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Curia had completely lost track of time as she swam.  She could tell whether it was daytime or nighttime only from the amount of sunlight permeating the ocean’s surface; otherwise, time for the most part ceased to be a concern for her.  She was starting to get acclimated to life as a mermaid, even though most of her thoughts still centered around her desire to be changed back to her normal, Wonder Woman self.

Every now and then she would swim up to the surface, push up, and try to fly; but it was no use.  As Siren had told her so mockingly, ‘mermaids can’t fly’.  Curia finally gave up and focused her energy on swimming.

She knew from the sun’s position in the sky that she was heading west, and from her limited knowledge of geography she thought that if she kept on that course she would eventually hit Australia.  She thought that if she could make it there, hopefully somewhere populated, she could get a message to someone who could help her – Aquaman, or the Justice League, someone – and figure out a way to change back.

One thing that Curia had never thought about before was what mermaids do for food; but she was now getting quite hungry, and she knew she was going to have to find something to eat.  She hadn’t seen a McDonald’s anywhere in the ocean, she laughed to herself, so she was going to have to find her own food somehow.

She swam by a large growth of seaweed near the ocean floor and stopped, reaching out to grab a handful of the green underwater plant.  She took a bite – it wasn’t like the green leafy vegetables she was used to, but it wasn’t half bad, especially given her situation.  As she chewed on the kelp, she glanced down and saw a clam below her.

‘That might be tasty,’ Curia mused as she slipped down to it and carefully pried it open.  With no way to cook the meat, she reached in, pulled it out and slid into her mouth.  It was chewy and actually quite delicious, she thought as she finished it.

Once her appetite had been sated, Curia resumed swimming.  She realized a number of things the farther she swam: first, that the ocean was a LOT bigger than she had realized, and a lot deeper; second, that most of the creatures she passed or encountered didn’t seem to find her presence unusual in the least; and third, that the longer she spent in the ocean, the more at home she felt in it.  There was so much beauty to admire below the ocean surface, and she was looking at it with a far different perspective than ever before.

Finally the water depth began to decrease, which was an indication, she thought, that she was approaching some sort of land.  She started to slow down and approach the surface; finally she was able to make out the shoreline, and her spirits rose.  She started to swim faster again, keeping her head close to the surface, as the coast came even more into focus.  

A couple of hundred yards from the beach, she spotted a group of young women in the water.  She counted – there were eight – and she started to approach.  Even as she did, she felt anxious, nervous; she hadn’t encountered any human beings since her sudden transformation into a mermaid, and she wondered how they would receive her.

The eight girls were splashing and cavorting and oblivious to her as she got closer.  Curia was about to wave, or shout out to them, when she felt a movement behind her.  She turned her head to see a large, black fin rising out of the water.

Curia had seen sharks before, plenty of them lately in fact, but most of them were her size or smaller.  The dorsal fin she was staring at was almost her height all by itself – the shark that owned it must be huge!  She frantically began to swim towards the bikini-clad women.

“Shark!” she shouted.  “Get out of the water!”

The eight beauties heard her scream, saw her waving her arms frantically, and then they saw the fin and panicked, rushing towards the shore as fast as they could.  Curia’s eyes were darting back and forth between them and the fin as she bobbed backwards out of the shark’s path.  The women made it to the beach and quickly scrambled to their feet, out of the water, all staring in shock at the shark which had almost gotten them.

Curia breathed a sigh of relief as she watched the shark fin slow to a stop about twenty feet from the shore.  She couldn’t tell if the shark had noticed her or not, her heroine instincts had kicked in and she had been far more worried about saving the women.  One of them saw Curia’s head above the water and shouted, “Aren’t you getting out too?”

Curia figured this might not be the best time to reveal what she was, so she stayed put, as the women relaxed, safe in the knowledge that the shark couldn’t get them now.  What happened next was completely unexpected.

Eight long tentacles suddenly shot out of the water, moving at a high rate of speed towards the shore.  Before the young women knew what happened, each was caught by one of the tentacles.  As they screamed bloody murder, the tentacles lifted them into the air and pulled them towards the shark, which was emerging from the water.

“Great Hera,” Curia gasped, “there’s a shark AND an octopus here?”  She started swimming towards the shark as it rose out of the water.  As the shark’s body came into view, Curia saw that the tentacles were actually attached to the shark! It wasn’t two sea monsters, it was one!

“A shark-octopus? Sharktopus?” she exclaimed, as the tentacles pulled the panicked girls towards the shark’s opening mouth.  Curia realized that if she didn’t do something, the shark-topus was going to eat them all!

Curia swam as fast as she had ever swam, building up a great deal of momentum; when she got close enough, she leaped into the air and delivered a punch square into the Sharktopus’s head, between its eyes.  The blow was mighty and stunned the creature so badly that it let go of all eight of its prey, letting out a hideous squeal as it fell back into the water.

Realizing they might not be safe for long, the eight women shot towards the shore, running far away from the water’s edge this time.  Meanwhile, Curia wasn’t finished with the creature; she swam after it, grabbing its tentacles two at a time and tying them up in knots.

"There," she smiled as she watched the creature struggle to free itself, "You're not going to be dining on anyone around here today. Now be gone!"  The creature slinked it's way back into the depths.

Curia made her way back to the beach to find it was empty.  "Hello? Is anyone there?" she shouted, but there was no reply, no sound at all. The sun was setting and there wasn’t any sign of the eight women Curia had saved from the sea monster.

"Guess I'll swim along the coast," she sighed, "there has to be someone out there that can help me." And she headed back out to sea, feeling even more like an outcast than before...
The next chapter in my latest story. Curia has been transformed into a mermaid. How will she adjust to her new life?

Curia is my OC. Wonder Woman is the property of DC Comics. Sharktopus is the property of the SyFy Network and this chapter was definitely inspired by those SyFy B-movies. ;)
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Being biased, because I thoroughly enjoy anything ocean-related or with mermaids and whatnot, I had to read this. After skimming the first few lines, I re-read them and found it pleasant to read. Saying that, I'm not overly sure what you want in terms of critique. Do you want structural advice? Would you like advice on wordplay and techniques on how to become a better writer? What would you like to be critiqued on? If so, there are a few things I would point out, but for now I'll just leave it and say, very well done, and completely immersive.
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FairyPrincessJess Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017
Nice one!

"The longer she spent in the ocean, the more at home she felt in it." I noticed the first chapter had a tag for hypnosis. Maybe this is a flow on effect of that? To the point where Curia doesn't want to leave the ocean. And so the Justice League would have to help her out (Just throwing out ideas since you've not finished the story).

I was going to say that it sounded like a B movie as soon as the Shacktopus showed up, but you already mentioned that
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
maybe, that's an idea!!!
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FairyPrincessJess Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
Obviously it's your choice! I'm just trying to help
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I need all the help I can get!!
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TazLooking Featured By Owner May 26, 2016
OK, there has to be more! If she stays in the water too long she will resemble a prune! Actually when you were describing the Sharktopus I was expecting an Orca as they are really big!!!!
The Sharktopus was an interesting twist. I like it so far!
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner May 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Any ideas for how I would continue it? Like I said I've run out of inspiration on this one
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TazLooking Featured By Owner May 26, 2016
Hmmmmm... I'll think about this for a bit. Not sure what to do with a Mermaid. If I come up with something with possibilities I'll send a note.
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KarenGaianni Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2016
Nice chapter!  But that tentacles just want to have some fun!!!!  Maybe they will find their fun with the sexy superheroine mermaid ;)
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I really need to find the motivation to finish this :)
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ClarkSavage Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2016
Curiamaid is a fun idea. It's nice that her heroic nature remains despite the physical transformation.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2015
Love the idea of a superhero transformed into mermaid. She slowly losing her normal self and starts enjoying being a mermaid, similarly as when normal humans are transformed.. Will she even want to go back?
Looking forward to the continuation of this story....
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah at some point I need to be inspired to finish it :)
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saloniko Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2015
good fun
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paws4thot Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015
And the Oscar for "Best use of Sharktopus in a motion picture" goes to :iconwondercuria-dd: 
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!!!!
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LostBrave Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Enjoyed greatly - Thank you :clap:
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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White0wlsuperheroine Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gee  who could have suggested a Sharktopus?  That was unexpected
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I know right? ! ;)
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amazonarrow Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
I want to see a Curianado!  ;P

(Or is it Amazonado... or Wondernado...)
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
LMAO
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CaptainZammo Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay!! cheesy SyFy stuff--Love the Shartopuse and I'm glad to see Wonder Woman hasn't lost ALL her skills
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Me too!! :)
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bob-warden Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015
Well, at least this went well for the girls, and for Curia, since she drove the sea monster away. Too bad for her though, once again she was left alone and at a loss of what to do.
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Still a heroine but still all alone...
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bob-warden Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015
I wonder if she would run into Serena, at some point. She would certainly help her out of her predicament, for the right reward! ;) (Wink) 
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Knight3000 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good story
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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TheStonemiester1 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015
Heh. It's not "Sharknado 3: Oh hell no!" but it's still spectacularly good! ^.^
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Curia-DD Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
LOL thank you :)
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TheStonemiester1 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015
Uhhh...Miss Curia? I know you're probably busy, but this massive crossover I'm working on...I would be honoured if you could write the capture of Blue Blaze. In the finale she and a bunch of other heroines join Curia, Chelsea and Athena in the "Collector"/Toygirl's collection, but it starts with them already brainwashed into being her pretty little toys. You're pretty great at writing heroine peril...
There's absolutely no rush or anything, but I figured since you know Blue Blaze a lot better than I do it could be pretty cool to do
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