, though several of the witnesses were now sweating as if from heat.

The executioner gave the garrote a final twist, and stepped back from the garrote.

The condemned squirmed in place, shackles clanking faintly, eyes wide and watering, staring wildly around the room. Her mouth moved frantically, but no air reached her lungs anymore. Her chest heaved soundlessly and her hips bucked up and down, up and down, and then left to right, left to right.

Her chin began to dip towards her chest, from the pressure of the garrote collar, and her eyelids began to droop.

Her body fluttered slightly one last time, toes wiggling and chest heaving again, and a stream of liquid dripped down along the wooden slat onto the floor beneath her.

She twitched briefly, her toes and fingers mostly, and then fell still.

After several minutes of stillness, the executioner approached and felt for a pulse on her wrist. He found none.
Based on a conversation I had with stga a while ago about an image from the amazing artist bor. Posted at his urging that I share the story publicly. A quick little story.
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mephizzle Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2018
a woman, dying a slow death of suffocation. That will never, ever get old <3 i love it
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moordev60 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2018
Wow. Good strong story. Like the desperation struggles.
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uwe-cowboy Featured By Owner May 31, 2017
very strong and very nice
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2017
Thank you very much!
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uwe-cowboy Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2017
null problemo, i like the garotte
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Mister-Blackwood Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Humiliating
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner May 3, 2017
Yes indeed! A shameful and humiliating display, the garrote is not for those who want a dignified end.
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Nighterrornebula Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016
Nice
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017
Thank you very much! 
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mephizzle Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016
short but sweet :)
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2016
Thank you! : D
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markblloyd Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow. That's incredibly compelling from that quick little aside in our conversations. Thank you! (Big hugs)
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016
Thanks for giving me the push to put it here! ; )
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markblloyd Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Push push push.  ;)
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2016
Well, you have inspired me to write and post a lot more over these past few months ... you must be good for me!
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markblloyd Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You know how we all have that little person with the halo and wings on one shoulder, and the one with the horns and pitchfork on the other?

Well, I'm the later on you.  And the other guy has gone on a long trip unexpectedly.  And that he won't be writing.
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
Ahahahaha. That's a good description! Though did I really need a shoulder devil when I seem to have been corrupting myself for some time? Who knows. 
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markblloyd Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Didn't you know: it's been me, your shoulder devil, the whole time time.  I have this tiny little bright red laptop I use to access DA when you're asleep.....
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DjEtla Featured By Owner Edited Jun 22, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Yikes -- that's a powerful story. Great work. She's forced (against her will) to put on quite a show for the witnesses. It's an undignified way to go, but something I'm sure the onlookers will remember.

There are lots of good part to this story. The most chilling part for me is right after the partial first turn of the handle and her initial panic. She realizes at that point she can still breathe. That has got to feel good in a way. But it also lets her know the overall process will not go quickly, and there’s nothing she can do to speed it up or slow it down.



Did you have a picture in mind when you wrote this? Your story kind of reminds me of this great image: djetla.deviantart.com/art/Anot…
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2016
Yikes -- that's a powerful story. Great work.
Thank you very much!

She's forced (against her will) to put on quite a show for the witnesses. It's an undignified way to go, but something I'm sure the onlookers will remember.
Very undignified, yes, but it's part of the execution. She has to put on a show, whether she wants to or not. And yes, the onlookers will remember this for some time ...

There are lots of good part to this story. The most chilling part for me is right after the partial first turn of the handle and her initial panic. She realizes at that point she can still breathe. That has got to feel good in a way. But it also lets her know the overall process will not go quickly, and there’s nothing she can do to speed it up or slow it down.
Thank you for pointing out your favorite moment, and why! I love feedback like that! 
Yes, that's a very exciting moment. She thinks perhaps it's all over that fast, and then realizes that no, this will be slow and dreadful. 

Did you have a picture in mind when you wrote this? Your story kind of reminds me of this great image: djetla.deviantart.com/art/Anot…
I did have an image in mind, but I can't seem to locate it again, it's lost in a chain of emails. It was similar to that one though. Thank you for the link! 
 
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abrafox Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2016
Nice faith for a pretty naked chick !!!!
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2016
Thanks! I certainly thought so ...
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StefanieWalker Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016
Very well written.
I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing.
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016
Thank you for the comment!

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, I enjoyed writing it. What was your favorite part?
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StefanieWalker Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2016
Its the beginning when she is latched to her final seat. ;)
And the very end, after the last twist of the handle, when she really feels that this will be her end. :horny:
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016
Ooooooo, good choices!

My favorite is when she began to struggle strongly, flailing about as best she could strapped to the post. 
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StefanieWalker Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016
Also a good one, this seems to be the first time she really feels that the end is close. :)
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
Mmmm, yes indeed!
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StefanieWalker Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2016
:)
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hans-muller Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2016
A quite humiliating execution. Intense story, thanks
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016
Very humiliating, yes! That's the goal, it has to be a proper punishment. 

Thank you for the comment!
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russellcattle Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2016
Great story! 
 
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2016
Thanks!
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Gaira69 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Garroting always seems more vulnerable for the victim than even hanging does.  Being strapped down like that and having someone actively turn the arm to crush your neck seems so much more humiliating and helpless.  
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2016
Good points!

Yes, while hanging is rather more visually dramatic, in a larger way, garroting makes the victim more vulnerable and, as you point out, subject to the whims of the executioner entirely. Utterly helpless, can't even struggle as much as they'd like to. At least with hanging you could kick all you liked until your strength left you. 
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dungeonguy59 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2016
A fun surprise running across a well-done short story like this. I think you managed to capture the erotic details that show off a garroting at it's best.
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2016
Thank you very much! I'm writing snippets lately, there are much longer stories in the future I promise ... just no telling when I'll finish them ...

I think you managed to capture the erotic details that show off a garroting at it's best.
Thank you! I'd hoped so, a quick little snapshot of the best details. 
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Muhkuh314 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2016
Really cool story! The world needs more garrottings!
I like how the executioner plays with the condemned.

I guess we should also thank stga for the urging ;)
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2016
Thank you!

Yes I agree, we need more garrottings. They can be very controlled after all, and thus even nastier than a hanging, and there's something rather unsettling about the condemned's feet never really leaving the ground as they strangle. 

I like how the executioner plays with the condemned. 
Me too! Bit of a sadist, but the executioner is also putting on a show for the witnesses, which is what is expected. 

I guess we should also thank stga for the urging
You certainly should!
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Muhkuh314 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2016
Yes I agree, we need more garrottings. They can be very controlled after all, and thus even nastier than a hanging, and there's something rather unsettling about the condemned's feet never really leaving the ground as they strangle. 

Not to forget the interesting (in your story well described!) buckling and squirming that happens on such a device.

  Me too! Bit of a sadist, but the executioner is also putting on a show for the witnesses, which is what is expected.
It seems a requirement for the job and as you said it's also expected!

You certainly should!
Thanks for urging stga!

 
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Savanarola82 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
please read reply to GaryGurl below.
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2016
Not to forget the interesting (in your story well described!) buckling and squirming that happens on such a device.
Thank you very much! And yes, that is a vital part of the execution on such a device!

It seems a requirement for the job and as you said it's also expected!
True, very true. The execution described here is also a performance of sorts, for the witnesses gathered. It is not meant to be quick or painless for the condemned, it is meant to be a show of justice, but still a show. 
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Savanarola82 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There is another fork in the road.  If you will take a look at DannaPearl's....Bondage Chair Animation, you will see a perfect garrote chair bondage.  Her legs are spread to either side of the chair and her ankles pulled up and back so her feet do not touch the floor.  (It can also be done with legs bound together in the middle of the chair with ankles bound and pulled up and back so her feet again are off the floor).

When garroted in this position, the victim...with their feet in the air...feels like they are being hanged.  This leads to stimulating vocal sounds and a long writhing, gurgling, throttling show that is exquisite to watch.   More throat garrotings like that.  

GaryGurl...your garroting was well thought out....and very stimulating.  
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GaryGurl Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2016
There is another fork in the road.  If you will take a look at DannaPearl's....Bondage Chair Animation, you will see a perfect garrote chair bondage.  Her legs are spread to either side of the chair and her ankles pulled up and back so her feet do not touch the floor.  (It can also be done with legs bound together in the middle of the chair with ankles bound and pulled up and back so her feet again are off the floor).
That's a good point! Very true, there are ways to garrote someone with their feet not touching the floor ... 

When garroted in this position, the victim...with their feet in the air...feels like they are being hanged.  
Seems almost rude, to cheat them of a proper hanging and give them the halfway point between a hanging and a garrotting. 

This leads to stimulating vocal sounds and a long writhing, gurgling, throttling show that is exquisite to watch.   More throat garrotings like that.
You paint quite the picture ... lovely idea ...

GaryGurl...your garroting was well thought out....and very stimulating.  
Thank you very much! Happy to entertain!
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