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Alina awoke with a start, continuing her last conscious thought from hours ago that she had to fight the enroaching darkness and get free of the chloroform soaked rag quickly putting her to sleep!  As her glazed eyes slowly focused, she saw the top of her own massive chest bereft of the satin blouse and the extra-support bra she had donned that morning for her excursion into the city and which she last remembered still wearing.  Indeed, a peek past the shelf of her E-cup breasts revealed that her skirt and underwear had also been removed.  The sensation on the soles of her feet and the chill on her legs confirmed that she had been completely denuded in the time she had been unconscious!

The still-drowsy scientist sighed.  As she had surveyed her nakedness, she had also realized something was covering her mouth, and there were bindings on her ankles, wrists, waist, and upper arms.  From the feel against her skin, she surmised duct tape and a quick glance at her wrists bound to the arms of a steel chair confirmed that she was likely correct in every regard.  In almost routine fashion, she wriggled testing the restraints to see if she had been tightly secured.  Her calm assessment belied her understanding of the seriousness of the situation, but was borne from repeated experience.  Whether due to her attitude or her remarkable breast size, and most likely a combination of both, she had found herself to often the subject of such a perilous scenario.

She heard movement in front of her and looked forward for the first time only to find that she was staring at herself.  Approximately five feet away, a mirror had been placed vertically on the floor at a slight tilt to allow her to see her captivity.  She estimated it to be three square feet in area and just above and behind the top she recognized the unmistakable silhouette of a video camera sitting atop a tripod.

From out of the darkness beyond the camera, a voice spoke to her, "Ah, you're awake!  Pleased to meet you."

Alina wouldn't give her captor the satisfication of a muffled response, so he continued, "You are Alina Aguilar-Almanza, widow of Javier Saucedo.  Not a very long-lasting marriage.  You were young and in love, and ran off together.  Have you ever wondered if your life would have been different if he hadn't crossed the wrong people and gotten himself killed?  Then again, what's the point of speculating.  In reality, you've gone on to quite a life of adventure and peril that has ultimately led you to me and to here.  Who am I?  If you live up to your reputation, you may learn my identity.  If not, you won't care!"

Alina saw the red light on the video camera come on and heard the sound of tape being torn into pieces.  Then, the shadowy figure looming in the darkness walked toward her spotlighted location.  He wore a dark cloak over his clothes and a faceless mask to hide his identity from the lens.  Silently, he bent beside her and carefully placed two strips of tape over the bottom of her nose, covering the captive beauty's nostrils.

The fast-thinking scientist had taken a deep breath as soon as she felt the tape being applied, but her effort to expel the air and loosen the tape failed.  Trying to draw another breath, she found that her nasal passage was firmly blocked.  Several more attempts to blow out the air in her lungs, whether through her mouth or nose, were also unsuccessful and the buxom adventurer experienced a rising panic tightening her pneumatic chest!  She watched desperately as her tormentor silently returned to the shadows to stand behind the recording eye of the video camera.  As she struggled to find a means of inhaling, the busty botanist dropped any pretense of stalwartness and screamed at her captor asking why he was killing her!  The garbled sound trapped in her mouth was unintelligible, but pleading wide-eyes conveyed the question!  An answer was not forthcoming.

The need for oxygen rapidly caused her lungs to burn in pain!  No more were testing wriggles of her body against her restraints sufficient.  She threw herself against her bonds with all the force she could muster, trying to kick out her legs, rip her arms free, and pull her body forward!  Squirming attempts to free herself gave way to violent shaking as she expended every ounce of energy she had in her efforts to break loose!  Her enormous tits bounced haphazardly around her chest, smashing into each other, catapulting up, slamming down, mashing into her ribcage, the huge amount of energy she was producing had her sweating like a greased pit-wrestler!

In the midst of her tremendous effort, fate stepped in.  The perspiration rolling down her face had loosened the adhesive of a strip of tape around her right nostril.  Oxygenated air could find its way to her lungs!  Despite her relief, Alina knew her survival depended on a convincing death.  The quick-witted adventurer barely missed a beat in her strenuous undertaking, thrashing against her bonds with renewed force!  She could not have imagined on past occassions when she was on death's door from suffocation that her knowledge would come in so handy in acting out her demise!

Her glistening tits danced obscenely throwing sweat off in every direction in a mesmerizing display of exertion!  Then, she took a beat, straining hard against all her bonds simultaneously!  She opened her eyes as wide as she could and tried to present a gaping mouth beneath the adhering gag.  After a few seconds, she slumped into the chair, seemingly spent, and let her eyes roll up in her head.  Another pause, and then she shook uncontrollably for a few seconds, causing her breasts to slosh around rhythmically.  Alina dropped her chin to her chest and stopped moving for several seconds, before giving another little shake that provided a pleasing jiggle for her captor.  Finally, a last pause of several seconds was followed by a shudder that left her breast meat quivering while she brought her eyes from the back of her head to display a fixed stare.  Carefully inhaling and exhaling with slow breaths only as needed, Alina waited for the silent killer to commence with the disposal of her "corpse."

Time seemed to stand still and minutes passed as she maintained her ruse.  She could hear him moving behind the camera.  More time elapsed.  Finally, he approached her, roughly grabbing her by the hair and lifting her face up to his gaze.  She could see his eyes behind the mask and she was struck with cold horror.  He was suspicious!  He threw her head back down and she did her best to continue with the appearance of limpness, allowing her chin to bounce realistically off her chest.  Alina sensed he was watching her intently.  She didn't breathe, she stayed limp, she kept her stare fixed forward.  He picked her face up again and manually inspected the tape around her mouth and nostrils.  The loose tape was detected!  Her stare allowed her to see his eyes smile as he smoothed the tape down to secure it back in place.  Could he know that it was loose enough for her to breathe?

To Alina's dismay, her attacker pulled a spare piece of tape from his wrist and affixed it over the bottom of her nose to again seal off her nostrils.  A surreptitious check by the terrified botanist verified that she was airtight!  He dropped her head to her chest again and she heard him walk back to his spot behind the camera.  If he was testing to see if she had been unable to breathe, she had to maintain the gambit.  The little adventurer had slowly but steadily been able to fill her lungs before the new piece of tape was affixed.  From past experience, she had about a minute and a half before she would black out from lack of oxygen.  Could she persuade him she was dead and have him remove the tape in that short a period of time?

The busty babe sat limp and unmoving, like an ivory statue, counting seconds in her head.  Unfortunately, her depleted body could not withstand being observed for over two minutes.  Her cells need for oxygen had her involuntarily gasping fruitlessly for air while he remained behind the camera watching!  The twisted scene she had acted out began to play anew, only her discovered skills as a thespian were no longer required!

Once he knew she was alive there was no point in stoically sitting motionless.  Indeed, her body would not let her.  She was instinctively shaking and thrashing and wriggling, her chest heaving, and jiggling and sloshing and bouncing, and she was, very quickly, dying!  Alina could see herself in the mirror as her milky tits moved in waves lapping perversely against the shores of her body!  The edges of her sight began to darken and her flapping tits slapped noisily into each other and her chest!  Her field of vision was narrowing and a spasm wracked her body causing her breasts to shake uncontrollably!  Soon, she could only see the shimmying flesh of her sweat-soaked breasts as all else was darkness, and then a twitch of her body sent her eyes rolling up and blackness enveloped her sight.  Alina's last conscious sensation was a shudder which left her dark orbs staring down blankly at still quivering lifeless flesh.
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Alina awoke with a start, continuing her last conscious thought from hours ago that she had to fight the enroaching darkness and get free of the suffocating predicament that was killing her!  The diminutive damsel with the oversized natural enhancements on her chest slowly focused and realized she was in a hospital bed with intravenous tubes feeding her food and drugs, and electrical wires monitoring her vital signs.  Surrounding her were police officers in uniform and two detectives.

"Ms. Aguilar?  When you're feeling better, we need to talk."

"I'm alive?"

"Yes, luckily for you my partner has been tracking your attacker for years.  His investigation led to your location just after you expired and he was able to resuscitate you just as we arrived!  Unfortunately, in order to rescue you he couldn't follow the suspect so the perpetrator escaped, again, but with your help we hope to be able to get him.  We've never had a live witness to his crimes before now.  Here, I want you to meet my partner, Dan."

"Ah, you're awake!  Pleased to meet you."


The End
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This is by far one of the best peril scenes I have ever read. You managed to keep my eyes on the screen, forced to read with a fast pace, and sympathizing, even identifying with the victim and her desperate predicament.
Your usual ability in choosing a good image to help you render a scene is also notable.
I am essentially a "visual" person, in the sense that I express myself with images, but I have always loved reading.
By consequence I have developed an interest for writers who help the reader visualizing, or even living, a scene. I find that you do this work in a very distinctive and exciting way!
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vision, i take this as how good i could "visualize" the situation, 4.5

originality, sadly, not so much, there's a lot of tape suffocations, if you had made it a live stream on the net, here pieces of tape where added slowly sealing of her airways, then i'd had given a big sparkly 5, but this work, while being a great piece, isn't as original as it could be, 3

technique, how you made that picture i don't know, but the way you made it is delicious! 5!

impact, her fear, desperation, her nearly-in-vain atempt to survive, i could barely stop myself from touching myself, id rate it a 10 if possible


tape suffocation is my #1 way to go, the agony of asphyxiating with air, oxygen, no life just a milimeter away from you is the single most arousing thing (trust me i know, i tried it dozens of times)

i have long thought about what reason i'd give my executioner (and with my style also my rapist) to kill me like this, and now, i find this disapearing, the motivation to write a scene like this just because it is so erotic is very hard to ignore! and all thanks to you!
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abused-toy Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
for my tastes, a woman or girl in distress shouldn't survive unless her captor wants to (thats just my twisted mind) but this piece is just to good to keep that way of thinking, survived or not this was one of the best stories i read in a while!
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Femfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
Oh, you also might like to check out this image and the story with it (it's part of a series of images with a running story) - [link]
Not tape asphyxiation, but hopefully worth a look.
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abused-toy Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i'll take a look at it
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Femfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
Ah, you found this story just as I was suggesting in reply to a comment on one of your images that you should check it out. I'm glad you did. I'm very glad you enjoyed the story and who's to say that her captor wasn't willing to allow her to survive when she gave him a visual delight that bought some time for the possibility of rescue ;-)
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abused-toy Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yes, that is true, but nevertheless, i greatly enjoyed the story
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Femfan1 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
I have a story in mind that, I think, gets at what you desire. Unfortunately, it's in line behind a couple of other stories that I want to finish first. Glad it wasn't clear that she would live. Adds to the suspense.
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SwirledtehSwirl Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Student Writer
Amazing! The only thing I don't quite like was you continuously talking about her tits and how much of a hottie she is. Though, this would definitely persuade many people to think against rape or sexual murderers. In fact, maybe a few rapers out there themselves maybe changed their minds! Well done!
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Femfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012
Thank you! I'm glad it was provoking enough to inspire comment!
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BullittBlank Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Nice work! I love suffocation peril (especially when it doesn't end in death!), and uber-busty victims. Great work on this!
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Femfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
Thanks! She's my favorite OC, so I'm not going to kill her off, but, it seems, I almost always have her in great peril! I'm happy the story was entertaining and that the victim was sufficiently uber-busty!
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BullittBlank Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Nothing wrong with that! Natasha, my own uber-busty character, ends up in peril quite often, as well...
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Femfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
Thanks for drawing my attention and providing a reason to delve more deeply into your gallery than the first page! Glad I did! There's a lot of nice work in there!
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BullittBlank Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
No problem! Feel free to send me a note with any thoughts or responses you have in response to my artwork!
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double-gee Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
Has no one else noticed the last line...? The same words exactly as the villian first spoke...Nice one! Methinks it is not a case of "The End"...
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Femfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
:raiseshand: I noticed ;-) Good observation!
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Sirius-the-Dog Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can't decide if this is meant to be a joke or serious. I'm leaning towards joke because of the excessive use of exclamation points and the hyperbole breasts.
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Femfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
Consider it entertainment for a small niche that likes hyperbolic breasts and exclamation points.
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Femfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
Thank you very much! I'm happy you were entertained and pleased you commented! I've had several requests for a tape gag peril lately and thought I'd comply. I appreciate that the story was generally well-received!
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